Okay, for the story they are humans and there are still kingdoms but they’re different so I’m not ripping of Wings of Fire.
And when I write stories I first make a fast and non detailed first draft, then continue re writing it until it has enough detail, but not too much. This is what I have already-
Chapter 1
Neus sat on her bed. She was ten years old, living in the Snow Kingdom. She had pasty white skin and light blue hair, much like the other people living in the kingdom. Her parents were in the other room. Probably fighting… like always. She thought bitterly. It was true, her parents fought all the time. She got up and pressed her ear to the door, listening. Their voices were muffled , but she could vaguely hear her mother’s voice.
“Gobi, we need to do this! Think about all the money we’d get if we did!”
What are they talking about?
“Go to the castle and get the queen.” Her mother whispered.
The queen… why is she coming…. She stepped back and fell on the floor. Are they… getting rid of me? Good. I don’t want to see their ugly faces ever again! She got up and stormed out the door and faced her mother.