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Spoopy

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  1. 1 minute ago, Green the gene maker said:

    I know what this means! It's time!

    You get changed into something perfect for adventure! You strike a pose in front of Niche, who tries to copy your pose but falls backwards. You laugh.

    You hear Mouse bark from your balcony.

    -Follow Mouse

    -Bond with Niche

    -Return Niche to the pokeball

    -Go back to sleep

    -Explore around your room

  2. 11 hours ago, Aetherskye said:

    “Mk. But I have a serious question.”

    "What is it?" The professor tilted his head slightly.

    -TYO

    11 hours ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    I- Yes. I'd like to raid the room for sentimental stuff-- If I even have those--

    You take it.

    -Go back to sleep

    -Explore your room

    -Go upstairs

    -Release the pokemon from the pokeball

    10 hours ago, gamingcookie said:

    doing anything else at the start of a Pokemon game is illegal

    (is Blizzardwind the name of my town or something?)

     

    (Yes)

    You explore your room find a journal that belonged to your mother.

    Take it?

    5 hours ago, Green the gene maker said:

     

    You release the pokemon. It's a Sirepup! You hug it and he makes a bark. You give it the nickname Niche.

    -Follow Mouse

    -Bond with Niche

    -Return Niche to the pokeball

    -Go back to sleep

    -Get changed

    -Explore around your room

    1 hour ago, ~Howling Meadows~ said:

    what is it mum? Whatcha got fore this time?

    She hands a letter to you.

    "Read it."

    Read it?

  3. 1 minute ago, Aetherskye said:

    “Hi prof!” She says.

    "It's so great to meet you!" The professor exclaims, "I was just talking to your father about you!"

    -TYO

    1 minute ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    Explore a bit more.

    You find a picture of a large wolf pokemon, you believe it's a Icehowl but you're not sure.

    Take it?

  4. 1 minute ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    Sure. "The plot thickens." 'ey mumbled.

    You look at it for a moment, the man looks so familiar but the amount of clothing blocks most of his facial freatures. You take it.

    -Go back to sleep

    -Explore your room

    -Go upstairs

    -Release the pokemon from the pokeball

  5. 3 minutes ago, Aetherskye said:

    I’m the kind of person who wears their pajamas all day— and won’t change for visitor, they come to my house, they deal with me.

    You walk over and the man turns his head to look at you. A smile appeared on his face and he turned fully towards you.

    "You must be Opa!" The man extends his hand for a handshake, "I'm Professor Maple!"

    -TYO

    1 minute ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    Get changed and then secure anything I can with me-- I don't know if this pokemon is hyper.

    You get changed and secure anything that you can with you.

    -Go back to sleep

    -Explore your room

    -Go upstairs

    -Release the pokemon from the pokeball

  6. 2 minutes ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    Sure. It's giving me something, why not play along?

    You take it and open it.

    As you read it, a smile appears on your face. You notice the Wavesoar gets excited as well.

    It was from the pokemon professor of this region, Professor Maple! You now realized that the Wavesoar must the professor's.

    The Wavesoar takes out three pokeballs and each one has a piece of colored paper taped onto it.

    You choose the one who you guess is the plant pokemon(since it had a green piece of colored paper) and you give the Wavesoar a pet on the head. The Wavesoar takes the other two pokeballs and flys out of your window.

    -Go back to sleep

    -Get changed

    -Explore your room

    -Go upstairs

    -Release the pokemon from the pokeball

    7 minutes ago, Aetherskye said:

    Wassup peeps.

    You peek into the other room and see your father talking to a tall man who's wearing clothing for Blizzardwind's weather and climate. Your father notices you but says nothing, the man doesn't notice you.

    -Get changed

    -Go back to sleep

    -Walk over to them

  7. 3 minutes ago, Aetherskye said:

    Ye! 
    (Also, I might make some Pokémon, I’ll pm them to you if I do. You can use them or not.)

    You take it, maybe when you're feeling like remembering your mother, you can look through it.

    -Go into the other room

    - Get changed

    -Explore your room

    -Go back to sleep

    5 minutes ago, ~Howling Meadows~ said:

    why did my sister punch me in the stomach anyway ;-;

    You look through your room and you find a picture of your brother.

    Take it?

  8. 1 hour ago, Aetherskye said:

     

    You explore around your room.

    You find a scrapbook that you and your mother made when you were younger.

    Take it?

    47 minutes ago, ~Howling Meadows~ said:

     

    You throw on clothes that match and are clean. You look at yourself in your mirror and strike a pose!

    -Explore your room

    -Go back to sleep

    -Go upstairs

    35 minutes ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

    I uhh- Open the window. I'd like to make some non-human friends today.

    You open the window and the Wavesoar flys in and lands on your floor. It tries to clean and dry it's feathers to the best you can. Soon it opens its backpack and takes out a letter and gives it to you.

    Read it?

  9. @Green the gene maker

    Sunny - Leaftune

    You're awaken by a loud bark. You leap out of your bed and to your feet. You look for the source of the bark and you see your father's Stalkin, Mouse. It hands you a pokeball before running to your balcony and jumping on the railing.

    -Follow Mouse

    -Release the pokemon from the pokeball

    -Go back to sleep

    -Get changed

    -Explore around your room

     

    @Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy

    Stormy - Waveridge

    The sounds of the raging waves awake you. You complate about getting up or not but you decide to get up. The calls of Sandwings come from outside, they sound frightened. But their calls became distant as a Wavesoar lands by your window. It has a collar and a little backpack, awww that's cute.

    -Open your window

    -Shoo the Wavesoar away

    -Go back to sleep

    -Get changed

    -Explore your room

     

    @Aetherskye

    Snowy - Blizzardwind

    You wake up and shiver, someone must have came inside or something because the cold soon disappeared. You hear talking in the other room but you can't hear what they're talking about. It's still dark out but you know it's morning.

    -Go into the other room

    - Get changed

    -Explore your room

    -Go back to sleep

     

    @~Howling Meadows~

    Stormy - Waveridge

    You awake from a punch in the stomach from your older sister, Daisy. You hold your stomach as your sister laughs as if she saw someone get hit in the face.

    "Mom wants you upstairs in 10 minutes." She says before running off to her room.

    -Get changed

    -Explore your room

    -Go back to sleep

    -Go upstairs

     

    @gamingcookie

    Snowy - Blizzardwind

    The sound of the wind awakes you and you get up and turn on a light. The light blinds you for a moment. You hear a knock on your door and it makes you jump.

    "Get ready we're heading to town soon!" Your aunt calls through the door.

    -Get changed

    -Explore your room

    -Go back to sleep

    -Look outside

  10. 2 minutes ago, Applesauce said:

    I'm a give some tips on anatomy because that"s all I care about

    - You may want to think about making the heads smaller and the shoulders wider. Some of them look as though the neck and body are too small or out of proportion compared to the head.

    - The foreheads, or tops of their heads, are taken up by the eyes. Try bringing the eyes down, towards the snout and making them an tad smaller wouldn't hurt.

    - The snouts are a bit large in comparison with the head. They also curve upwards a little much (idk if this is just your style). Here's a picture of a wolf's head. You can see the snout mainly points downwards and the position of the eye in comparison with the snout. You can make a clear line from the eye and the end of the snout.

    image.thumb.png.44d7a7195aa669046fc0f3bc3056d54e.png

    Here's an exercise I did once with a bird - take these bones and around it draw the outline of a fleshed out wolf. It was pretty fun for me, you can't really go wrong. Do this  with whatever you want.

    image.png.397d415a382036a9348cbac33b910380.png

     

    As for your strong parts your very good with texture, fur, and hair, something I struggled with from the beginning and still kinda do.

     

    I hope this is helpful and makes sense!

    Thank you as well! :D

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  11. 1 hour ago, FawnCat said:

    Well first off I'm no expert so I'll try to give advice the best I can. So please don't take it to heart if I say something you don't like. I don't mean it in a bad way when I give my opinion.

    I'm assuming you where leaning to the gory side? Not my strong point but from what I can see it's not bad. The background needs some work, I think the lettering is a nice touch but it needs to be more impactful. It's not the same style, all the letters, some have cute curls others not. Try looking online for examples and try different ones with a picture. His eye is glowing but because the whole picture is light it doesn't give the effect off well. Try more dark shadows around the character to highlight the glowing eye and the thing crawling out off it. You need a focus point in the picture right now there isn't a really good one, as a viewer I know that the eye and the thing crawling out is the main point (Once again I'm assuming it is, if it wasn't, sorry) but because of the letters and the colors all being the same hue the human eye is looking all around and not focusing on what you're trying to show.

    This one has human in, definitely not my strong point. I can only suggest shading, remember humans are not flat they are 3D so shadows are there to help get it across. Other than that I do like the concept of this one. :)

    Can't say much about this one. I think I like it just the way it is. There is not light thus no need for shadows. Maybe some anatomy with the hands that need practice but other than that I really do just like this one. The white eye give you a thing to focus on and let the you explore from there, the more I look the more I start to see. It's a fun picture to look at for me personally.

    I'm doing these two together because once again, I'm no good with humans. Wish I could give you better advice but I'm sure someone on here are good with them.:)

    I can only say, shadows. Not heavy shadows but only a slight shadow should work too, for instance where the hair is making shadows on the face. I like the Tv guy.

    This one is also fine. Maybe a bit practice with hands but that's it. I like the colors, nothing is fighting for my attention in this one and I can just enjoy looking at it. Maybe a bit line art that's messy but it adds to the charm of this piece.

    This one again I can see what you where going for and it's not a bad one. So far non really are. I think the lettering is once again one of the point that I think didn't need to be blurred. This time the letters are all the same but because the niche has a blurred glow around him and the words are blurred it's doesn't clash- hard to explain- it meshes too well? Where his hair and the words meet its to similar and if someone just glance it it they would think that some of it's part of the the niche. Unfortunately this is a trial and error fix for me. I would make multi ones with different levels of blur (If I wanted it to be blurred like this) and pick the one that works.

    The niche itself is fine because that's you're style and my tricks wouldn't work for this style. I think. The glow is to much unless this niche has a reason to glow it shouldn't glow that much. The background is fine I've made a similar one before, maybe a low blur for the background and then no blur for the words? Trial and error are your best friends, they are mine too. xD

    Shadows. Nice work with the moveable blur. Shadows. Character's have shadows. Sorry, only advice I can give here. Shadows.

    This one you have to keep in mind that the light comes from above. I can see some shadows but they aren't dark enough. If an object is closer to another object the shadows are darker, the further they are the lighter. Use you're hand for and example if you move your hand closer to a table then the shadows are darker and when you move it further away it's lighter. Although this also depends on where the light is coming from and how many lights there are and if there is a reflection how would it change the light and shadows. I'm still struggling to learn shadows, lights and reflections. So, I hope this helps. If you need me to try and explain some more I will try. :)

    Thank you so much for this :)

    I'm slowly learning shadows and anatomy and your advice means a lot to me

    Once again,

    Thank you!

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