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  1. Another build. I love the vibe from this one, Especially since I just figured out how to get the Minecraft music to play on PE, listening to a disc on the balcony at night is just mmmmm. Name is Darkwood Island, here some pictures

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    Including a small farm

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    A dock

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    The bee-tree garden

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    And complete with this gorgeous outlook. 

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  2. 14 hours ago, A Nicheling said:

    It was part of the niche rp section, where everyone created nicheling countries that had different rules, technology, and characteristics. Each player could declare war to the other kingdoms or make alliances, there was also a world war between many of them.

    Here it is one of my old countries

     

     

    Here is a summary I found of the early days of the war

     

     

    Awww that sounds so cool. I don’t rp but if someone made another...

  3. Sample from a short story-

    Then I looked down to the area I woke up in. Scattered in the white were chunks of what appeared to be burnt mental. The snow around them was displaced and they stretched out in a wide vicinity. I couldn’t make out anything. The most prominent piece was a large metal tombstone sticking straight out of the ground. It was talk and a little daunting, standing so close to the spot where I’d slept. Clearing this mess used to be something, but what? 

    Then I saw it, the cockpit, my one and only clue. It was half crushed, but mosting intact, and behind it was a trail of disrupted snow. One of the wings was also still intact, so that big metal tombstone thing must have been the other wing. Was I in a plane crash?

     I thought about it, but didn't linker for long. I went to go check the cockpit.

    Feel free to make suggestions 

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  4. I had to do a presentation on Athena and I was so nervous my voice was shaky everyone could hear I could barely breathe I almost stopped I was so out of breath but I kept going through my voice was breathless and shaky I'm tearing up with relief omg it was weird but I'm not feeling any after cringe it was just the presentation part holy cow I am tired

  5. (me in the long dark)

    *sees bear from cliff top* "HA. I can shoot you and they're ain't nothing you can do about it!" *proceeds to curse off bear*

    *Shoots bear* *It runs out of sight* *I continue to curse off bear*

    *Hears foots steps getting louder*

    "Hod up a sec"

    *and louder*

    "Wait wait wait wait wait"

    *And louder* 

    "I see the light..."

     

    I survived but what the frick.

  6. 1 minute ago, Imperial officer said:

    And you guys, what are you working on?

    I'm working on a side story where a case of vampirism takes over a high school marching band. It was inspired by What We do in the Shadows and my own splendid experience as a band kid. 

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  7. 36 minutes ago, Applesauce said:

    I heard that when naming characters, you should try to make all the names different. So avoid having a Jane, a Joe, a John. These are all short, all start with the letter J, and all sound very similar.

    Another thing I think you should keep in mind is pick names with meaning. For example, I recently watched a movie where a man struggles with masculinity. His last name was Mann. See what they did there? He was also the hero of the story and his first name was David, who my teacher said is actually a greek hero. So try to pick names that mean something to you. Other times I just wait for the right name to turn up.

    I should say that I'm terrible at following this advice. Finding the symbolic meaning behind each name is hard.

    I have one character who traps herself in a cage of self-hatred, and google says her name means "songbird". So for a songbird to sing it's best, it has to fly free so she has to find a way to escape that cage. I'm glad it suits her cause I've been thinking of her as this name for so long.

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  8. 7 minutes ago, Imperial officer said:

    I’m doing an animation series but I have a great problem, I can’t think of names to my characters. For years most of them hadn’t had names because I don’t know how to name them, do you have a recommendation on how to name characters?

    I heard that when naming characters, you should try to make all the names different. So avoid having a Jane, a Joe, a John. These are all short, all start with the letter J, and all sound very similar.

    Another thing I think you should keep in mind is pick names with meaning. For example, I recently watched a movie where a man struggles with masculinity. His last name was Mann. See what they did there? He was also the hero of the story and his first name was David, who my teacher said is actually a greek hero. So try to pick names that mean something to you. Other times I just wait for the right name to turn up.

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  9. I'm severely shy around people I like but don't know well which makes it hard to connect with people, so I made this because I notice a lot of people on here like writing and I just got back into writing so I thought it be a good way to get myself talking.

    You can bring up characters, plots, ideas, examples... basically whatever you're proud of or what you think needs work and people can help you. 

    Only two rules are:

    - No unnecessary self-criticism. Like replace "I could never come up with a believable character!" With "My characters need some work but I'll get there. Any tips?"

    - And make it digestible. You people write like beast and can crank out walls of text like nothing. I'm sure it's great but if you do that you will give my dyslexic brain a headache. Instead of a whole chapter, give a summary and a small sample of your style. Thank you

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  10. 6 minutes ago, PincerClaw420 said:

    My name is Yoshikage Kira. I'm 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don't smoke, but I occasionally drink. I'm in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I'm trying to explain that I'm a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn't lose to anyone.

    Looks like I still has a long way to go

  11. 6 hours ago, gamingcookie said:

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    The first sentence of green's summoning was "my name is Yoshikage Kira." (I did that part by myself >:) The they probably said they are (Sum) 33 years old. Then they said something about their house and I loose it. My inner latin nerd is coming out and I love it. 

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  12. 4 minutes ago, Applesauce said:

    Just vibed very hard with a lobby. I was engaged to a cyan but they left me. (A purple started shipping us) Was a chance to release some chaotic energy. I picked a spot in the back of electric and called it my comfort zone. Green caught me hiding there and thought I was sus. Just hope they don’t beat themselves up for it

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    This brought out my extrovert size. I have the desire to be social

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  13. 4 minutes ago, Imperial officer said:

    I also had dreams about flying and not being able to fly.

    In many dreams I try to go somewhere and try to fly but I can’t even though I know it’s a dream and get very frustrated.

     

    But is a couple of them I managed to fly.

     

    In one I was on a weird Chinese city and there I tried to fly. When I tried it I jumped like 10 stories high but only moved forward a few meters. So I made many of those strange jumps to try to move faster.

     

    In another one I was a clone trooper from Star Wars. I was in a shopping mall and it had many floors but in the center it had a large empty space from which you could look down to the first floor. I took a giant paper towel as some kind of cape and when I ran and jumped to the space I managed to fly kinda like superman. In one moment I was bored and noticed that in my clone armor I had some grenades. I was walking with my dad near the entrance of a shop and decided to throw the grenades. When they exploded many colorful cockroaches came out and I was amused by it.

    Flying can be weird. Once I played a lot of goat simulator with the antigravity goat. It just lets u levitate limply in the sky and move around. Than I had a dream about this big room place and I kept slamming into walls limpishly and wondering why the heck it didn’t hurt. I think people from grace anatomy were there too. 

  14. Just vibed very hard with a lobby. I was engaged to a cyan but they left me. (A purple started shipping us) Was a chance to release some chaotic energy. I picked a spot in the back of electric and called it my comfort zone. Green caught me hiding there and thought I was sus. Just hope they don’t beat themselves up for it

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  15. I think PincerClaw hit it on the head. They bend the laws of the universe and all the other characters kinda just orbit them. They're also kinda annoying because most of the stuff they do isn't what real people would do. They just feel fake and it's like the author is trying to make you pity them.

    One point I want to make is that I think girls get this label a lot more than guys, mainly because it was made for female characters. I think this is because those characteristics we use to identify sues, like kind, compassionate, and friendly, are terms that are thought of as "default female stuff". But when a guy acts this way it's seen as outside the "default" because men are supposed to be strong and not as emotional. One male character who comes to mind when I think of this is Aang from Avatar. 

    (Also cool topic idea)

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