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Night

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  1. Night

    Art dump

    I forgot this existed, well, time for art!
  2. Happy Birthday! plz don't murder my family
  3. How old is he? In what island?
  4. Oh and keep the star gene, very important, always check.
  5. Awesome! Make sure to breed the bad eyes out tho.
  6. I'd explore the island to look for more nichelings.
  7. Also, a tip if u wanna get to the home island: always go north, if there isn't a north port, go east. It's something that I think everyone knows, but, just in case.
  8. Night

    Art programs?

    Also Medibang may be cool as well
  9. Night

    Art programs?

    Paint Tool Sai? I think it's called like that. I don't use it, but I've heard from it
  10. Like, nothing, at all? Or am I just getting ignored '-'
  11. I've started with chapter 2 any thoughts on it?
  12. Chapter 1 is now done! Wow, I never thought it could cost that much, at all. So apart from the sisters info dump. How was the chapter? Any specific scenes I need to change?
  13. The simple sentences have always been troubling me, but I'll try to work on that in the future. Can you give an example of the 'too many periods' and 'not putting periods where it should be' as well? I'd like to develop that. Thanks for the criticism! It helps a lot.
  14. The names that the sisters have like 'Night' are supposed to be there for an important reason. It's something that impacted Nela's life and wanted to portray it in her daughters. She's got a little secret 😉
  15. And of course, I'll edit it when the whole book is done, and when that happens, the next one begins! And that continues until I'm better at writing and maybe, just maybe, I'll take a step further!
  16. Thank you! I thought of that as well and the chapter isn't over yet so, there will be more scenes involving the personalities of the sisters as well as new mysteries and doubts to Night's story, when I get this chapter done there will be a flashback to months earlier. Also the comment section is in the doc so if you have any questions or suggestions, leave them there! Thank you for reading this. Made my day happier :3
  17. So was the Prologue alright? Can I improve?
  18. I think it's public now, thanks for pointing that out. I'm still learning about the app.
  19. So, I've thought of a story for many years and I want to make it real. I won't publish anything anytime soon, but I could want to start learning how to write so maybe one day the world can see it. But I need help, here is the doc to the book. ALotW means: A Laiteyn of the World. It's gonna be a big series( I hope) Warning : Blood, death, and some gore. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Jqkc-5H7ggB6W7g7NCwJJGB-lHNFcJc-8tZLSTGAX_w/edit?usp=drivesdk
  20. OMG Thank you! He's so pretty, don't worry about the time tho, it was worth it! I just noticed it here I'm stupid.
  21. Night

    2020 MAP

    Also another version....
  22. Night

    2020 MAP

    Finished! It's doesn't represent the map aesthetic as much as I've could have liked buuut it's how it turned out, Can't wait to see the completed MAP.
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