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  1. 1 minute ago, Flower said:

     

    ‘’On it!’’ She said, giving Issi one last glance before dashing over to Juniper and holding down her two front paws. ‘’Someone get the back legs!’’ She instructed.

    Just now, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    Jest walked over and put a paw on Juniper's nose.

    Issi moves forward and hold down her back legs. "I don't know how long I can keep her down."

  2. Just now, Flower said:

     

    ‘’Would you be more concerned if I told you I don’t know or I do know.’’ She asked.

    Issi frowned again, "I don't know." I don't feel overly concerned right now- This isn't good. Why aren't I more concerned right now?!

  3. Just now, Flower said:

    ‘’By the fire pit.’’

    Just now, Clover said:

    Suddenly, Juniper's eyes shot open, and she started coughing. Panic lit her eyes, and she tried to get up.

    "Rain?! Rain?! Rain, come back!" She screeched, before coughing again, some blood dribbling down her bottom jaw.

    She collapsed into the moss, reaching out a paw for something that wasnt there.

    Wide eyed Issi took a second for her heartbeat to calm down. That scared the life out of me. Rain? Who's that? Why is no one making any sense again? "Rappitspring, she's dying right?" Her eyes following the blood pool that was forming.

  4. Just now, Flower said:

     

    She shakes her head slightly, snuggling closer to Snowdove. ‘’Not looking to good..’’ she got up and wrapped herself around juniper, grooming her fur. ‘’She seems cold.’’ She explained, without looking up from her grooming.

    Issi looked down with a frown. "With this place I would be surprised if she wasn't cold." Her eyes wandered further into the cave. "Don't they have like a place that was warmer?"

  5. 14 minutes ago, Clover said:

     

    Snowdove stopped at the caves, meeting a confused Jubileze. 

    "What happened? You all ran off before I could figure it out."

    "Rock." Snowdove responded shortly, slipping into one of the caves.

    12 minutes ago, Flower said:

    Rabbitspring slipped after her. ‘’Big rock.’’ She clarified.

    2 minutes ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

     

     

    Jest looked at her before slipping into the cave. He met the gaze of Everest, who was very confused. Jest went over and sat next to him, staring at the cave walls. "She's back." He whispered, lowering his head.

    Issi sighed as she sat down inside the cave. "We really need to get this done."

  6. 1 minute ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

     

    Jest looked over at Issi before hesitantly following the others. He knew he was supposed to ignore Penelope, but this time he just really wanted to hurt her. "C'mon..." He mumbled, ears perked up. 

    Issi looked back at the spot where the paw prints where in the snow before nodding and following Jest. She frowned and peeked at Jest. I should ask him what the heck that was but- She looked back again. I'm not sure if I want to know. If this adventure has taught me anything, sometimes knowing less is better, safer.

  7. 3 minutes ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

     

    Jest looked over at Caution before wincing. The paw prints appeared closer to Jest, and a claw mark slowly appeared on one of his shoulders. He swatted at whatever it was before running over to Juniper.

    Her eyes widen as she saw the marks just appear on him and she takes a step back. Somethings there! Issi growled lowly. How do you fight something you can't see?!

  8. On 5/2/2020 at 3:25 AM, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    He looked over, angry but slightly confused. "She's RIGHT THERE!" He motioned to an empty part of the snow. Strange thing is- There were paw prints there.

    3 minutes ago, Clover said:

    Caution crouched down, staring at Jest. "Stop screwing around! Juniper will die if you dont hurry the hell up!" He flinched when his injured leg pressed against the ground, quickly lifting it back up.

    Issi stared at the paw prints. Was there someone else on this mountain? She looks around. I don't see someone that could have made the it?

  9. 54 minutes ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

     

    Jest looked over, his pupils still dilated. He then looked back at Penelope. He started growling at Penelope.

    Issi was a lot closer and she couldn't see or smell anything. Is he imagining things up? "Jest." Her voice uncertain as she looks at the empty spot he's growling at. "There isn't anything there."

  10. 28 minutes ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    He ignored her, and continued to talk to something else.

     

     

     

    "Brother, you're embarrassing yourself!" Penelope chimed, putting a paw on his head before walking over to the side and sitting.

    "Stop changing the topic." He hissed, jumping at her but yet again just tumbling in the snow.

    "Rabbitspring! Jest, he seems a bit off!" Issi was moving to them as she talked. "Jest! Be careful you're close to the edge."

  11. Just now, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    (Right. Other than fellow ghosts like Hunter or Quosine--)

     

    He seemed to be talking to someone, but nobody was there. He had his tail ready, almost like he was ACTUALLY fighting somebody.

    Issi looked at the others that weren't paying attention to him. Her eyes went back to him. "Jest!"

  12. 3 minutes ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    Jest jumped at Penelope, growling. 

    Penelope just moved to the side, standing at the edge of the cliff.

    Jest just sorta tumbled in the snow a bit. He got up and shook the snow off, shivering a bit. His eyes dilated a bit and he just stared at Penelope.

    Wide eyed Issi stared at the scene. What on earth is he doing?

    (They can't see her right?)

  13. Just now, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    (wha.........….....?)

    (Ask Clover- But probably very crushed-)

     

     

    Jest started walking over to the side, staring at something. He bared his teeth at whatever it was he was seeing.

    (Issi is further up than Rabbitspring. Since she went to ask for help. So, in my mind she's closer to the cave.)

  14. Just now, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

     

    (They are at the top spsodoaskjfbiebfiouwnjdonansdhjndiujabwnh fkjbfkhsebkhsnb)

     

    He looked over at something else. He blinked a few times, and seemed to be very uncomfortable.

    (I know but iss met to her and then to the cave)

  15. Just now, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    He just motioned at Juniper, who was previously crushed.

     

    His gems changed colour again.

    Issi could see Rabbitspring didn't go far before meeting the others. She let a breath of relieve go as she eagerly waited for them to come to the top.

  16. Just now, Flower said:

    Rabbitspring traveled down the mountain

    Issi stood at the mountain edge. The drop send a shiver down her spine but she wanted to help. I have to go help. Her eyes travel to her leg and her curses mixed with the wind. "Issi, you're so useless right now." She looked up at the wintry sky and made a small prayer to the spirits of old. Please keep them safe. Grandmother.

  17. On 4/28/2020 at 3:58 AM, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    (We already got her out tho--)

    Issi doesn't know tho---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

  18. Well first off I'm no expert so I'll try to give advice the best I can. So please don't take it to heart if I say something you don't like. I don't mean it in a bad way when I give my opinion.

    2 minutes ago, A A A A A A said:

    I chose some of my art that I like and I want you guys to give me cirticism and advice

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    I'm assuming you where leaning to the gory side? Not my strong point but from what I can see it's not bad. The background needs some work, I think the lettering is a nice touch but it needs to be more impactful. It's not the same style, all the letters, some have cute curls others not. Try looking online for examples and try different ones with a picture. His eye is glowing but because the whole picture is light it doesn't give the effect off well. Try more dark shadows around the character to highlight the glowing eye and the thing crawling out off it. You need a focus point in the picture right now there isn't a really good one, as a viewer I know that the eye and the thing crawling out is the main point (Once again I'm assuming it is, if it wasn't, sorry) but because of the letters and the colors all being the same hue the human eye is looking all around and not focusing on what you're trying to show.

    13 minutes ago, A A A A A A said:

    I chose some of my art that I like and I want you guys to give me cirticism and advice

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    This one has human in, definitely not my strong point. I can only suggest shading, remember humans are not flat they are 3D so shadows are there to help get it across. Other than that I do like the concept of this one. :)

    17 minutes ago, A A A A A A said:

    I chose some of my art that I like and I want you guys to give me cirticism and advice

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    Can't say much about this one. I think I like it just the way it is. There is not light thus no need for shadows. Maybe some anatomy with the hands that need practice but other than that I really do just like this one. The white eye give you a thing to focus on and let the you explore from there, the more I look the more I start to see. It's a fun picture to look at for me personally.

    20 minutes ago, A A A A A A said:

    I chose some of my art that I like and I want you guys to give me cirticism and advice

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    I'm doing these two together because once again, I'm no good with humans. Wish I could give you better advice but I'm sure someone on here are good with them.:)

    I can only say, shadows. Not heavy shadows but only a slight shadow should work too, for instance where the hair is making shadows on the face. I like the Tv guy.

    23 minutes ago, A A A A A A said:

    I chose some of my art that I like and I want you guys to give me cirticism and advice

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    This one is also fine. Maybe a bit practice with hands but that's it. I like the colors, nothing is fighting for my attention in this one and I can just enjoy looking at it. Maybe a bit line art that's messy but it adds to the charm of this piece.

    26 minutes ago, A A A A A A said:

    I chose some of my art that I like and I want you guys to give me cirticism and advice

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    This one again I can see what you where going for and it's not a bad one. So far non really are. I think the lettering is once again one of the point that I think didn't need to be blurred. This time the letters are all the same but because the niche has a blurred glow around him and the words are blurred it's doesn't clash- hard to explain- it meshes too well? Where his hair and the words meet its to similar and if someone just glance it it they would think that some of it's part of the the niche. Unfortunately this is a trial and error fix for me. I would make multi ones with different levels of blur (If I wanted it to be blurred like this) and pick the one that works.

    The niche itself is fine because that's you're style and my tricks wouldn't work for this style. I think. The glow is to much unless this niche has a reason to glow it shouldn't glow that much. The background is fine I've made a similar one before, maybe a low blur for the background and then no blur for the words? Trial and error are your best friends, they are mine too. xD

    39 minutes ago, A A A A A A said:

    I chose some of my art that I like and I want you guys to give me cirticism and advice

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    Shadows. Nice work with the moveable blur. Shadows. Character's have shadows. Sorry, only advice I can give here. Shadows.

    41 minutes ago, A A A A A A said:

    I chose some of my art that I like and I want you guys to give me cirticism and advice

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    This one you have to keep in mind that the light comes from above. I can see some shadows but they aren't dark enough. If an object is closer to another object the shadows are darker, the further they are the lighter. Use you're hand for and example if you move your hand closer to a table then the shadows are darker and when you move it further away it's lighter. Although this also depends on where the light is coming from and how many lights there are and if there is a reflection how would it change the light and shadows. I'm still struggling to learn shadows, lights and reflections. So, I hope this helps. If you need me to try and explain some more I will try. :)

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