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1 minute ago, Certified Baguette Lover said:
I just realized you can save image these instead of cropping them
you can also right click and just copy to clipboard if you don't want to save it to the computer
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(FYI double-posting is okay in my book, just as long as it's not like 5 posts in quick succession when not on one of the spam-allowed-and-encouraged forum games)
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a long time ago I had a dream about this purple nicheling named Sprigflower and long description short she had a scorpion tail AND a fishing tail (she's a goddess now). so yeah upvote
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Welcome! ,(^-^)/
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Heracles: hey Philoctetes please burn me alive thanks here's my bow
Philoctetes: yeah sure man *gets bitten by a snake then deserted on an island by Odysseus*
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This has been suggested before, so please add your votes there so we can get this into the game!
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so my city has this radio channel or whatever for classical music and on the website the comments (powered by Facebook) are always by a bunch of old people being like "I remember listening to this when I was a child" or "I went to the symphony and heard this song, I love it" and today I noticed there's some new comments by the new generation

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50% pressed it...

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cons: school and homework
pros: I'm officially a High Schooler. also my lab partner is my crush because "the person beside you will be your lab partner" and we were the only ones who sat by ourselves...
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On 8/20/2020 at 2:19 PM, Vanilla said:
“Pfff! As if!” Isabella Laughed as She And Her Friends Ate Thin-Mints And Played games in her Bedroom, She Had Blonde hair in a bun and A Flower Crown of Daisies, short shorts and A Purple hoodie with green cat eyes and ears on the top that stretched down slightly past her thighs, Her hood was not on.
1. Words should only be capitalized (there's probably something I'm forgetting, but usually this is it) when A) They're the first word in a sentence (ex. The girls ate.) or B) They're a proper noun (names, places, brands, etc) (ex. Isabella ate Thin Mints.)
2. Try and spread out the descriptions-- just a little bit at a time (you can put more in one place if a character is looking someone down when meeting them-- ex. "A girl ran towards me. Her blonde hair fell out of her bun as she stepped, and her flower crown of daisies nearly fell off. She had a long purple cat hoodie on, though the hood was not up.). Instead of saying "She had blonde hair in a bun and a flower crown of daisies," try something like "A lock of her blonde hair fell out of her bun into her face, bringing a daisy from her flower crown with it." Give some action rather than just tell.
3. This is what's called a "run-on sentence". It's taken several subjects and put them in one sentence, making it too long and confusing. (An example with the run-on-ness corrected: “Pfff! As if!” Isabella Laughed as She And Her Friends Ate Thin-Mints And Played games in her Bedroom. She Had Blonde hair in a bun and A Flower Crown of Daisies, short shorts and A Purple hoodie with green cat eyes and ears on the top that stretched down slightly past her thighs. Her hood was not on.)
Here's an example of what I might write if I were to write this sentence:
"Pfff! As if!" laughed Isabella, a Thin Mint in hand. She and her friends were playing games in her bedroom. Her laugh causes a lock of her blonde hair to fall into her face, causing a daisy from her flower crown to fall to the floor. (later I'd put in the hoodie part)
Don't be discouraged from there being too many errors. You're learning. Making mistakes can help you improve. Just keep working!
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Looking great! Can we give (light) criticism?
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1 hour ago, Lisa said:
Also, im drawing on Mobile, as i have no idea HOW anyone can draw on computer.
does anyone know any good Drawing apps?
I draw on my laptop with my finger using the ouch screen. most people have a drawing tablet that hooks up to the computer.
when I used to draw on mobile I used Medibang Paint
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you can still rewind to the beginning while it's live
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"Hey, I don't want to put a damper on all the fangirling, but..."
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(warning: a little cursing)
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"Dude. James Bond just hit on Lucy."
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