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Mod I edited the rules
since you prefer the old ones
so now you can use them
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1 minute ago, The One Who Turned Pale said:
I use kleki for most things
I sometimes use SketchesSchool bc thats the only safe art app our school provides plus it doesn’t need Wi-Fi
(SketchesSchool also has really good paintbrushes and it works really well with he Apple Pencil)
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23 minutes ago, ItzFadeDaSnek said:
I just graduated from 6th grade u-u
I don't want to go to middle school ;<;
(In our township 6th grade is elementary)
Same i really dont want to goooo
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18 minutes ago, Lizardcake said:
oh. In our school we have 8 grades.
dang
i guess thats how it is in Poland
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12 minutes ago, ItzFadeDaSnek said:
paale what art site thingy do u use
I use kleki for most things
I sometimes use SketchesSchool bc thats the only safe art app our school provides plus it doesn’t need Wi-Fi
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Just graduated from 5th grade 👍
also got candy 👍
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Just now, xXxTheLivingDeadxXx said:
( maybe hes on a trip for the summer?
Yeah probably
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epper when are you going to draw mine sob
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4 hours ago, The One Who Turned Pale said:
Ok I’ll ask my dad if we’re going there when i get home <33
My mom says she wants to go there bc if the food so we’re going there as well <333333
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🔫🥹
again, don’t ask
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Just now, The One Who Turned Pale said:
Also
tomorrow is the last day of school and its a half day
im excited for summer but also really sad bc im going to miss my friends :’((
some of my friends are going to a different middle school and so its harder to see them
Also i dont have to bring anything to shcool so my back doesn’t have to hurt when i walk 😌
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Also
tomorrow is the last day of school and its a half day
im excited for summer but also really sad bc im going to miss my friends :’((
some of my friends are going to a different middle school and so its harder to see them
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Just now, The One Who Turned Pale said:
bored
Theres like nothing to do
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2 hours ago, ItzFadeDaSnek said:
Let me give an example of how a conversation is usually written in books.
"_____, we should go to the mountains! I heard they're very pretty," ----- said eagerly.
_____ grinned. "Okay, fine, you win," they said in defeat.
It makes it less hard on the eyes in my opinion and has a better look overall.
Now for the actual words itself. I know that quality over quantity is a thing, but adding longer chapters and prologues and stuff, with more detail makes for a much more interesting book. If you use google docs, about 3-4+ pages is a chapter with like- font size 15. It makes a book a lot longer and full of more details, and in general is better for chapter books.
Also, I advise not using dialogue every few paragraphs. Only having dialogue doesn't give much to the imagination, and having more details and explanation of the mood and surrounding area brings a book to life and lets people imagine what things look like.
You might not read Wings of Fire, but imagine describing IceWings as "Usually blue and white dragons that live in the cold"
It gives no details to their wings, claws, tail, body form, abilities, NOTHING! 😧
Anyways, don't take offense, these are just some *pro* tips to get you started! Have fun writing, you can always ask me questions abt writing if ur stuck and I'll see if I can help :]
Fade I am assuming your great in writing class
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Sob i want to start sob
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6 minutes ago, ItzFadeDaSnek said:
he'll probably be on a bit less, but he still has his phone h
:]
ok thats better…ig..
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2 hours ago, Blizzard Starless said:
I just graduated
also I'm leaving forever bc we have to give our computers up
so bye ya'll lysm
SEEYA
NOOOGFDKOGKHNOKYHJOKOUKIOO
BLIZZ NOOOOOOOO
DONT LEAVE ME *SOBSOSBOSBSOBSOBSOSSOBSOBSOSBOSBSOSBOSBSOBS*
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6 hours ago, Blizzard Starless said:
OML I'M GOING TO IRELAND AND SPAIN DEPENDING ON WHERE YOU GO WE MIGHT BE IN THE SANE COUNTRY OJIEIJEIOJED
OMGMGOMGMGOL
IM GOING TO SPAIN AS WELLLLL
OMG BLIZZ I SWAER IF I SEE YOU-
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4 hours ago, Modiano said:
Go to Italy
Ok I’ll ask my dad if we’re going there when i get home <33
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4 hours ago, Modiano said:
I am once again bullying you into making a pantalan base, please.
*sob*
fine what tribe and fullbody/headshot/ or any pose
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Gaylord star storkless
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