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PincerClaw420

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  1. 17 minutes ago, mhiahia said:

    If it only has a few characters at the beginning. I physically can't start a story where there are like ten different nichelings because I need time to get accustomed to characters (especially with names and also looks). 

    Also, the text needs good formating, else it gets overwhelming for me. I like pictures a lot, too. 

    Most important is that I can build a relation to the characters and get to know them. Thats why I like it when there's only a few at the beginning, because then you can really focus on them.

    I also think that character developement is important - I could probably read a story that plays on an easy island and has zero predators, sickness or murder. As long as the characters are compelling and the dynamics are interesting I will love it (might even attempt doing that once I get out of school and have some more free time Once I finish this year I take a break because 12 years of school are exhausting)

    Exactly my thoughts! Especially for the multiple nichelings at the start, one of the reasons why BIL, LAL and TCQ are some of my favourite playthroughs.

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  2. 8 minutes ago, Applesauce said:

    Pictures. If you lack the pictures, I lack the ability to understand. But really, most importantly I like when the characters feels real and when the plot doesn’t linger for too long. And no melodrama. I feel that if a story is good, it won’t need melodrama to appeal to emotions. It just will naturally. What about you?

    Noted. I agree with you on pictures helping me understand, but if a playthrough has no pictures but good descriptions, I'll certainly continue reading. Your other points I also agree with. As for my own thoughts, I always like it when there's a bit of mystery involved, along with natural/colorful descriptions and dialogue. (LAL does this really well!) In reality though, as long as the playthrough's story driven, I'll probably read it. I think I stated some of my other opinions on Sky's Queendom Playthrough when they asked for thoughts, so I won't be writing an entire essay here.

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  3. Character that communicates their current emotions through fun facts.

    Example: "Hey, did ya know platypi are mammals that lay eggs, sweat milk and have beaver tails and a bill?"

    *Other character accidentally spills Fun Fact dude's milk*

    "Fun fact, the average person walks by almost 16 murderers in their lifetime :)"

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