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  1. 20 hours ago, Strayed Away Fawn said:

    (Why is this so satisfactory? anyways:) (Also, I feel like we need eye colors so we don't have a dovewing incident... I need to add those to mine too.)

     

    "You will see in due time." The pale tom replied. "You are young and irresponsible. The secrets we hold can destroy the forest and cannot under any circumstance be shared." Volepaw was intimidated. How did I get here? She remembers meeting Fading while she snuck out one night. He convinced her to come here. What did I get myself into? Why are Waspjaw and Tanglethroat here? She knew they were both relatively high positions in their clans So what does he want with me?

     

    Meanwhile, Fading had swept over to the other toms, dripping whiskers a glimmer of moonlight in the still air; his fur was a brand of white unlike what Volepaw had ever seen within the clans, and somewhere within her question-filled mind, another springs to play. 
    Was Fading a kittypet?
    If he was, how did he know?


    CHAPTER ONE

    Fawnpaw - blue-gray tabby she-cat with forest green eyes (Ivoryclan)
    Oddpaw - dark black tabby tom with one lime green eye and one ocean blue eye (Antlerclan)

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    WIP!! 

    This is the last re-write of The First Book in 'The Lost Songs'! Since, obviously, even the prologue isn't finished yet, this is an extreme wip. :) 

     

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    PROLOGUE

    Characters:
    Fading - ghostly white tom with dark, void-like eyes (No Clan)
    Tanglethroat - reddish-brown tom with green eyes 
    (Royalclan)
     Waspjaw - silvery grey tom with blue eyes (Antlerclan)
    Volepaw - light brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes (Ivoryclan)

     

    The white tom slinks in, unseen if it wasn't for his ghostly pale pelt- Waspjaw, sat under the moon-flooded oak, huffs. "Took you long enough," He says, cool-toned, harsh.
    That pale tom chuckles and smiles at him. "Waspjaw," He purrs, "Aren't you neglecting your duties coming here?"
    Caught, the deputy jolts, icy eyes narrowing at the languid pace the ghostly one had set. "Maybe so," Waspjaw replies, stilling in his seat. Defensive. Beside him, Tanglethroat had been washing his herb-stained paw, a sigh escaping his muzzle. "Wasp, you know better than to argue." The blood-furred tom flicks his tail, laying deeper into the branches that formed a protective nest around him; his eyes cast a gleam into the air, and perhaps them all together would scare off any potential intruders.

    Volepaw, below Tanglethroat, clears her throat, paws kneading the sliver-coated grass.
    "Fading," she murmurs, soft as the white tom's steps, "Why did you bring us here?"

    "You will see in due time." The pale tom replied, dark blue eyes too much like a void for Volepaw's comfort. "You are young and irresponsible. The secrets we hold can destroy the forest and cannot under any circumstance be shared."
    The words prickle underneath the tabby shecat's pelt, pulling her ears back. The only reason she was here was because she snuck out, after all. Could she make it back?

    Does Fading have... power?

    The question sits, and lingers deep inside her mind as she watches the three toms- Waspjaw was the deputy of Antlerclan, renound for his strength, and Tanglethroat was the pacifistic medicine cat of Royalclan. 

    (Seeing them both together was a wake up call. The world didn't work in the same day-night way she had been taught.)

    Meanwhile, Fading had swept over to the other toms, dripping whiskers a glimmer of moonlight in the still air; his fur was a brand of white unlike what Volepaw had ever seen within the clans, and somewhere within her question-filled mind, another springs to play. 
    Was Fading a kittypet?
    If he was, how did he know?

     

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  3. see a warrior story! (it explains the rules! ^^): 

     

    however, please keep this serious! :) 

    @Strayed Away Fawn @The Fawnth Doctor @Broken @The Flower Fawn

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    ALLEGIANCES

    Ivoryclan

    Leader
    Ratstar - russet coloured tom 

    Deputy
    Puddlehawk - fluffy white tom 
    Apprentice, Fawnpaw

    Medicine Cat
    Fallenlight - black and brown tom 
    Apprentice, Volepaw

    Warriors
    Slowcall - golden she-cat 
    Apprentice, Slowpaw
    Milkbrook - russet coloured tom 
    Thunderpool - lively smoky black she-cat 
    Tumblehollow - black and white tom with patches of darker fur 
    Shredstep - gray and white tabby tom 
    Apprentice, Darkpaw

    Apprentices
    Darkpaw - dark orange she-cat 
    Fawnpaw - blue-gray tabby she-cat 
    Volepaw - light brown tabby she-cat 
    Slowpaw - brown and cream tom 

    Queens
    None..?

    Elders
    Duskbright - muscular black tom 

    Kits
    Blizzardkit - night-black she-cat 
    Dewykit - speckled white she-cat 
    Raccoonkit - dark orange she-cat 
    Silverkit - black tom 
    Oakkit - dark orange tom 

     

    Antlerclan

    Leader
    Ashstar - red and white tom with pale orange stripes 

    Deputy
    Waspjaw - silvery gray tom 

    Medicine Cat
    Swiftclaw - creamy brown tom 
    Apprentice, Dustpaw

    Warriors
    Ivymist - mottled light brown she-cat with dark brown stripes 
    Fireberry - unusually pink tom 
    Apprentice, Oddpaw
    Brushsky - black and brown she-cat 
    Apprentice, Ratpaw
    Raccoonsky - speckled ginger she-cat with ice-blue eyes 
    Apprentice, Spiderpaw
    Rippleeye - dark black tabby tom with powerful hind legs 
    Apprentice, Quickpaw

    Apprentices
    Quickpaw - gray tom 
    Oddpaw - dark black tabby tom 
    Ratpaw - russet coloured she-cat 
    Dustpaw - red and white she-cat 
    Spiderpaw - light gray tom 

    Queens
    Dustypelt - red she-cat 
    Frosttail - black and brown she-cat 

    Elders
    None.

    Kits
    Tornkit - white she-cat 
    Slowkit - gray and white tom 

     

    Royalclan

    Leader
    Clawstar - blue-gray tabby tom 

    Deputy
    Birchhawk - black and white she-cat with one missing ear 

    Medicine Cat
    Tanglethroat - reddish-brown tom 
    Apprentice, Fleetpaw

    Warriors
    Ryewish - dark black tabby tom 
    Apprentice, Morningpaw
    Leafwatcher - pale gray tom 
    Birdmask - handsome blue-gray tom 
    Apprentice, Sunnypaw
    Brindlefin - huge reddish-brown tom 
    Palepad - smoky black tom 
    Brightleaf - blue-gray she-cat 
    Ivyheather - long-legged white she-cat 
    Blackshine - bluish-gray tom with black tipped fur 

    Apprentices
    Fleetpaw - blue-gray tabby she-cat 
    Morningpaw - black tabby she-cat 
    Sunnypaw - bluish-gray she-cat 

    Queens
    Slatewhisper - reddish-brown she-cat 
    Rowanspots - smoky black she-cat 
    Aspencreek - smoky black she-cat with a large scar on their back 

    Elders
    Darkgrass - black tabby tom 
    Goosetree - light brown tabby she-cat 
    Riverstep - bright ginger tom 
    Lakeheather - pure white tom 

    Kits
    None.

     

    Honeyclan

    Leader
    Morningstar - dark brown she-cat 

    Deputy
    Pouncebird - beautiful white she-cat 
    Apprentice, Weaselpaw

    Medicine Cat
    Starlingshade - dark cream tom 
    Apprentice, Sparrowpaw

    Warriors
    Minnowspark - lithe light tortoiseshell tom 
    Apprentice, Dappledpaw
    Starlingfish - dark brown tom with green eyes 
    Squirrelpelt - dusky brown tom 
    Apprentice, Fernpaw
    Sneezethorn - red tom 
    Vinehawk - smoky black tom 

    Apprentices
    Weaselpaw - dark brown she-cat 
    Sparrowpaw - mottled light brown she-cat 
    Dappledpaw - dusky brown tom 
    Fernpaw - mottled light brown she-cat 

    Queens
    Sootswipe - black tabby she-cat 

    Elders
    Tallspots - light orange tom 

    Kits
    Coldkit - dark tortoiseshell tom 
    Breezekit - dark brown tabby she-cat 

     

    CATS OUTSIDE THE CLANS
    Fading - ghostly white tom 
    Ferret - golden tabby tom 

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    ARC ONE

    LEANING ON METAPHORS

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    PROLOGUE

    Characters:
    Fading - ghostly white tom (No Clan)
    Tanglethroat - reddish-brown tom
     (Royalclan)
     Waspjaw - silvery grey tom (Antlerclan)
    Volepaw - light brown tabby she-cat (Ivoryclan)

    The white tom slinks in, unseen if it wasn't for his ghostly pale pelt- Waspjaw, sat under the moon-flooded oak, huffs. "Took you long enough," He says, cool-toned, harsh. 
    The pale tom chuckles and smiles at him. "Waspjaw," He purrs, "Aren't you neglecting your duties coming here?" 
    The deputy jolts, icy eyes narrowing at the languid pace the ghostly one had set. "Maybe so," Waspjaw replies, stilling in his seat.
    Beside him, Tanglethroat had been washing his herb-stained paw, a sigh escaping his muzzle. "Wasp, you know better than to argue." Tanglethroat flicks his tail, laying deeper into the branches that formed a protective nest around him.
    Volepaw, below Tanglethroat, clears her throat, paws kneading the sliver-coated grass.

    "Fading," she murmurs, soft as the white tom's steps, "Why did you bring us here?"

  4. 1 hour ago, Strayed Away Fawn said:

     PROLOGUE

    Fawnstar padded through the dew-covered forest watching the leaves as dew drips off of them. “Fawnstar?” A voice behind him called.

     

    He shivers, the silvery fur along his back prickling up like a porcupine's warning; the smaller, white-pawed tom jolts, backing away, voice tilting higher. "Fawnstar, you're not thinking right. Mudthorn said-" 

    Fawnstar whirls around, his sunlight yellow eyes catching the setting sun from below the leaves.  "Mudthorn said nothing." He snarls, tattered ears twitching. "I know the Wind's warning when I hear it, Storm." He spits the last word, lips upturned and teeth on show.

  5. 12 hours ago, Aetherskye said:

    According to my own research:

    It also is related to memory loss around a point in time. (Disassociative Amnesia)

    You can also have times where you feel as though your watching a movie of yourself where you can hear the thoughts, but they aren't yours. (Denationalization) or some times where people around you are unreal. (Derealization). (Denationalization disorder)

     

    DID is developed to help with trauma. They experience gaps in memory of everyday activity, personal information, and trauma. 

    Each 'identity' has their own name and characteristics.  They're almost like imaginary friends... But they're also you. 

     

    This dissociative disorders can develop due to any kind of trauma: Physical, sexual, emotional. Even combat and disasters. It mostly develops in childhood.

     

    Now since I really don't want to paraphrase or retype a whole paragraph:

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    I may not have DID but I sure do have a lot of the symptoms. (No amount of research I do is going to make me qualified for self-diagnosis, unless I went and got a degree in psychology, which I don't. Even then, I'd be hesitant to do a self-diagnosis because it is better to have a outsider view.)

    @wikipedia (angel) Care to add/correct/confirm anything?

     

    ooh, i got tagged! 
     

    Denationisation doesn't exist. That's business, not psychology. 

     

    There are multiple forms of dissociation; Derealisation (the environment doesnt exist), Depersonalisation (you dont exist), DID, OSDD..... there's lots more, so many that I can't go over them all. 

    in DID, alters are not 'you'. You are one alter in a system (a group of alters), and you simply play a role in keeping the body alive; think of it like a crew of people keeping the plane in the air and working. 

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  6. 3 minutes ago, catsagainstdeterminism said:

    Well, are they? The same species, I mean. There's some differences, but not that much as to be sure of anything.

    ohh

    ye, they are! theyre from a world where mutations that often kill arent fatal so theres more variation 

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  7. 16 hours ago, FlowerMask said:

    Shouhei what were you doing when the murder took place?

    Shouhei smiles, easy and relaxed; his voice is muffled and hoarse, like he's speaking through a mask. He also squints- shortsighted, it seems. "Getting lectured by Floria for 'improper conduct'." He chuckles. "She's a... royal nicheling, if you don't know. You don't tend to talk to the others, actually. Are you okay?"

    You shuffle, uncomfortable. 

    13 hours ago, Skysplash8 said:

    "So, Shouhei, what do you think of the other nichelings?"

    "I assume you mea- mean the- body? Raizo?" His eyes widen. "He was annoying, sure, but isn't everybody? He seemed like he needed somebody to talk to; acting out for attention." 

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  8. On 11/6/2019 at 12:21 AM, Renio2490 said:

    For things unknown. Clan 1, 2, 3 and 4 are yet to be named. Suggest names, please. Form to add warrior is this:
    Name:
    Gender:
    Clan:
    Rank:
    Looks (picture is appreciated, but description is ok too):

    CLAN 1

    Leader: Meadowstar, a pale golden she-cat with darker mottled spots and beautiful blue eyes.

    Deputy: None

    Med. Cat: None

    Warriors: (she-cats and tom without kits)
    Littletuft, tom.
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    Fernblaze, broken mackerel marmalade tabby tom, light copper eyes, short-haired.

    Apprentices: (more than six moons old, in training to become warriors)
    None

    Queens: (she-cats nursing or expecting kits)
    None

    Kits: None

    Elders: (former warriors and queens, now retired)
    None

     

    ROCKCLAN

    Leader: None

    Deputy: Spiderrose, dilute calico she-cat with weak sight, hazel eyes, short-haired.

    Med. Cat: None

    Warriors: Midnightpelt, tom.
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    Apprentices: None

    Queens: None

    Kits: None

    Elders: None

    CLAN 3

    Leader: None

    Deputy: None

    Med. Cat: Dawnwhisker, yellow spotted tabby tom, light orange eyes, short-haired.

    Warriors: None

    Apprentices: None

    Queens: None

    Kits: None

    Elders: None

    CLAN 4

    Leader: None

    Deputy: None

    Med. Cat: None

    Warriors: None

    Apprentices: None

    Queens: None

    Kits: None

    Elders: Heathercry, grey she-cat with white piebald markings, pale green eyes, long-haired.

    CLAN 1 = Fountainclan 

    CLAN 3 = Tundraclan 

    CLAN 4 = Geyserclan 

  9. 3 hours ago, 𝒴𝒶𝓂𝒷𝑜 said:

    What is your opinion on mary/gary sues?

    as long as theyre written well and make sense in the story (superman, anyone?? he's a gary stu!!) theyre chill

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