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  1. 4 hours ago, Gaylord Star Starless said:

    Iris looked over and saw a sketch lying beside him.  He looked over everyone's faces and flinched a little. There was Cedar, alive and smiling. There was Moeruhime, the backstabber, and there was Lockwood, the backstabbing, heartbreaking, supposed friend. He looked at Vivus and masked his anger at all 3 of them. He stood up and hung it on the fridge. "It's beautiful." he reassured.

    "Its a painful reminder of what we once were, Iris...what we can be in a future..."  Vivus grimaced at the sketch.  " And maybe, my dreams can come true..." 

  2. 1 hour ago, Gaylord Star Starless said:

    Iris stretched and shrugged. "Fine, I think. I didn't have a vision, so I think that's a good sign."

    "It is... that means no more stress..or- not alot of stress for you atleast!" She glanced at the sketch beside Iris, slightly gesturing for him to look at it while she went back to her room.

  3. 8 hours ago, polly said:

    also sometiems i wont get mad at you when you use the emote because context matters

    What if someone genuinely likes the comment but doesn't exactly love it? Because for me. The thumbs up is just like an "Okay...uh...cool?"  Or an "Alright, I get it"    

     

    And now I have a feeling that the answer is gonna be smth like "Then don't use an emote" and that kinda makes sense- 

     

    Anyways, I shall respect your wishes ^ ^

  4. 11 hours ago, xXxTheLivingDeadxXx said:

    Alright. 

     

    Time to criticize and roast art.  

     

     

    #1 

    This has so many pins, It might as well be a pin cushion( I like it) 

     

    #2

     

    I need to getaway from it. 10/10 

     

    #3 

     

    Yes. 

     

    #4

    Sheep goat. 10/10

     

    #5

     

    Love 

     

     

    And the rest is yes. 

     

     

     

    If I took it too far, I'm sorry. I like your art, no adjustments.

    In all seriousness, the first image of getaway is off...ish-, the eyes are just too big, that's all... I dunno, it's your art choice. 

  5. 9 minutes ago, Gaylord Star Starless said:

    Iris flopped down on the couch and grabbed a blanked. "Might as well take a nap, while I can sleep peacefully." he couldn't remember the last time he had taken a nap that wasn't caused by a vision, but the second his head hit the pillow, he was unconscious.

    Vivus finished her sketch and decided to show Iris. When she found Iris asleep on the couch, she decided to put a blanket over him and set the sketch on the coffee table and went back to her room. She fell asleep on her desk. 

  6. Just now, polly said:

    part 2 edition

    i think??? ive improved since i last did this??? (which i deleted if you didn't know lmao)

    so yeah

    im gonna regret this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Alright. 

     

    Time to criticize and roast art.  

     

     

    #1 

    This has so many pins, It might as well be a pin cushion( I like it) 

     

    #2

     

    I need to getaway from it. 10/10 

     

    #3 

     

    Yes. 

     

    #4

    Sheep goat. 10/10

     

    #5

     

    Love 

     

     

    And the rest is yes. 

     

     

     

    If I took it too far, I'm sorry. I like your art, no adjustments.

  7. 17 minutes ago, Gaylord Star Starless said:

    Iris watched Vivus walk away.  He sighed. Don't feel bad, she's not mad... he told himself. However, he had a pang of guilt in his stomach.

    Vivus started to sketch, she sketched her and Iris and cedar and Lynx....Lockwood- no.. not Lockwood. He didn't deserve a place in the sketch, but Vivus wasn't cruel at heart, so she decided to draw Lockwood hugging Iris. A tear fell on them( Iris and Lockwood)  Vivus actually missed  Lockwood. Something was different without his complaining and arguing, and him an Iris laughing together...

     

     he's a traitor... 

  8. 2 hours ago, Gaylord Star Starless said:

    "No, you're not. Don't worry. Friends are supposed to be able to talk to each other about stuff, and that's exactly what you did." Iris said.

    " Yes but I-" she redirected her response

    "Thanks...Iris." she made herself smile, patted his shoulder, and walked through the hallways into her room.

  9. 2 minutes ago, Gaylord Star Starless said:

    "Its ok! Don't worry, no matter what you say you'll still be my friend." Ok maybe that's a little bit of a lie, but as long as she doesn't join Kamado she'll be my friend. he thought.

    Vivus smiled, feeling relieved and hugged him back again from pushing him away. " Thank you- Im sorry about being such a pain..."

  10. Just now, Gaylord Star Starless said:

    Iris looked taken aback. "Vivus-  I- Of course I don't hate you! You're the only genuine person I appear to have left, and of course I trust you and think of you as my friend! Why would you think different?" He hugged her tighter.

    " Because you- I don't know why I said that! "   Vivus tried her best to take in deep breaths to calm herself, she relaxed her muscles and closed her eyes, slowly losing her fear, though it was still present.

  11. 2 minutes ago, Gaylord Star Starless said:

    Iris rubbed his thumbs as he hugged Vivus. I don't want to lie to her, but I have to. The last thing I want is for someone to hurt her when they find out who I am...

    Vivus felt a wave of anger, but not at iris, to the world...to herself. " Do you hate me, Iris? Do you really see me as a friend or just as some company that's here to just... make you feel better, because ' hey, my boyfriend sucks, at least I've got back up!' "  she quickly covered her mouth, then her face and groaned in disapproval " I'm so sorry, I didn't mean it! ...That won't change the way you feel." she suddenly had waves of the same vision, over and over and over again. she couldn't bear to look at him, she only held her head and sobbed. 

  12. On 6/1/2022 at 1:31 PM, Gaylord Star Starless said:

    Iris squeezed Vivus tighter. "Right now? But I'm not angry at anything, especially not you! Why would I leave?"

    "Its not because you were angry! It was- you seemed sad and scared- and-and.. MINDLESS!" Tears streamed down her face. "Just don't leave!" She started shaking. 

  13. 28 minutes ago, xXxTheLivingDeadxXx said:

    " Yeah maybe... " she forced on a smile, it nearly looked real. She got out an empty book and started writing in it.

    a tear fell from Vivus's face as she wrote, the tear smudging the ink.. she was having another vision about Iris, she held her head, mumbling...

     

    " Make it stop... Make it stop... Please- My head...." 

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