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  1. 1 minute ago, Flour said:

    She growled slightly but composed herself and walked in

    She was sitting on her bed, reading a book that had come from Pantala, obviously. Before Pantala had started sending things to Pyhrria, all they had were scrolls. When she noticed you, she closed her book.

    ”Hello Neus.”

  2. 1 minute ago, Flour said:

    My Ipad does a weird thing where it will correct some words with quotation marks to different words ex:

    ’’I” will change to ‘it

    Hmm... that’s weird. I write everything on my iPad too but that never happens. I think I have autocorrect turned off, but it’ll still out the red squiggle if I misspell a word.

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  3. Okay, for the story they are humans and there are still kingdoms but they’re different so I’m not ripping of Wings of Fire.

    And when I write stories I first make a fast and non detailed first draft, then continue re writing it until it has enough detail, but not too much. This is what I have already-

    Chapter 1

     

    Neus sat on her bed. She was ten years old, living in the Snow Kingdom. She had pasty white skin and light blue hair, much like the other people living in the kingdom. Her parents were in the other room. Probably fighting… like always. She thought bitterly. It was true, her parents fought all the time. She got up and pressed her ear to the door, listening. Their voices were muffled , but she could vaguely hear her mother’s voice.

    “Gobi, we need to do this! Think about all the money we’d get if we did!”

    What are they talking about? 

    “Go to the castle and get the queen.” Her mother whispered.

    The queen… why is she coming…. She stepped back and fell on the floor. Are they… getting rid of me? Good. I don’t want to see their ugly faces ever again! She got up and stormed out the door and faced her mother.


     

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  4. 3 minutes ago, Flour said:

    ‘’You truly are frustrating. I almost forgot. Anyways it wasn’t important. The only reason I sent her two was because I didn’t mean to send the first one but someone took it off my desk and sent it to her so I wrote another one that was.. I would say better but it wasn’t.’’

    “Well, I don’t have time to deal with you unless it’s important. And I’m not trying to be rude, it’s just very stressful having to run an entire kingdom by myself.”

  5. 2 minutes ago, Flour said:

    Oof I’m sorry that they didn’t like you back

    ‘your said you were going to hang out with me tomorrow- oh also if you ever mention a word about how I acted yesterday I will kill you.’’

    (It’s fine. I don’t like them that way anymore. But I do still like the other girl who I’ve liked since the beginning of the previous school year aka 2019-20202)

    ”Okay. But if you aren’t drunk why do you need me to hang out with you? And, what about Starsearcher? You sent her two letters and she sent you one back. What was that about?”

  6. 3 minutes ago, Flour said:

    (A Starsearcher POV would be awesome and so would a story!

    her head hurt but not as bad as the migraines. She made her way to the throne room

    He was sitting there and sighed as you walked in.

    ”What?”

    1 minute ago, Flour said:

    (Oh wow- I think I’ve only ever told one person I liked them- it was a mistake and I just stopped liking them- it was someone I knew irl and not online-

    (I’ll just post my picture from when I told my crush...)

     

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  7. 1 minute ago, Flour said:

    She glanced away from it, wishing she could just burn it. She tried to force herself out of bed, needing company desperately..

    (I feel like writing a story based on this, except slightly different. Also, should I put a Starsearcher PoV in here at some point?)

    You began walking out the door.

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  8. 1 minute ago, Flour said:

    ‘’Oh my god I am never going to live this down..’’ she said, clutching her bruised sides. She started to wonder if he’d actually visit..

    You sat there wondering, but he never came. You glanced at where you put the letter.

  9. 2 minutes ago, Flour said:

    If it works then skip 1 day

    You fall asleep

    Day

    You awoke, drowsy, but the alcohol had worn off. You remembered what had happened yesterday. The letter and your interaction with the prince. You felt pain from all the bruises.

  10. 2 minutes ago, Flour said:

    I saw one that was two people cosplaying Capra and adora with that audio like 15 minutes ago lol

    ‘’Fineee..’’ she said, stumbling away and falling onto her stomach 

    (Lol)

    You get up and stagger back to your room.

  11. I just saw this tik tok and if was literally Starsearcher in the beginning.

    Star: I’m not lesbian.

    Neus: Then why do you watch the WNBA, hm?

    Star: *breathing* F-... For the.... The plot.

    Neus: *whispers* It’s basketball. What’s the plot?

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