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  1. before i update, i would like to present to you all: Iceskip doing stuff back at camp i know, riveting content
  2. I'll have time update this today, give me like an hour or two- And quick question: Would anyone be up for seeing perspectives in the other clans? Nothing too revealing, just to see what's going on and what cats think of eachother
  3. WOOOO WE FINALLY GOT OUR WIFI BACK SO I CAN UPDATE THIS SOON
  4. Alright I finished it, so to add on to this: Most of the problems are just not putting periods where they should be or using too many periods, but one thing I noticed was that the descriptions of things happening are a bit too simple, if that makes sense? Like: Instead of saying 'she slipped and fell' say something along the lines of 'but she stumbled, losing balance and falling to the ground' or something More of a personal preference, but I enjoy reading it a lot more than a short description That's all I've got for now, it's not amazing but it's not bad by any means either, with some work it could be a good story ^^
  5. I haven't read the whole thing yet, but it is pretty decent so far. The only things I can really criticize right now is commas being where they shouldn't, overly long sentences, and a small story thing: The name 'Night' feels very out of place amongst the more niche (not like the game but the actual word) names that all the other cats have like 'Ghoa', 'Nela' and 'Sereneo'. Not a huge problem, but it did kinda throw me off I haven't read the whole thing yet, but I hope to learn more about how the society works, since so far it gives off Medieval vibes more than anything
  6. Speaking of scripts, here all the ones i dug up from my files (some are older than others) If you haven't read TAS or me and/or Foxy's playthroughs these won't even make sense but I still want to share them because I love writing them 👉👈 (Im just going in the order i found them-) Baby Bride Rag: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1u_nTZChPJhgnA5Hk6SJQqMKCrFX4wbVboehmjXXFzNU/edit?usp=drivesdk (this one's kinda dark-) Boys Will Be Bugs: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vw3y2NoY_C_d3wgxnwpBJvakWiPpYOpFCA2YTebBcvk/edit?usp=drivesdk I Was So Sure: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bAWLgIf-k6YLOoTXdLDXyuDjkvXR8d3MLDy7AZfVCjA/edit?usp=drivesdk (this one's unfinished) "Is It Terrifying?": https://docs.google.com/document/d/15lymm5_UboDXnxZDjYjch42Pu3G29sM4WDp0seFazGo/edit?usp=drivesdk I'm Not a Robot: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e6bhbvuqyF35Zh_1tnaX-o6rHjX9CBC1uYv6ydpu81g/edit?usp=drivesdk (also unfinished) Lovely: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JkUZB48RLlE82B6AigQdr-GA3JSoM8UyO6HWFait8yA/edit?usp=drivesdk (this one's so old i wrote in in a forum chat before a Google Doc) Meteor Showers: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wI3t-BQhU7WpIbGXUeIKNJrxoLeIqATRumfN4JiEAcQ/edit?usp=drivesdk No Romance in My Blood: https://docs.google.com/document/d/139iQnwfCnaC89qCftdIMvlKGaPkMB2cQDQ8D-QK1RaI/edit?usp=drivesdk The Ibis Song (aka Penelope Sucks): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XfIjEb6h5RPI-2Nm4TGvylr3FBT1pipcih29cnc7Ilc/edit?usp=drivesdk (unfinished) Remember?: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rD0quv1i78nN2BzAL0Rh78YalzDYWGWkzJ_EzxuzxEE/edit?usp=drivesdk That Would Be Enough: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZFc8HtItePaaJQkW49nq6Igeuce7r0MsOo7OUrtU1P0/edit?usp=drivesdk Daddy Issues: uhhh im still writing it give me like 10 minutes Im pretty sure i have more lying around but this is all i could find
  7. I mostly just wanted a place to put my scripts and pictures of nichelings for when i needed them that isnt my normal homethread hdhzfdtx
  8. Katumai

    toyhou.se

    Man I remember I was looking for one of these codes for forever because all the cool kids have Toyhouse and nobody wanted to talk to me because I was a loser smh If you ever do get a code somewhere it would be neat if you could send it to me, I've been dying for a place to put my ocs
  9. "Hey, Leon, are you alright? Is something wrong?" .... "Leon?" I was rewatching a bunch of the Danganronpa trials and realized 'wow, i actually like Leon' Anyway, Mr og murder man himself I remember seeing a post somewhere about the actual reason the murderers in Danganronpa snap during the trials us because of the ghosts of their victims haunting them or freak hallucinations of something similar and i just ran with it (Spoilers for the first game below) Leon's death sucked, it was brutal and I really don't think he deserved it. Yes, he killed someone, but it was in self defense and he obviously felt really guilty afterwards. Sayaka would have killed him if he didn't do it it first. I think most don't like him just because he killed Sayaka, to which I say-iiiiiiii dont care. I didn't like Sayaka very much, she was boring at best and annoying at worst. She was literally going to kill Leon and frame Makoto for the murder so she could get everyone killed and escape, and people still fricken defend her with their lives, I just don't get it like damn But then again, I can kinda see it from Sayaka's perspective. She literally saw a video of her best friends dead on a stage, and it obviously took a toll on her. She was paranoid and scared and was in a state where she would do absolutely anything to get back home and make sure they were okay. And as she was dying, she wrote Leon's name next to her on the wall, as what I assume was a final apology to Makoto and everyone else, so they could catch her killer and keep on living. But she was still going to murder someone and frame it on someone who trusted her and considered her his only friend there, and as a result get like, 13 people killed. That's still messed up no matter what way you look at it. man when did i get so passionate about the actions of fictional characters
  10. Katumai

    Heyoni

    : )
  11. (They are, they're called the Four Dark Devas of Destruction)
  12. I have no idea why but the image of Gundham and Jafar being like. some kind of evil duo is great Though im not sure how well they'd get along- (Am i doing this right-)
  13. Oh boy time to google a bunch of photos of characters i havent thought about in years
  14. I would be updating this right now if THERE WAS ANY WIFI
  15. Katumai

    HEY Y'ALL

    Haha losers, im already an expert /j/j/j No but I studied cat genetics a ton in my free time because i had literally nothing better to do and im pretty well educated, but even my dumb self forgets things sometimes, so this is actually helpful hdmfhfgffd
  16. Ah yes, fresh meat. You will do nicely as a member of the forum cult anyways, I'm Kat, welcome to hell
  17. Cant miss the chance to show off my nichelings and go on a tangent in my head about why they're the best! /j/j/j starting off with-..uh yeah i dont have an excuse for this guy's name And his (I think) second cousin, Magina, a really pretty nicheling who's basically become a spirit of wildlife Her father was some random guy that I didn't have enough food to invite in (and, weirdly enough, looked a lot like one of my friend's nichelings), so I just bred one of my females with him before he disappeared and the result was Magina. I'm guessing that wanderer guy had some kind of secret he was keeping, considering Magina's abilities These next few are just nichelings from OBBACL that I really like- if i shoved every nicheling i liked into this post we would be here all day, so I'm gonna stop there for now-
  18. THE ANSWER TO BOTH OF THOSE QUESTIONS IS YES
  19. oh boy, here we go just to be clear: this and the last chapter take place around the same time, but there's been a significant time gap between the ones before that and these two Falconpaw "Falconpaw." "Hm?" "Frostsun, Whitestar and I will be by the tree if you need us." Silverflower spoke gently, sweeping her tail in the direction of Whitestar and the medicine cat. Falconpaw nodded, watching the deputy follow after them. "This place is bigger than camp!" Falconpaw nearly jumped out of his fur at the yelling in his ear, groaning and pinning his ears flat against his head as Featherpaw pushed her way beside him. "Obviously, there's a lot more cats here." Bramblepaw responded, giving her a look. She just rolled her eyes in response, dragging Falconpaw after her as she went deeper. ----------------- "Uh..." Bramblepaw narrowed his eyes, shooting Featherpaw a strange look and shrugging. "I don't see it." "You just have terrible taste!" She snapped back. "You thought that one CrowClan she-cat was pretty!" Bramblepaw pinned his ears back and huffed. "She is!" "She's like, twice our age!" "You're the one who thinks the alien cat is hot!" Falconpaw sighed, blinking boredly at the ground. He wasn't even sure what his siblings were talking about, just that it all started when Featherpaw started fawning over some she-cat apprentice from BrightClan. He never understood his sister's obsession with she-cats, sometimes they were all she talked about, and it wasn't uncommon for her and Bramblepaw to get into disputes about it, sometimes even dragging in poor Hailpaw. Some she-cats were pretty, he guessed, but he never got his littermates' arguments over them. "Hailpaw, what do you think?" Yep. There they go. The grey tom looked up from where he was grooming himself, blinking. "Um, about what? She-cats?" Featherpaw scoffed. "Yes!" Hailpaw stared at his sister for a moment, before shrugging. "Some are alright, I suppose. I don't think about it much." Falconpaw didn't hear whatever was said after that, making a conscious effort to tune out the conversation. As he looked at Hailpaw, his mind wandered to other topics. The tom was only here tonight after constant begging from Featherpaw and Bramblepaw, since Iceskip adamantly refused to attend the gathering. As a result, Hailpaw was the only one here without his mentor. Nobody had wanted to train Hailpaw due to his low stamina and breathing issues, but Iceskip had stepped up and volunteered-which definitely surprised everyone coming from the normally quite aggressive she-cat. I guess she knew what it was like to be different. She had been adjusting to her injuries well enough-from what Falconpaw could see, anyway. Though her blind eye had and impaired vision and coordination skills had caused her to embarrass herself more than a few times while teaching Hailpaw how to hunt. She's trying her best. I suppose. She treats Hailpaw well, at least. Falconpaw's mind drifted from his brother, and he found himself scanning the clearing. Countless cats were on all sides, conversing and a few even playing like kits. It was a bit odd to see, honestly. Something in the crows caught his eye. Two black and white apprentices sat near the edge, quietly talking amongst themselves. Their pelts were glossy and smooth, so he guessed they were probably from BrightClan. They seemed a little...strange. Like they didn't belong their. Looking around, Falconpaw didn't see any other black and white cats. Maybe their parents are back at camp? One of them-the tom-slowly looked on his direction, and before he could even react, something nearly tumbled him over. "Falconpaw, you good? You were spacing off." Falconpaw righted himself and looked up at Bramblepaw, who towered over him with an apologetic look. He had always been a lot smaller compared to his siblings-especially Bramblepaw and Featherpaw, who Aspenpaw always joked looked like were the results of crossbreeding cats with wolves. "Yeah, yeah, I'm..." He trailed off, glancing back in the tom's direction. He was still looking. "I'm fine."
  20. Alright, the allegiances list has been updated a LOT so I suggest you look at it- http://apawineachworld.com/untoldlegacy/?shareGuid=c452b668-1245-3852-b865-cf4de075a44e
  21. Katumai

    sign this

    no
  22. Oops, this is taking longer than i thought-
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