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  1. 8 hours ago, Fox leaf said:

    After a few seconds of walking, she dropped into a crouch and stalked back, and used her special senses to try and track/find what made the noises

    10 hours ago, YourLocalStranger said:

    'That sounds like a you problem.' He grinned, already turning to walk away. 'Besides, it's not like buildings are haunted or anything. That's stupid. Imagine staying in one spot for your entire afterlife.' He thought he heard a small cry, just for a second, but he shrugged it off. Probably nothing.Β 

    You both end up getting bored of walking around the place. Neither of have looked at anything interesting.

    But wait, both of you suddenly spot a BIG cart. It smelt so good, the smell of chocolate and all those good things.

    -go to the box

    -talk to each other

    -other

  2. 10 hours ago, lizardcake said:

    "what's the dark place?"

    β€œIt’s a…can someone else explain it to her?” Mary asked, she glanced around but nobody responded. β€œOkay…the dark place is a place where β€˜bad souls’ go. If you refuse to go to the β€˜good place’ or the β€˜heavens’ then you get stuck here in the living world. Unless your soul gets sucked out. Bad souls with no heart are supposed to directly go to the dark place, but if they have enough soul stuff they stay here, in the living. She…she takes OUR soul so she can stay here to cause trouble.”

    -reply

    -other

    Β 

    ( //this β€˜dark place’ part was inspired by a bunch of horror genre books :] )

  3. 6 hours ago, Fox leaf said:

    Snowy turned to viktor, wings drooping slightly. she spoke in her odd way becuse of her odd snout. "Dish box fweels weird to me. Wanna take a look?"

    (@YourLocalStranger, this is where you reply if you weren’t aware)

  4. 19 hours ago, Fox leaf said:

    *Snowy felt herself focus on the box. It felt odd. Her ears slowly edged toward it and she closed her eyes and tried to listen for anything*

    You heard a small crying sound. You paused for a moment, and tried to hear it a again, but nothing. You are unsure if you should go tot he box or not

    -go to the box

    -ask Viktor

    -other

    13 hours ago, YourLocalStranger said:

    Β 

    You walk steadily into the machine. Who knows what wild animal could be hiding there? You study it, it looks so…old.

    -go to Snowy

    -investigate the machine more

    -other

    3 hours ago, lizardcake said:

    "oh."

    β€œYeah…it’s happened a couple of times to others. Then they had to go to the dark place.” she shuddered as she said β€œdark place”.

    -ask her about it

    -change the subject

    -other

    Β 

  5. 7 hours ago, lizardcake said:

    "something bad, right?"

    Mary frowns. β€œYes, something bad. She- she steals your soul. Bit by bit. That’s what you felt when you were weak.”

    -reply

    -other

    6 hours ago, YourLocalStranger said:

    -explore

    Snowy starts walking around, you follow them. You notice that Snowy is walking to a box, but a weird machine caught your interest.

    -follow Snowy

    -go to the machine

    -talk

    -other

    2 hours ago, Fox leaf said:

    *Turns ears while walking around to listen for noises*

    You notice something weird about a box. You felt cold…

    -go to the box

    -talk

    -other

  6. 3 minutes ago, lizardcake said:

    "she- she said i know what happens to ghosts that try to warn the living."

    β€œYou do know don’t you? I mean, this is the first time you’ve seen a living person come in here. But, you do know…right?” Mary asks

    -tell her you don’t know

    -tell her that you know something bad happens

    -don’t say anything

    -other

  7. Just now, lizardcake said:

    Β 

    You scramble away formΒ her. Finally you walk into the small corner where you and the other ghosts stay.

    β€œRosemary! What did she say to you? Oh Rosemary, your so brave to go out there!” a ghost named Mary says. Mary looks at you worryingly.

    -reply to Mary

    -walk away

    -other (your choice)

  8. 7 minutes ago, lizardcake said:

    Β 

    You stay where you are, hopingΒ sheΒ doesn’t notice. Even though that’s not possible.Β 

    β€œWell well well. What do we have here? OH, it’s little Rosemary.” She whispers, β€œYou see those kids over there? You know what happens to the ghosts who try to warn the living.” 

    You start to cry, sobbing in the little cardboard box your in.

    She smiles, and she lifts you up by the neck. She stares into your soul, and whispers something you can’t hear. You felt weak, and slid back into the cardboard box.Β SheΒ stares at you expectingly.

    -go to the other ghosts

    -talk to her

    -stay where you are

  9. Just now, lizardcake said:

    Β 

    You start to concentrating on the floor. You’ve seen the older kids do this, why not you?

    You try falling to the floor, attempting that your sinking in water.

    Then…nothing. You start to worry, you can’t sink through the floor, andΒ sheΒ isΒ right there.

    You now have two choices:

    -stay where you are

    -reveal yourself

  10. Just now, lizardcake said:

    Β 

    You quietly float towards it, being careful not to tip the other boxes over. You sit beside the one labels β€œDangerous poison: warning: do not open without a gas mask.” You peek from a small hole in the box. You notice thatΒ sheΒ is staring straight at you.

    -stay where you are

    -attempt to sink through the floor

    -reveal yourself

  11. Just now, lizardcake said:

    Β 

    You look around, then stare atΒ her. She looks away, and so you only have time to move somewhere else

    -behind the big melting pot

    -inside the box filled with rat posion

    -with the other (npc) ghostsΒ 

  12. @YourLocalStrangerΒ (accepted)

    @lizardcake

    @Fox leaf

    Snowy and Viktor walk cautiously into the factory

    -speak with each other

    -explore

    β€’

    Rosemary hides in the corner, afraid of whatΒ sheΒ might do.

    -move somewhere else

    -float toward Snowy and Viktor

  13. 13 hours ago, lizardcake said:

    (i don't know what you mean by old clothing like. worn out or what people actually wore in the past?)

    this quote is what i meant:

    11 hours ago, YourLocalStranger said:

    I think it depends on what time we're talking about. Like how old the ghosts are. If it's from the 1800s, then you gotta look up 1800s clothing, but I don't know what time pale wants the chocolate factory to be made.Β 

    when i mean old clothing i mean like

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