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  1. 1 minute ago, Applesauce said:

    I love the vibe, but it might need some fleshing out. Otherwise great tone!

    Thanks!

    I gtg unfortunately..

    My battery is at 6% and my computer doesn't do well while on and charging at the same time..

    I will be on tomorrow!

    After my brother does some of his school work..

    Oof-

    We need another computer..

    Anyway,

    Bye!

    Talk to you all tomorrow!!

    Maybe..

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  2. How about something like: 

    It was a dark night, as a storm blows over town, no people in sight, nothing around.. it was empty.. inside a small house there lived a three-person family: A mother, and two daughters, "Mom? When will the storm pass?" one of the daughters asked, "I don't know, Christine.." the family was poor, yet faithful, some hours later, the storm died down, stopping in just another couple of minutes, the storm had been going on for days..

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    How that for a start?

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  3. 2 minutes ago, Applesauce said:

    I don't think they do! I'm surprised because it's always sounded like something a school would make kids read. But that's ok, I bet I could just find the first few pages and see if I like it.

    It's about a phantom "ghost" that haunts the opera, box 5 is owned by him, he makes a girl sing, and love him, and makes the managers pay him in the middle of each month, and a human that has feelings for the new singer(I'm not going to spoil names) and tries to get her to remember him, (That's all I'm going to say)

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  4. 5 minutes ago, W-C-A19RanSSdom87F-P-C said:

    Okay, Imma get my book just in case

    Turns out, I couldn't find it..

    4 minutes ago, Okay said:

    Could make a book based off this image

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    How?

  5. 1 minute ago, Applesauce said:

    Thank you but I could probably pick it up at school. We have pick up days for work and library books and all that stuff. Let me check if they have it...

    Okay, Imma get my book just in case

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  6. 1 minute ago, Applesauce said:

    No, and I thought it was shakespeare until I looked it up. My english teachers have failed me. Why?

    Oof-

    I've read it at least twice now, it's a really good book!

  7. 1 minute ago, Applesauce said:

    no no don't think like that. It's hard to get over the initial cringe of reading your writing, but never beat yourself up. And if your not ready to commit to a book maybe try a short story? You'll still be able to see what you need to work on and what you got down.

    That's true..

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  8. (I've never actually written a book before.. I just wanna see how it turns out, and how good I am at it, though I don't think it's going to turn out well.. I bet it'll be horrible..)

  9. 1 minute ago, Applesauce said:

    Gives me an idea of what you like to write and I'll see what my brain can cook up >:) 

    Fantasy, Horror..

    Uhmm..

    I think that's it..

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  10. Just now, Okay said:

    Can i get room 666?

    Oof-

    I'd get that room too!

    So.. room.. 

    The room people were murdered in before you became manager

    or If you have a blood red and black room, that'd be great!

    Or at least some blood on the walls..

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