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  1. Bian (the short snout), leader of the Adamads, faces off a balance bear, her son and daughter behind her. She ended up killing it with the help of some of her tribemates : D (if need be I can give Bian and even her children's genes)

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  2. 10 hours ago, Katumai said:

    i'll update again sometime tonight, but i have a question-

    I have a Toyhouse now (basically a character trading/storage website) and I'm planning to add in all the characters from this playthrough, but I technically need everyone's permission for some of them because of the characters that i dont own ehyufhehwbtdwefvedwvftr so if you're comfortable with me doing that and could tell me that would be great

    credit my th as creator. I made him but you own him now

    https://toyhou.se/recklessbee

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  3. 1 minute ago, Cookboi said:

    Can you give me the clan ranks and names? Without that, I won’t be able to make a code.

    names and ranks are all standard. can't give you all the names but some examples are Minthare, Cloudfoot, and Badgercloud (some canon names are really weird, I ain't going that route lol). I haven't made the other Clan yet (for the most part) but the main clan has (at the beginning/near the beginning of the story) 1 leader, 1 deputy, 2 medicine cats, 13 warriors, 4 apprentices, 7 kits (3 litters--3 queens), and 2 elders. 

    anyways, out of the official warrior code, the ones I almost definitely want to keep (with some edits in certain places possibly) are: #2 (enforced with murder lol), #3, #5, #8, #9, and #13. #10, #12, #15 and #16 can all be abolished (though there will be some sort of gathering taking place every once in a while, possibly just between leaders or something).

    sorry this is a lot of info and numbers lol. you don't need to write out a whole code just for me, just some ideas is great : )

  4. I need ideas for an interesting warrior code. important thing is there's 2 clans, they hate eachother, they only work together in the sense that they have the same starclan (though it's also kind of divided, maybe not as much) and the same code and if there's a threat that could take both of them down they'll try and stop it together. there's a lot of murder at their borders. 

    can't give any more context because it could possibly be spoilers. anyways I need ideas for an interesting (and largely unique from the canon clans') warrior code for these clans to share, I can't think of any : ( thanks!!

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  5. 11 hours ago, PincerClaw420 said:

    The only real criticism I have (and take this with a grain of salt), is that the info dump of the kitten's personalities and physical traits in Chapter 1 could have been done a tiny bit better. If I was in your shoes and wanted to, say, show that Smoke is skilled at catching flying insects, I would have written a scene where she is shown swiftly catching a fly, adding a description of her physical features in the scene as well. (<<< just an example)

    I have things I want to do right now so I haven't read the doc yet but I will later...but looking at this^, I have another recommendation: scatter everything. don't put every personality and physical trait in chapter one. spread them out, especially the appearance. put in the most important traits earlier on, but save the other ones for later. and like Pincer said, show don't tell (don't use the word "feel").

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  6. ***disclaimer: I do NOT have the ability to give account codes!! that's only for premium members who pay for a subscription and I am a child with no allowance!***

    anyone else here have a toyhouse account? a while ago I managed to snag an account code from reddit (just look up "toyhouse codes reddit", ask on the recent posts and you might get lucky), so I've been busy adding all my few characters that I own to it :)

    anyways I want to look at other people's characters and credit people with their toyhouse accounts on their art they made for me (instead of using links to these forums) so yeah here's my account: https://toyhou.se/recklessbee

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  7. 9 hours ago, modiano said:

    Anyone wants a female pink dragon? She would be able to influence the gender of eggs to be girls

    yes... please... HELP ME. TOO MANY MALES,,,

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