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  1. Just now, Very Scawy Avokiddo said:

    Astraion nodded, internally wondering why someone would name their pup General

    (lol that's true. I guess General's just her title but she's so used to it being there it's become a part of her name in her mind. I still call her Whitetail a lot for brevity's sake)

    Whitetail began walking around camp, smelling for any scents. She also tried to detect which way the wind was going.

    @GreenTheCrowFox

     

  2. 25 minutes ago, Spooky Star Starless said:

    "Good idea. You." Tyler pointed to Whitetail. "You can smell the area, right? Does anything smell off or different? This death could be accidental, I mean we have no clue what animals are in this forest. And if it's someone in the group, we need to figure out who's sick enough to kill a child, and we need to figure it out soon before someone else dies."

     

    13 minutes ago, Pancake said:

    His heart sunk at the thought of being accompanied by a child murderer.

    ”Yeah, you have the best nose of our little group so.” He said.

    She didn't like being ordered around, usually she was doing the ordering, but since there was no chain of command and they had a point she decided to agree, "I'm pretty decent. Better at smelling than a person for sure. I'll take the antlered one with me. They seem to be a good tracker. He's already smelled the immediate area around the body."

    3 hours ago, Chiyanna said:

     

    "That does seem to be the case." Whitetail said as she began helping to clear a space, moving branches and such with her mouth and hooves, and letting others do the more fine clearing. ( @GreenTheCrowFox correct us if we're wrong)

    No scents of any other creatures...means one of our group killed them. Whitetail nearly blurted this realization, but on second thought it wasn't a good idea to panic everyone. Better do the autopsy first. "You do some more sniffing around, see if you can find any clues, err, what is your name?"

    (I'm kinda waiting for the response to this) @Very Scawy Avokiddo

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  3. 1 minute ago, Spooky Star Starless said:

    **slight gore descriptions**

    Tyler nodded and bent down next to the body, examining the wounds.

    "These wounds... I've never seen anything like them before, they don't look like normal stab wounds or cuts. Other than that though, my guess is he died by bleeding out, as there are no major arteries here." Tyler pointed to where the wounds were scattered.

    "You're...right." Whitetail was a bit surprised that one of the group knew this much about death. Was this person a soldier too?

  4. 1 hour ago, Pancake said:

    He paused after the space was cleared, then stood up and walked over to the body.

    “I’m gonna move him.” He said, rolling up his sleeves to reveal his thick, dark-skinned arms.

    he took a deep, shaky breath, then as carefully as he could put an arm under the boys knees and one under his shoulders, careful to hold his arms in place and make sure his limbs stayed relatively still as he hefted the dead weight in his arms up, blood ran viscously down his arms and dripped heavily onto the foliage below as he carried the body to the cleared area.

    he slowly and carefully laid the boy down on the cold, moist ground.

    ”alright. Can someone please note any and all of his wounds, any tattoos, birthmarks, piercings, any bodily marks.” He said, his hands still in front of him, dripping with the kid’s blood and dirtied with moss and dirt.

    oh god Jack what have you gotten yourself into? You’re about to dissect a kid for christs sake.

    His thoughts swam bitterly in his head as he just wiped the excess blood on his black pants, at least it wouldn’t stain too bad, might not make it look like he did the murdering.

    he rubbed his face best he could with blood-stained hands, smearing crimson across his bright Yellow petals.

    ”okay- okay, you’re okay, you’re okay, you’ll get through this, it’s just one little autopsy you’ll be fine.” He muttered to himself as (ineffective) reassurance.

    "Well he has these wounds that all look the same at multiple places on his body. Other than that, nothing else I can see."

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    So uh, we have our first kits...yay? This has got to be scandalous. I guess that's what happens when your medicine cat is so pretty. All the rogues want him.

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    This is the relationship events. It appears some are reacting to Bogstalk's mystery kits.

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    Look at the little kits in the camp! So cute!

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    CUTE! (and rambunctious!)

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    SO PRETTY! I've never seen that pattern before! They're a cute little one.1555497658_firstkitinteractionsDownyfur.PNG.77224ad36432411baaa55d0ec21ab5a3.PNG

    You'd think she woulda punished the one who was sneaking out of camp. Just sayin

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    Interesting...intrigue

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    That's...concerning. Is StarClan trying to tell us something?

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    Unsure which moon but Amberstar was thinking about love. So I sent her out on patrol alone with the cat she has highest platonic relationship, trust, and comfort with. The cat Blizzardrump may have tried to kill (twice!).

     

     

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    Nothin' much happened.

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    Well...relationship wise a few things happened.

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    Oooo...wonder what that's about.

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    I checked in with our one (default) StarClan cat. She's beautiful!

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    WHO DID HE WINK ATTT???

    OK that's an over-reaction. Probably nothing.

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    Apparently this is a thing. Tho I wouldn't become mates with him if I were u, he may have tried to kill a clanmate twice.

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    Downyfur is so pretty! Look at those leopard spots! She's like a jaguar! Also...I just realized her and Amberstar are our ONLY females...so not much chance for kits. This is RemnantClan 2.0 except worse. 

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    Cool! Investigated some mysterious footprints and successfully drove a rogue away.

  7. Moon 2 of GreenClan

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    Our clan's first events. A bit dramatic but nothing too much of consequence.

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    Relationships are effected every moon from relationship events.Helps you keep track of lore too.

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    Not sure what moon these are from but here are Scorchjaw's rleationships.

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    That's not good

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    Also not good but at least they're OK. Also this is our medicine cat. He's so pretty.

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    She was a kit the first moon. Now an apprentice.

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    What a pretty apprentice! And I love this interaction. Honestly the're all so pretty. I basically picked the prettiest cats out of the options given but they're all so cute and beautiful.

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    Yay! More freshkill.

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    That was kinda risky tbh but we were successful! I kinda imagine Blizzardrump sending Scorchjaw in there to try and get him hurt cause they have a beef. He is vengeful. But then the apprentice rushes in too and they have to go protect their apprentice and then they all drive the badger off. That's just me tho. I imagine Blizzardrump isn't the most moral cat in the world... Maybe he's responsible for the snake bite too...

  8. I just recently discovered this game (well I found it on here before, then forgot, then saw it on youtube and remembered) and got it yesterday. I'll post some screenshots on here and feel free to discuss the game and talk about your own playthroughs here too! Or on the older clan gen thread which I should give props:

    https://strayfawnstudio.com/community/index.php?/topic/14335-adventures-in-clan-gen/

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    View of my camp the first moon! I named it GreenClan (the clan Fernstar of RemnantClan came from). Maybe story-wise the origin of GreenClan (if the clan survives and thrives).

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    Relationships of Amberstar. This relationships tab is only in the developement version at this time.

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    Checking on a few of my cats the first moon.

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    This is the patrol selection, where you pick which of your eligible cats go on patrol together. You can have multiple patrols in a moon, but cannot patrol cats you have already put on patrol that moon again.

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    This is the prompt of the patrol where you can only click proceed or do not proceed. Your cats get little or no experience if you don't proceed, but your cats could get hurt or have a negative outcome if you do (should it be a dangerous prompt anyway). In this case there is no down-side to proceeding.

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    They ran across a rabbit acting strangely, and in this case Blizzardrump decided not to risk his apprentice's safety over one rabbit.

     

  9. 1 hour ago, Pancake said:

    "can you try and find exactly where he died? like.. if there was a scuffle or anything or is where he is right now just his.. death place?" he asked as politely as he could, his voice shaking slightly as he continued to clear a space.

     

    1 hour ago, Very Scawy Avokiddo said:

    "There aren't signs of dragging or a trail so I think he died here. I'm not a professional tracker though, i only know the basics."

    "That does seem to be the case." Whitetail said as she began helping to clear a space, moving branches and such with her mouth and hooves, and letting others do the more fine clearing. ( @GreenTheCrowFox correct us if we're wrong)

    1 hour ago, Very Scawy Avokiddo said:

    Astraion was horrified by this ward-substance's description.

    "I can't pick up anything other than the blood and our own scents, which might mean-" Astraion stopped himself. Mayyyyybe saying it could be one of them wasn't a great idea, especially since if it were true the murderer would murder him. Which was the one thing Einar told him not to do, dying.

    No scents of any other creatures...means one of our group killed them. Whitetail nearly blurted this realization, but on second thought it wasn't a good idea to panic everyone. Better do the autopsy first. "You do some more sniffing around, see if you can find any clues, err, what is your name?"

  10. 14 minutes ago, jack-o-pepper said:

     

    reese looked between the deer and the flower with his head in his hands before he started to laugh a sort of high-pitched hysterical laugh 

    why am i laughing this isnt funny theres nothing funny about this

    "well!!!! you guys have fun with that!!" he stood up "i would really rather not see any of this so ill just be over there if you need me!!" he started over to a different area away from everyone gathering 

    Whitetail blinked, they're just a civilian. For a civilian, simply seeing a dead body is quite a trauma. And everyone reacts to trauma differently. I just hope everyone here will be able to stay sane, at least a little sane. 

    She stood over the corpse now, giving it an inititial look over.

    @GreenTheCrowFox (anything new she would notice with a closer look?)

  11. 24 minutes ago, Pancake said:

    "Uhm. i can help, i know a bit about how to do this, relatively safely, my dad was- is a doctor and ive watched him or, had to watch him do autopsies before, so um i can- i can help, i also have apposable thumbs." he said, glancing at the corpse.

    "Oh," said Whitetail, a bit surprised, "Alright then." She walked over to the corpse.

  12. 15 minutes ago, Pancake said:

    He quieted down.

    She turned away from the flower-head guy, "Well anyway, we need to figure out how they were killed...in order to figure what could've done this," she began to approach the corpse. I have seen an awful lot of death, though most the time I already know what killed them because someone in my unit saw it happen. I'm no coroner but maybe I can figure it out? "I may need assistance..."

    20 hours ago, takoyamaaaS said:

     

    partridge sprang away from the corpse, landing in a crouched position perhaps ten feet away. they made strange crooning sounds, scared out of their mind, before straightening up and realizing they had seen corpses before, and were barely bothered by them at all. it was still a shock, though. shaking out their feathers, partridge cautiously rose from their crouch.

    (I'm pinging u cause u said ur character has seen a lot of death too, anyone is free to offer tho)

  13. 15 minutes ago, Pancake said:

    "HOW are you so calm about this, a kid just died!!" Jack exclaimed in an almost whisper, now suspicious of the talking deer.

    Her eyes flamed as she realized the flower-head guy was accusing her, "I've learned to stay cool under pressure, even in the face of death. If we freak out it gives whatever attacked this kid the chance to strike again. We must stay calm and be alert. Panic helps no-one. I've seen whole units consumed by it-" she paused, her eyes flashing distance and regret, "good soldiers die because of it."

  14. 23 hours ago, GreenTheCrowFox said:

    DAY 2

    @ItzFadeDaNightWing

    @eebee

    @Star Starless

    @Pancake

    @Berney

    @takoyamaaaS

    @Avokiddo

    @Chiyanna

    @jack-o-pepper

    As you awake, the smell of blood fills your nostrils.

    Investigating further, it was coming from that kid...

     

    BLAZE ( @eebee) IS DEAD

     

    [Minor gore below]

     

     

    23 hours ago, GreenTheCrowFox said:

    As you process everything, you realize that the fog has somewhat cleared, but only in the area you were in.

    The unusually tall trees seemed to have moved through the night.

    There seemed to be an area where the fog had cleared and the trees had separated that you were meant to be in.

    On the edges of this area, the trees were dense and hard to get through, and impossible to make a quick escape through. 

    I knew this place was dangerous! Even the forest itself appears to be against us...the trees seem to have moved! Who did this? Why is this place trying to kill us? What am I talking about...it's not this place, there's just dangers here like everywhere else...right? Her heart quickened, but she had to remain calm, for the sake of everyone else.

     

    20 hours ago, jack-o-pepper said:

    "wh-what the??? what???????" reese's eyes flitted around the corpse, trying to process what was going on. he shut his eyes tight

    okok wake up this is the part where i wake up wake up wake up

     

    16 hours ago, Spooky Star Starless said:

    Tyler awoke with a jolt. "Oh gods... not the kid"

     

    20 hours ago, takoyamaaaS said:

     

    partridge sprang away from the corpse, landing in a crouched position perhaps ten feet away. they made strange crooning sounds, scared out of their mind, before straightening up and realizing they had seen corpses before, and were barely bothered by them at all. it was still a shock, though. shaking out their feathers, partridge cautiously rose from their crouch.

     

    22 hours ago, Pancake said:

     

    He felt sick. He quickly scurried away from the body, covering where his mouth would be.

    Taking a deep breath, she said, "Calm down, everyone. We have to figure out what's going on here...whatever creature did this, they can't be that far away. ANd...we have to figure out how to get through these thick trees that are here all the sudden, it seems the forest is working against us."

  15. 6 hours ago, medicine cat said:

    I'm using a mix of challenge rules and gens I made up, and it's kind of evolved over time to how I form stories! Here, I'll show you what I use. It involves a lot of random generation and Pokemon. It's a little convoluted I have OCD so I make these things way too specific, so if you have any questions feel free to ask me!

    Most of the gens are negotiable, so if I really don't like what is generated, I'll bend the story a little. I have a clan generator I found, and then I've made an injury generator, a personality generator, and a prophecy generator.
    BASIS
    My basis for my rules was this thread I made back in 2018. The rules I use now are the same (except for the rogues, I just decide whether I want them in my clan or not now). 

    CLAN GEN
    Now when I play, I use a mix of my own perchance random generators and premade ones by other people. My starting clan is named based off of this Clan Generator I found. From there, I name cats either what I want or based off of a name from this gen.

    THE PERSONALITY GEN  (AKA my backbone)
    I originally had a lot of trouble coming up with personalities for every generated cat, so I made this generator. This one is the magic behind my playthroughs/stories I write. It's used for a lot of things since it's easier to just press "randomize" than make six extra gens!! 
    Cat personalities, gem colors, aspirations, and (loosely) mutation genes are chosen by this gen and by Pokemon natures. So for example:
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    "Lonely Nature" refers to the cat's personality, based off the Pokemon natures.

    The gem color in this example is pink; this is important for the generated personality since the Pokemon natures have different likes/dislikes. If the pokemon nature LIKES the corresponding color to the cat's gem, the cats are more likely to be friends, and then if they DISLIKE it, they're more likely to be enemies. The gem colors aren't an end-all, be-all; story events or things like jealousy can make cats hate each other anyway.

    You'll see "pattern b, velvet paw, or poison fangs"; The generator gives me three possible mutations to give to cats when they're born or inducted into the clan; I try to stick to them, but if I'm given genes that won't help the clan, I will go against the rules and give the cat a better one that fits the situation.

    Next, you'll see "Warrior"; this is the cat's aspiration in life. Possible choices are Warrior, Parent, Medcat, Leader, or Loner, with "Warrior" and "Parent" more likely to be chosen by the generator than the others. This is a newer feature that I added to add more conflict and depth to the stories, since in the books you'll often see cats called to be a medicine cat when they wanted to be a warrior or vice versa. This is why Petalblossom wanted to be a mom so much!

    The "Maybe" refers to "Yes/No/Maybe"; this is used for clan voting as well as for when cats ask other cats to be their mates or to have kits.

    The star is a generation of 1-4 stars, and it's used when cats get sick, injured, or, more recently, when they give birth. One star means bad things happen to the cat. Four stars means good things. It goes like this:
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    Occurences with one star when they happen to a leader cause the leader to lose one or more of their nine lives.

    The numbers at the end of the generation are simply used for when a leader loses a life. When a clan leader gets to around 70 days old, I hit the generator and subtract a randomly generated 1-50 days from their life span. I used to have it so I completely reset leaders' ages to young adult one day from their death, but I found it made leaders' lives impractically long and also made it so I'd forget to reset them and they'd die.

    THE GOOGLE DOC 
    So for instance, this is the google doc I've got going for the clan. It's short and sweet and keeps track of living cats' personalities as well as leader lives left so I can deem who's socially compatible when a new cat arrives. 
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    So for example, since Flamestar was generated an "Impish" personality, she's more drawn to cats with yellow gems and dislikes blue gemmed cats.
    Lizardkit's "Likes" is white because her personality was generated as Bashful. The pokemon natures chart doesn't have any color likes or dislikes for Bashful, so cats without likes or dislike colors are set to be drawn to other cats without preferences and set to dislike cats in the section that they're in in the natures chart. Bashful is in the blue section of the natures chart, so she dislikes cats with blue gems.

    You'll also notice that I have the active couple, Embercoat and Beestone, listed a second time with one heart. Every day in-story I hit the personality gen for a yes/no/maybe. Every day I get a yes (or a maybe if the cats haven't had kits before) I add to the hearts, and once it hits five hearts the couple has a kit. The hearts reset after a kit is born and the cycle continues.

    THE INJURY GEN
    When a cat is injured by a bearyena/wild dog, I use this gen to determine where the injury took place on the cat.

    THE PROPHECY GEN
    Another relatively newer one in my last few playthroughs, I've made it so my medicine cats can get prophecies! I tried to come up with as many prophecy prompts as I could with this generator. I generate a new prophecy every gathering, every half moon (aka ten days), and every time a new kit is born or becomes a warrior. Since a lot of the prophecies are hyper-specific, only a few prophecies generated actually make sense and get fit into the story.
    This is how illnesses come about, and how Crowstorm died of greencough; the prophecies that inspired this one I believe were "Misfortune comes for the brown-eyed cat" and "Beware of the bushy-tailed cat". I originally planned this to mean Crowstorm (who has brown eyes) was to be killed by Petalblossom (who has a bushy tail), but I really like Petalblossom and I didn't think it would fit her timid personality. I instead made it so that Petalblossom would spread a disease to Crowstorm which killed him. This also brought misfortune to the clan's OTHER brown-eyed cat, Flamestar.

    (Ooo interesting! My rules are probably even more complicated so I don't mind long and complicated. I've been working on putting them on here. What I have so far can be found at this link:

     

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  16. 1 hour ago, medicine cat said:

    Thank you so much! And ooh, I'll have to check RemnantClan out!! :D

    (Thanks! It's a bit of a long thread (6 pages), don't feel you have to read it all at once. Also the mate of one of my queens died of greencough shortly after she gave birth too??

    The WC Challenge apparently likes to do that </3 

    Also are you using the Ultimate Warrior Cats challenge, a different one, your own, or a mix?

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