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How about something like:
It was a dark night, as a storm blows over town, no people in sight, nothing around.. it was empty.. inside a small house there lived a three-person family: A mother, and two daughters, "Mom? When will the storm pass?" one of the daughters asked, "I don't know, Christine.." the family was poor, yet faithful, some hours later, the storm died down, stopping in just another couple of minutes, the storm had been going on for days..
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How that for a start?
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2 minutes ago, Applesauce said:
I don't think they do! I'm surprised because it's always sounded like something a school would make kids read. But that's ok, I bet I could just find the first few pages and see if I like it.
It's about a phantom "ghost" that haunts the opera, box 5 is owned by him, he makes a girl sing, and love him, and makes the managers pay him in the middle of each month, and a human that has feelings for the new singer(I'm not going to spoil names) and tries to get her to remember him, (That's all I'm going to say)
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1 minute ago, Applesauce said:
no no don't think like that. It's hard to get over the initial cringe of reading your writing, but never beat yourself up. And if your not ready to commit to a book maybe try a short story? You'll still be able to see what you need to work on and what you got down.
That's true..
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(Bumble is supposed to be the adventurous one, and Heather is exposed to be the Compassionate one, just an FYI)
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Just now, Polly said:
Sorry-
It's okay!
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Just now, Okay said:
Can i get room 666?
Oof-
I'd get that room too!
So.. room..
The room people were murdered in before you became manageror If you have a blood red and black room, that'd be great!Or at least some blood on the walls..-
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2 minutes ago, Tigerlily said:
She leaped t the side, hopefully far enough to have dodged it.
You dodged it, barely..
The moss-ball hit Lilackit
"Wow! Your good!" she complimented you
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2 minutes ago, Tigerlily said:
She dodged, trying to calculate the rebound.
'It's going to bounce off the wall behind you, then land where your sitting, so you wanna dodge to the side.'
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3 minutes ago, Tigerlily said:
"HIde and seek!"
"Okay!" Duskkit was excited
"Mouse-ball, in 3.. 2.. 1! Mouse-ball!" the twins shouted
you were the last to say it
"Fleetkit's it!" Dawnkit announced
"Count to ten!" Duskkit added
The twins darted out of the den, going to hide
'Well? Count to 10!' the voice encouraged you
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Just now, Tigerlily said:
"Yeah!"
I just want to be left alone..
'When she throws it duck'
Lilackit threw the moss-ball
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2 minutes ago, Tigerlily said:
"Nevermind! Anyway.. do you want to play?"
"Okay?" Dawnkit was even more confused
"What shall we play, my siblings?" Duskkit asked
'Ask to play hide-n-seek'
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1 minute ago, Impy10 said:
Dart shook her head
She shrugged, and curled up, falling to sleep
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Just now, Tigerlily said:
She looked around the nursery until she saw a moss-ball.
"LOOK!"
She saw the moss-ball and darted towards it
"Wanna try to dodge?"
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1 minute ago, Tigerlily said:
He smirked. "What, are you mad that you're a mouse brain and I'm not?"
"How am I a mouse-brain?" Dawnkit asked, now confused
'Your the mouse-brain here!' the voice corrected you
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13 minutes ago, Impy10 said:
"Oh!" Dart smiled
"You hungry?" she asked
Ideas?
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Thanks!
I gtg unfortunately..
My battery is at 6% and my computer doesn't do well while on and charging at the same time..
I will be on tomorrow!
After my brother does some of his school work..
Oof-
We need another computer..
Anyway,
Bye!
Talk to you all tomorrow!!
Maybe..