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  1. Well, I've decided that I will be the most original person ever and come up with new challenges. Okay, they will be based off other ones and yes, I'm not good at handling complicated things and I also like bouncing around so........

    The next one will be about real life gods in different religions and the challenge will be based off of @Larawolf's one, if you know what I mean 😉.

  2. yEs I need to see what happened to Nibble maybe you could say that he met a winged child around the same age as him and they fell in love. then one of their winged children tries to touch the water, but they instead turn it into lava idk and then they have to flee. they're even more confused when another one of their children similar to Nibble goes near a tree and causes a flood. they realize they have been blessed with powers to control water and fire, and they stay friends, although there's a rocky relationship between them. eventually there's two rival tribes, the winged ones and the water ones. then you take it from there. just thinking.

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  3. Yes, I am jumping on the bandwagon and doing a Warrior Cat Challenge too. But it isn't really going to be a "Divided" playthrough, as I dug through the forums and found this post. I decided to use that save, so credit goes to Taduk for our starters. The format will be the one used in this fanfic. Of course, I am using medicine cat's version as a basis, but my edited ranks and such will be down below.


    Challenge Rules

    Clan Ranks:
    Grand Royal - Leader of a clan. This rank is passed on to whichever Grand Royal Apprentice they think would fit the role. They are forbidden to have a family. They have a lifespan of 42 days (via console :D). 

    Grand Royal Apprentice - First in line to become Grand Royal. They are directly trained by the Grand Royal. The cats in this rank are chosen carefully from kit Royals, the ones chosen having the highest of the most desired skill. The maximum amount of cats in this rank is 3. They have a training lifespan of 39 days, though if they surpass that and the Grand Royal is still alive (or something like that), then new Grand Royal Apprentices are picked and the old ones are bumped down to Royal. Along with the Grand Royal, three of the best Royals, or former Grand Royal Apprentices, will be assigned to each one to help train them.

    Royal - Royals are some of the best warriors in the clan, though they are a last resort in battles. Royals are only allowed to mate with other Royals in order to "purify" the kit. They can't mate with siblings, though, and often they will request to mate with a Royal in another clan so that the kit is very pure. Royals can only have two kits per 6 days, and if they have more, that kit will either be traded to another clan for more pure blood (often what most do), it will be abandoned, killed, or bumped down to the rank of Noble. The latter also applies if there is 10 Royal Apprentices and a Royal has a kit, and the Royal will most likely be either killed or moved down to Commoner or Servant rank if they do so. A cat can only be born in this rank, meaning that no cat from a lower rank can rise to it. They have a lifespan of 40 days.

    Royal Apprentice - There is a limit of 10 Royal Apprentices per clan. Each Royal Apprentice has two mentors, one a Royal and one a Noble. They have a training lifespan of 18 days.

    Noble -  Nobles are the second-best warriors in the clan. Most Medicine Cat Apprentices are chosen from the Noble rank by the current Medicine Cat or Grand Royal, although there have been some exceptions. Noble queens can be chosen to adopt a former Royal kit that has been bumped down for a number of reasons. The queens that are chosen often pamper that kit, neglecting their own kits in the process. The amount of kits a Noble queen can ever have is 3, though if they are chosen to raise a former Royal kit, they are allowed to have 4. Any other kits they have will either be killed, abandoned, or moved down to the rank of Artisan, and the Noble queen that has that kit will be either killed or moved down to Commoner or Servant rank. Occasionally a Noble kit can be chosen to become a Grand Royal apprentice, although this is very rare. Noble is the highest rank a cat can rise to through a series of tests and challenges. They have a lifespan of 36 days. 

    Noble Apprentice - There can be no more than 10 Noble Apprentices in a clan. Each Noble Apprentice has two mentors, a Noble and an Artisan, though occasionally one of those cats can be a Royal. They have a training lifespan of 12 days.

    Medicine Cat - Medicine Cats are exceptions to many rules. For example, the Medicine Cat can order anyone around (even the Grand Royal), if it is for the benefit of the cat's health. They have a lifespan of 81 days.

    Medicine Cat Apprentice - They go through a series of tests in order to become a Medicine Cat. They have a training lifespan of 40 days.

    Artisan - Some Artisans are lucky enough to be picked to become a Medicine Cat Apprentice. Artisan queens can be chosen to adopt Noble kits. Unlike the Nobles, they treat all of their kits equally. Some Artisans can attempt to go through many test and challenges to become a Noble, but most are unable to. Many Artisans actually come from the Commoner rank. Artisan queens can only ever have 3 kits, bla bla bla. They have a lifespan of 30 days.

    Artisan Apprentice - There can be only 10 Artisan Apprentices per clan, bla bla bla. Each Artisan Apprentice has only one mentor, another Artisan. They have a training lifespan of 10 days.

    Commoner - Commoners are known for being weak in battle overall. Commoners can become Artisans through a series of tests and challenges, but if they fail they will become a Servant. Commoner queens can only have 1 kit ever, and if they have any more, the kit will be killed, abandoned, or bumped down to Servant. Same goes for the mother. Commoners are sent out first in battles, then Nobles, then Royals. They have a lifespan of 20 days.

    Commoner Apprentice - Each Commoner Apprentice can have only one mentor, another Commoner, and there can only be 5 Commoner Apprentices per clan, bla bla bla. They have a training lifespan of 8 days. 

    Servant - Any unlucky cat from any rank can become a Servant. Servants have to follow orders from their master or risk death. Servants can serve anyone Noble and higher, but only the Grand Royal can have more than 1 Servant. In fact, the Grand Royal can have as many Servants as they would like. There is no way out of this rank. If a Servant has kits, the kit can either be killed or abandoned, and the Servant mother is killed. They have a lifespan of 40 days.

    Other Rules

    I will use the same generators as in the original challenge.

    Any queen must wait 9 days to have their kit (and by then they MUST have it unless you're a sadist. if they don't have it, they must die), and another 4 before they can do their rank again. If the Medicine Cat deems the queen too weak to do so, they get an extra 2 more days off, but that is it.

    After a queen has a kit, they can no longer rise to any rank.

    Any apprentice can have kits, and the same applies as above, but they get 6 days off and an extra 4 before they begin training again.

    Story

    Here are our starting Nichelings.

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    Here is the Grand Royal of RabbitClan, Goosestar!20181209100818_1.thumb.jpg.8cc55d684f47a480a02cbc1b46945520.jpg

    And the Grand Royal of FernClan, Spottedstar.

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    Finally, we have Grand Royal of DustClan, Otterstar.20181209102309_1.thumb.jpg.e7c0ff90c77891ddc5fa466dcd01edff.jpg

    Then we have a Commoner of FernClan, Aspenwhisker.20181209103115_1.thumb.jpg.fa9ec479dd8568f46cb1f8a394d2507e.jpg

    Before going their separate ways, they agree that, until they have at least 1 cat in each rank, many rules will not be enforced. They also agree to mate with each other to up the ranks of their respective clans.20181209103158_1.thumb.jpg.4eba56c765bd97735c40d20444ee914c.jpg20181209103752_1.thumb.jpg.053bd599d86bc150857682e335cc8803.jpg

    The next day, many begin their move towards their selected territories.20181209104132_1.thumb.jpg.fb10b0cb2dd935f460302ea6cec064cf.jpg

    Goosestar has already made it!20181209104259_1.thumb.jpg.b524a9fb68ec6fc61beeca957cf510ee.jpg

    Otterstar has reached her territory, while Goosestar begins clearing out the area.20181209104457_1.thumb.jpg.b110fd9560df19ca169445a8391d11dc.jpg20181209104502_1.thumb.jpg.0d20a39cb7788fb1a10c55e79fccdf86.jpg

    Aspenwhisker and Spottedstar have ALMOST made it!20181209104659_1.thumb.jpg.5d714ab3cc5e3b48f0c5e26020245fe8.jpg

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    The cats of FernClan are finally in FernClan!20181209105033_1.thumb.jpg.34ee45fe0ef481b1a48cd0f1ae8102b6.jpg20181209105125_1.thumb.jpg.0ff636c95d9a4c34482bdde9f98219f8.jpg

    Next day...20181209105432_1.thumb.jpg.c624dc36c4b9e6f055afa1df4504507e.jpg

    Will the clans survive? Will Otterstar and Spottedstar's children be healthy? Find out...probably this Saturday!

     

     

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  4. Using this Steam discussion, I will be attempting to replicate those Nichelings while doing challenges, some made up by me and some by others. To make it harder for myself, I will be switching save files each time the desired Nicheling dies.

    Current Challenge

    The tribe has a starting limit of four, but they must accept all wanderers, and they up the limit, which is currently six.

    Current Nicheling Goal

    Head: Cracker Jaw

    Eye Color: Green

    Eyes: Shortsighted

    Horns: Black/White Antlers

    Pattern Color: Brown/Brown

    Body: Water Body

    Paws: Claw and Claw

    Hind Legs: Webbed Hind Legs

    Tail: Swimming

    Fur: Grey/Black

    Pattern Type: Mask

    Story

    Ebrahim has his first daughter, and they name her Kai.20181209061422_1.thumb.jpg.e87bad05cd8e433ff736e9f8d46f6635.jpg20181209061810_1.thumb.jpg.8b21a15275b244bb4ff8d8dadf621198.jpg

    Artur is now a child. Unlike his brother/his entire family, he wants to leave the comfort and safety of home to go explore. Ebrahim has to convince Lucine that he'll be fine.20181209063005_1.thumb.jpg.7260b664ccafbf8f4e301f402d6b770f.jpg20181209063155_1.thumb.jpg.b7e0d4b2f6245a8f2e059117290441f2.jpg

    Andrey continues to crack open coconuts while Lucine approaches Ebrahim.

    "What is it?" She asks.

    "...Look, Lucine. I'm nearing my final days. My gems are dimming. I...I would like to have another daughter, if possible," Ebrahim sighs. Lucine agrees.20181209063451_1.thumb.jpg.5dcd0394e5d1fe10b18275ed309947d3.jpg20181209063522_1.thumb.jpg.c3c69e82f42b2f00f5ee881a293d594a.jpg

    Instead of having a daughter, Ebrahim has a son, named Milor. He is basically a living replica of his mother.20181209063654_1.thumb.jpg.14cc1861a3f7b02c0307c7760d23e0b3.jpg20181209063922_1.thumb.jpg.ab89f22349fa77cb2243fe7878107302.jpg Without warning, Ebrahim suddenly lets out all of his feelings, screaming about how he never loved Lucine and how he only wanted daughters and many other things. This kicks off a life-long problem for Milor that makes him nervous in the most ordinary situations. Eventually, everyone is forced to ignore Ebrahim as he continues ranting even when he is out of moves. 20181209064300_1.thumb.jpg.58bb35982a6d99028cfa87cbeb1cf080.jpg20181209064415_1.thumb.jpg.a076f0c442703913cc2f561a50e9ce76.jpg

    Ebrahim passes away, though no one cares too much after the previous day's outburst.20181209064502_1.thumb.jpg.2465ccc170a1ec35f2ae4e6f12474de8.jpg

    Andrey is grown up now, meaning that he can now crack open more coconuts because I NEED CRACKER JAW IN THE MUTATION MENU he can now have a family of his own.20181209064708_1.thumb.jpg.52bc91ee8875fac8c963ef518ae3a1ee.jpg

    Kai decides to run off into the unknown with her brother.20181209065012_1.thumb.jpg.fc410b758132f399ba1060643be60d42.jpg20181209065056_1.thumb.jpg.634a73909f04cc8bf34dbae5252eae73.jpg

    Artur grows up, making Lucine trust him even more and allowing Kai to run off with him.20181209065144_1.thumb.jpg.d4141c00bb1d73fda4d2c8565f3c5078.jpg

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    After being startled by a mole, Milor gets even more anxious and refuses to leave the comfort of home, only clearing grasses.20181209065445_1.thumb.jpg.457d572fa4a1ff4ec29efebfff68c367.jpg20181209065510_1.thumb.jpg.98bf9b8d6bd498199cb431f981b8c1cb.jpg

    Kai and Artur continue to run off.20181209065624_1.thumb.jpg.5f05f2aacd7d35e01a5abd862da89e2f.jpg

    "Mom, the nest is broken!" Milor exclaims with a shaky voice, pointing to the half-destroyed nest. 

    "It'll be okay, dear. It's just more nesting ma-"

    "NO!" Milor yelps, leaping in the way of what would've been a paw swipe. He repairs the nest.20181209065715_1.thumb.jpg.7e3e8d09e71957b6cf1e03634ad247b4.jpg20181209065904_1.thumb.jpg.84dbcf19791ac4efc22fd15076fec6d5.jpg

    Lucine finds comfort in being able to kill the mole, despite only having 1 strength. 20181209070105_1.thumb.jpg.3e949d35d996b38350299a62aa244b4c.jpg20181209070141_1.thumb.jpg.fbcb8716d4347df053405bc979affed3.jpg

    Kai and Artur, both grown up, make some headway into their exploration.

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    Well, I gotta be honest. I am getting pretty bored of this, it being quite uneventful. I may do my own "Clans Divided" playthrough with my own twist on it, or maybe "How much food can you get in 50 days?" or something different. I will do a few Steam Niche Challenges as well. If you want to know my favorite Nichelings from this, then here they are:20181208082202_1.thumb.jpg.3b3aaa534285d5f3e9713fca8e705a75.jpg20181209070839_1.thumb.jpg.8d5db911a4d01ac577342be852dd8496.jpg

    I hope you all enjoyed horny Bearnice, the rivalry between the two brothers, and Ebrahim's outburst before he died! 

     

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  5. Using this Steam discussion, I will be attempting to replicate those Nichelings while doing challenges, some made up by me and some by others. To make it harder for myself, I will be switching save files each time the desired Nicheling dies.

    Current Challenge

    The tribe has a starting limit of four, but they must accept all wanderers, and they up the limit, which is currently six.

    Current Nicheling Goal

    Head: Cracker Jaw

    Eye Color: Green

    Eyes: Shortsighted

    Horns: Black/White Antlers

    Pattern Color: Brown/Brown

    Body: Water Body

    Paws: Claw and Claw

    Hind Legs: Webbed Hind Legs

    Tail: Swimming

    Fur: Grey/Black

    Pattern Type: Mask

    Story

    The next day, Lucine has Drita's last child. Drita names her Anna.20181208161847_1.thumb.jpg.9b4c66b88b0a09990cc39ac4c5587142.jpg20181208162240_1.thumb.jpg.14f7f18ab822a26fa0bb5f54fe4685d3.jpg

    Before anyone can do much else, Leyla and Ebrahim mate and hurry over the stepping stones leading to a new island without looking back.20181208162547_1.thumb.jpg.992e68bfa12426a5d343e070603424a2.jpg

    They find themselves on a huge, sprawling island. 20181208162944_1.thumb.jpg.9198cc57c5d24adbd00476beda938d98.jpg

    Leyla makes a nest, hoping that she is pregnant, while Ebrahim clears out the grass covering his mate before running away from under the coconut tree.20181208163218_1.thumb.jpg.044115c9f75a59a85a39bb9acd428e3d.jpg

    Leyla is quite surprised when she wakes up the next morning to see little Andrey sleeping peacefully by her side. 

    "I didn't even feel anything..." Leyla thinks.20181208163420_1.thumb.jpg.dc84bfb6258ff4f4c2d7fc41bcc121ef.jpg20181208163746_1.thumb.jpg.1ab0b34c3fb3514a410521fde8caa2da.jpg

    They decide to have another child almost immediately after they find a permanent nest nearby.20181208164005_1.thumb.jpg.3c7bfaec79fed6f193f6fe98088cb98d.jpg

    Leyla wakes up soon after she falls asleep, and Artur is born just before dawn.20181208164142_1.thumb.jpg.4e08cc0a1d2d4a400d78502c59e14902.jpg20181208164501_1.thumb.jpg.206983142a99d2309372e12460efa7f7.jpg

    Leyla agrees with a laugh to Ebrahim's proposal to have as many children as possible, and she gets back in the nest Andrey was born in. She stumbles, and is unable to mate with Ebrahim along with accidentally destroying the nes20181208164738_1.thumb.jpg.74e0a160561e8dc24d56959babbd68f3.jpg

    Andrey decides he wants to crack coconuts for a living, and he carefully picks one up and breaks it open.20181208164927_1.thumb.jpg.510608424f7f93489d1bac70002d720e.jpg20181208164940_1.thumb.jpg.a0c722377c53e2ef6941e503936958a8.jpg

    Leyla successfully mates with Ebrahim and makes a new nest. 20181208165100_1.thumb.jpg.e927df5837ec910e4e592c1510b59be9.jpg

    Well I have to go, sorry for the short update! 😅

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  6. Using this Steam discussion, I will be attempting to replicate those Nichelings while doing challenges, some made up by me and some by others. To make it harder for myself, I will be switching save files each time the desired Nicheling dies.

    Current Challenge

    The tribe has a starting limit of four, but they must accept all wanderers, and they up the limit, which is currently four.

    Current Nicheling Goal

    Head: Cracker Jaw

    Eye Color: Green

    Eyes: Shortsighted

    Horns: Black/White Antlers

    Pattern Color: Brown/Brown

    Body: Water Body

    Paws: Claw and Claw

    Hind Legs: Webbed Hind Legs

    Tail: Swimming

    Fur: Grey/Black

    Pattern Type: Mask

    Story

    After running out of food from the berry bush, Drita and Ebrahim begin warily exploring.20181208113024_1.thumb.jpg.7cc10b4f72c3c1963b4bca8f6ccb97fd.jpg

    Many days pass. Ebrahim and Drita have continued exploring, Ebrahim finding a tree where his huge snout can be used. Eventually, while looking around his new-found tree, Ebrahim finds a bright pink wanderer named Lucine. 

    "What's wrong with your fur?" Ebrahim asks, and Lucine sighs.

    "Don't be so rude. Give her some food, she's obviously hungry," Drita tells his younger brother. He reluctantly does so.20181208113843_1.thumb.jpg.da7104fba2b9c02c4ebd0ca472d734d0.jpg20181208113900_1.thumb.jpg.889f8cbdcd56e47ef9ae5cb945c9e5e6.jpg20181208113913_1.thumb.jpg.5e06997d0baa6aaf312c0207ab4e32c0.jpg

    Apparently rudeness was not the only reason Drita told Ebrahim to invite her. He finds her quite attractive, and Lucine goes over to meet him.
    "What happened?" Drita asks, only recieving a sniffle.20181208114137_1.thumb.jpg.f33f2c7b9d2b5f66b8ed1ad158925a00.jpg

    "Shh, it's okay, you can tell me," Drita murmurs soothingly as Lucine begins weeping. After 5 minutes, she wipes her eyes, and begins explaining.

    "I came from a tribe that worshiped anything and everything in the sea. It was customary to drown your children, with only the strongest and smartest ones surviving. I was told by a wandering male that could breathe underwater to eat a plant. I could suddenly breathe, and everyone cheered at me. Then leeches were put all over my skin, and that's...why I look like this, and it's why I have a deformed paw. Everyone did. The wandering male helped me get away, and I...I've been running ever since...how can I trust you?" Lucine cries. The brother's eyes soften, and Drita explains his story.

    "Oh. Well, I guess we are quite similar," Lucine brightens a bit, and they stay together for the rest of the day. This annoys Ebrahim a LOT.20181208114854_1.thumb.jpg.7bdf68e751acf25418f575a639ebe905.jpg

    The next day they are eagerly talking to each other, and Ebrahim rolls his eyes as he cracks open a nut. Drita smiles widely and goes over to Ebrahim. 

    "What?" Ebrahim huffs. 

    "We've decided that we're going to be mates and have a few children...so you're going to have to get off that nest," Drita explains slowly. Ebrahim groans, and gets off.20181208115138_1.thumb.jpg.0c216a48ab1a6ae02b84311e2af45e43.jpg

    Drita returns to Lucine's side, and mates with her. She looks off into the distance.

    "Hm?" Drita asks.

    "Well...I was thinking since we are getting a bit older, that we should wait a few days to see if I really am pregnant," Lucine says finally. This doesn't make much sense to Drita, but he agrees to wait for 3 days. By then, Lucine would have the child, whether she wanted to or not (if she even had one).20181208115348_1.thumb.jpg.de120891a95fb08ad795cf9d01a0f491.jpg

    On the night right before the 20th day, Lucine's face scrunches up. She nods to Drita, and hops into a nest. At the same time, a Bearyena appears. Ebrahim decides that he will help defeat it, but if he doesn't get enough recognition, he will strike it out on his own.20181208123531_1.thumb.jpg.9eb400ca54cc7cbeb1640d554069f96f.jpg

    The brothers leap into action, Ebrahim for one final chance, and Drita to protect his mate.20181208123859_1.thumb.jpg.6aac72c701204817e9da73b7d2f23af7.jpg

    Drita gets attacked badly. Although he isn't bleeding, he now only has 2 days left.20181208144315_1.thumb.jpg.30bb2fa0b1fe650cd931036bdf9afc14.jpg

    He deals the final blow to the Bearyena, not letting Ebrahim even attempt to claw at it. Ebrahim takes this as not being recognized and instead ignored, so he leaves the tribe. 20181208144738_1.thumb.jpg.66c50f4e0967bb09c0884d9211e8e7bb.jpg

    On his way out, Ebrahim encounters a spotty female wanderer named Leyla. 20181208145115_1.thumb.jpg.fec10a209f3ee95579bf67e3bef4a114.jpg

    She explained she was forced out of her tribe because they thought she was the Nicheling form of one of their weather goddesses. When asked to make it rain, she couldn't do so. The goddess was banned from being worshiped, and she was forced out. Ebrahim explains his story, and they soon fall in love. She is invited into his new tribe, where they agree that they should get off this island to get away from Ebrahim's brother's family.20181208145525_1.thumb.jpg.2cf88d09405f9a7b93bf44ffa2110127.jpg20181208145545_1.thumb.jpg.f75da5643b37f1e4d422069ba4b25409.jpg

    They begin making their way towards a nearby port.20181208150114_1.thumb.jpg.9cdaca09e7e7eaeb667251b91019fb60.jpg

    Meanwhile, the first daughter of Drita is born, and they name her Hilargi.20181208145900_1.thumb.jpg.a7923d2134b2610dcefbb6adb9ede0c5.jpg20181208150238_1.thumb.jpg.79f149c922bc5a6e9b1840c3405dfe52.jpg

    Drita asks Lucine to move first before his brother could.

    "...No. Hilargi is too young, I want to have another child with you, and you will die soon due to your valiant defense of me from that bearyena," Lucine shakes her head. Drita sighs, glances at his brother, and nods. Lucine mates with Drita, and makes another nest.

     

    What will happen to Lucine's children? Will Ebrahim and his newly-found mate survive in a possibly dangerous new island? Find out in the next edition of...this!

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  7. Just now, RandomWanderer said:

    The wanderer thing is a really cool idea! Somehow never thought of that, didn't read it among challenge pages, either. It's those things that seem so clear and yet novel that in hindsight, it really makes you wonder. 

    I got the idea from the first post in this thread. I was trying to come up with an original idea, so I clicked on the first post on this forum and saw that. I thought, "How about one of the rules is having to invite all wanderers?" Then I read " The lower your population, the higher the chance" and I thought "How about we have a limit of 4 population?" Then I wanted a connection between them, so I thought of making the limit go higher each wanderer you invite. 

    Thank you by the way.

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  8. Using this Steam discussion, I will be attempting to replicate those Nichelings while doing challenges, some made up by me and some by others. To make it harder for myself, I will be switching save files each time the desired Nicheling dies.

    Current Challenge

    The tribe has a starting limit of four, but they must accept all wanderers, and they up the limit, which is currently four.

    Current Nicheling Goal

    Head: Cracker Jaw

    Eye Color: Green

    Eyes: Shortsighted

    Horns: Black/White Antlers

    Pattern Color: Brown/Brown

    Body: Water Body

    Paws: Claw and Claw

    Hind Legs: Webbed Hind Legs

    Tail: Swimming

    Fur: Grey/Black

    Pattern Type: Mask


    With that out of the way, let's go on with the story!

    Story

    We start out on a Tiny Green Island.20181208081646_1.thumb.jpg.679d480b2112453666bd680c84033f87.jpg

    Here are our two starters, Bearnice and Ateno.20181208082157_1.thumb.jpg.c16546ab0c34936137fb4fb3218ecc04.jpg20181208082202_1.thumb.jpg.f371eb078965e111ca90503f51d9b3c1.jpg

    And, as you can see, Ateno already has Cracker Jaw, Brown Pattern, Swimming Tail, and Black Fur (I already love him so much aaa). Bearnice has recessive Cracker Jaw and White Horns. Bearnice grew up under a tribe that had a huge personality cult over their first leader, which also meant they had a huge tribe. The day before Bearnice became an adult, the tribe began starving to death, and she ran away. At the same time, Ateno was being forced to leave by his tribe, who was quite peaceful and didn't allow any sort of strength in the tribe. Being peaceful, they let him grow up in the tribe while slowly and gently explaining that he had to leave when he was older. Soon, they bumped into each other.

    "Oh my gosh, I'm so sorry miss," Ateno spoke quickly, as he had accidentally knocked Bearnice to the ground.

    "It's fine," Bearnice murmured, brushing herself off. "Wait...who are you?"

    "My name is Ateno, you?"

    "Bearnice," 

    "Like a...Bearyena? Because those things are-"

    "No, that's not what..." Bearnice trailed off, staring into the grass with a distant look in her eyes. "Look, we're here for different reasons, and we can't go back. In order to survive here, we have to help each other and...well, mate with each other,"

    "What about wanderers?" Ateno pointed out, his mother being a former wanderer.

    "Just agree with me, PLEASE." Bearnice huffed. There was a moment of silence as no one moved. 

    "Fine. I always wanted kids anyways," Ateno agreed, mating with Bearnice.

     

    Ateno uses his remaining moves to clear out the grasses surrounding him while Bearnice finds a berry bush and makes her nest next to it, hoping that it worked and that she isn't wasting nesting material and moves.

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    She is correct, as they are awake all night and Drita is born the next day.20181208085656_1.thumb.jpg.8a20be50ddfa9f8015c5a805c6725c1a.jpg20181208084909_1.thumb.jpg.7302102e6be359aa45f04cbf22a84173.jpg

    Bearnice sighs as she hops off the nest and picks a few berries to eat.

    "He looks quite...handsome?" Ateno comments, looking over the sleeping baby.

    All Bearnice does is nod.

    "Ow..." Ateno mumbles as a leech leaps out of the water onto him. "Bea-"

    "Out of moves," Bearnice replies quickly. Ateno groans.

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    A day passes. 

    "Bearnice, I'm BLEEDING!" Ateno pleads.

    "...Fine, but only if you mate with me," She huffs.
    "Okay, okay, fine, just get this off me!" Ateno nods quickly as Bearnice walks over. She removes the leech and licks his wound. "Thanks,"

    Meanwhile, little Drita has just opened his eyes for the first time, and he stumbles off his nest.

     

    Drita is now a young child, probably about 6 years old in human age.

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    "Mom, what should I do?" He asks nervously, faintly remembering the shaky relationship his parents had the previous day.

    "Go find another berry bush or something, just get some food," Bearnice grumbles, and Drita hurries off into the grasses. Ateno mentally notes that she seems more grumpy than usual, but he doesn't say anything about it. Bearnice goes into the nest, hopes that it worked, and picks a few berries in the meantime. Ateno continues clearing the grasses.20181208091304_1.thumb.jpg.fb024923746c4340649f7406684c5da7.jpg

    Luck is on their side. They are once again awake throughout the whole night and around noontime Ebrahim is born. Bearnice takes this as a very bad omen, as he is a male (she wanted a female) and, for the first time that Ateno and Bearnice reached the island, it rains. Ateno instead takes Ebrahim as everything he wanted. Both agree that they should be done having kids for now.20181208091611_1.thumb.jpg.6690910a0d0dc7f0feae5221d19ee1cb.jpg20181208091626_1.thumb.jpg.e4036161fd30fcd46dafd4dd7604678b.jpg

    Drita begins shakily picking a few berries from a bush he found. Bearnice destroys her nest and also picks some berries. Ateno continues clearing the grasses.20181208092039_1.thumb.jpg.daaa97f2939489e2bbabef6b75bfb3c4.jpg

    The first bunny has appeared, and Ateno leaps into action, killing it and eating it. 

    "That could've fed more of us than just you!" Bearnice snaps.

    "Gosh, I'm so sorry," Ateno frowns.20181208092242_1.thumb.jpg.f73904d697b34d6cead66dbf6a613a58.jpg

    Other than the bunny killed, the day continues like the previous.

     

    Drita is now an adult, but that doesn't change his fear for his parents. Ebrahim is now a child, and as he opens his mouth, Drita shakes his head over and over.

    "Mommy, what should-"

    "GO CLEAR SOME GRASSES YOU BLUEBIRD!" Bearnice snaps. "AND FOR YOU, STOP TELLING HIM WHAT TO DO! YOU ARE NOT THE LEADER HERE," Ateno is quite frightened by this, and after killing the bunny the day before, begins to formulate a plan. Now very scared, the two brothers do exactly what they were told to do. At least Drita and Bearnice found new berry bushes.20181208093031_1.thumb.jpg.cb7df0a946ad7fe1c42d4b7cd748bad1.jpg

    The next day, Ateno's plan is ready, and after a night of long mental debate, he has decided to execute it. 

    "RUN!" He yells in the direction of his kids, who do so, hurrying into the grasses. Ateno then leaps onto Bearnice. 

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    "What are you do-" Bearnice is cut off as she is killed. Ateno's eyes go wide, realizing what he has just done. Unable to cope with killing another Nicheling, he kills himself.20181208093548_1.thumb.jpg.c9a61f65c8691dd17ac3e740831752e9.jpg20181208093617_1.thumb.jpg.9120a4d60ca3472424f5e0ff7d87d087.jpg

    "W-wha..what should...should we go..?" Ebrahim stumbles over words after hearing the cries of his parents as they fought. 

    "No. We're never going back there," Drita murmurs solemnly.20181208093840_1.thumb.jpg.a664655e08ac306c888b22df728a7f4f.jpg

    They move away from the area and find a berry bush to satisfy their hunger.20181208093949_1.thumb.jpg.6afab9dc368cf65395038d1456789249.jpg

    Ebrahim has now grown up, and the brothers try to forget everything. 20181208094145_1.thumb.jpg.932b83463f784157424bab2351b09ec9.jpg

    Will Drita and Ebrahim ever forget their childhood? Will they ever find love? Find out in the next edition of...this!20181208094347_1.thumb.jpg.a95544c7ba2822700f5c86c90bdc95d5.jpg

     

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  9. Just now, Jojo said:

    I don't remember the name but it was a warrior cats fanfiction, with one clan PureClan where love was forbidden and they would hunt down the poisoned kittypets (poisoned by love). The story was amazing and the characters, it was just awesome!!!

     

    Is this it?

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