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WHY CANT I FIND MY HOMETHREAD ON THE MAIN PAGE
(acting like it isnt dead)
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3 hours ago, Bosi said:
Hiya, I finally made an account, I'm Stranger's Sister, so if you want to put in my @ instead you can, I'm sure it will be easier on everyone. Thanks!
Can confirm 👍👍👍👍
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4 hours ago, Andromeda_ said:
also idk what to critique since its not like i'm a master writer either
You don't have to be, I'm just asking in case someone wants to leave critique!
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Well, that's it! I hope you liked this silly little story, because I loved writing it! (Also somehow this playthrough has 5k views so like???)
If you can, could you tell me what you liked and didn't like about the story, the characters or the way it was written, because I want to improve my writing :D.
Also who was your favourite or most hated character-
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The sister looked at the brother as the rest of the tribe stepped across the rocks. The sea was calm today, the weather sunny, but chilly. The brother smiled at her, and nodded at the travelling stone between them. On it were directions on how to get to the next island. To tell the truth, the port didn’t look very welcoming, but the tribe had decided this was what was best. Ever since the tribe arrived here, they had dealt with misfortune after misfortune, but they persevered. They stood strong during the storm, but now it was finally time to leave this stormy island. Who knows, maybe the next island will be worse than this one. But they would cross that bridge when they came to it.
‘One step at a time!’ Nodded the sister, hopping onto the stepping stones.
‘One step at a time.’ The brother repeated, following her.
And so they left, not looking back at this Deadly Isle their tribe had called home for so long.
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Kendyll stared out across the water. He was stupid. So stupid. Still he didn’t regret it, that much anyway. He was glad the wind ruffling his fur hid the slight tremble of his paws. He distantly heard the waves crashing against the cliff far below. The only cliff on the island. He could still remember Neoki’s voice, asking for a volunteer. Frankly, the plan was stupid. Sit here, and the murderers will come for you. Yeah, sure. Then what? Alia was hidden in the grass further away, and if anything happened she would raise the alarm call for the others to come help. If the whole tribe hid nearby, the murderers wouldn’t come anywhere near here. He let out a slow breath, looking down at the water below him. His head spun, and he quickly sat back. He was meant to be acting heartbroken over the death of his father, and while he was mourning, Kendyll wasn’t one to show it. He was quiet about his sadness. A twig snapped behind him. Spinning around, he saw the red fur Shee told them about. Fess was right. It was Randi. Kendyll felt a surge of guilt. If it wasn’t for him, and the rules he always stuck to, no one would have been hurt. He was pulled out of his thoughts as he realised Randi was acting off. Randi sat down as if he didn't have a care in the world, and simply smiled at Kendyll across the small clearing on the cliff. There was almost a joy in his eyes as he looked at Kendyll, but the joy looked twisted. He looked at Kendyll, as if they were long lost friends.
‘You’re a terrible actor, Kendyll.’ Randi spoke.
‘W-what?’ Of course he had to stutter. To be honest, he was terrified.
‘Acting like you’re not here to be bait. I’m actually surprised you would volunteer. Are you afraid of me?’ Randi tilted his head. Something was wrong. Alia should have raised the call by now.
‘No.’ Kendyll raised his head high. ‘We know what you’re doing. You want revenge, but we’re not letting you have it. Just leave Randi, while you can.’
‘Oh, I’m not leaving. After all the hard work I’ve put in, don’t you think I deserve a reward?’ Randi was still smiling as he stalked forward, but the madness obvious in his eyes crept into his expression. ‘It was your fault Kendyll. I know I have no chance of ever rejoining this tribe. What I can do, is end you.’
‘Neoki was the one who exiled you. Not me.’ Kendyll didn’t step back. Earlier he had counted every step to the cliffside, and if he took one more step, he would be in danger of being thrown over.
‘Neoki, was influenced by you. She would never want to hurt me. And I won’t hurt her. She Isn’t the one at fault here.’ Randi spat, his smile immediately disappearing. Kendyll thought he heard something over the sound of the waves, but he couldn’t be sure.
‘Alia. What did you do with Alia?’ Kendyll couldn’t stop himself. If Randi hurt her…
‘She’s quite busy right now.’ Kendyll expected Randi to jump at him. Instead, a black creature leaped at him from the side, toppling him to the ground. Kendyll kicked him off and leapt back up, only for Randi to bite his ear and pull, causing Kendyll to fall down again. Randi raised his claw, and drove it across Kendyll’s face. A scream tore out of him, and he rolled away, standing up and trying to see through the blood smudging his vision.
‘Take your time, Halim.’ Randi said. His voice was as cold as ice, no mercy in it. He truly was mad. Halim ran forward and ducked under Kendyll’s swipe, before ramming into him with his antlers. The wind was knocked out of Kendyll, and he fell down again. Halim loomed over him, blocking out the sun. The bright sun. Was that the last thing Kendyll would see?
‘Don’t touch my brother!’ Alia screamed, as she threw herself against Halim. He yelped as he tumbled back, almost falling off the cliff. Alia’s back leg was broken, and there was a wound somewhere on her body, but a bright fire blazed in her eyes. Randi hissed and went for her, but Kendyll darted forward and tackled him. Alia ran towards the recovering Halim, and with a mighty heave, pushed him off the cliff.
Everyone heard his cry as he fell down towards the water below. There were tears in Alia’s eyes, as the realisation of what she had done hit her.
‘No!’ Randi yelled and ran to the cliff edge. He had thrown Kendyll off, and both he and Alia were too weak to stop him. But Neoki wasn’t. Using all the strength she had, she ran forward and pushed Randi to the ground.
‘Let me go! He can’t swim!’ Randi screamed, trying to push her off, but he was much frailer than her, and she had thrown herself on top of him so he couldn’t move.
‘You’ll die!’ Neoki yelled in his face. Suddenly, tears pricked her eyes. ‘I would have let you come back! If I found you again, I’d have made something up, I’d have lied, just to bring you back into our tribe! Don’t you see what you’ve done!’ Randi’s eyes widened.
‘T-thats not…’ He couldn’t reverse all this. He couldn’t make it go back to the way it was. She would have let him come back.
She would have let him come back.
She would have let him come back.
She would have let him come back. She would have let him come back. She would have let him come back. She would have let him come back. She would have let him come back. She would have-
‘No!’ Randi yelled again, and this time he managed to push the two closer to the edge. Kendyll heard rocks crumbling.
‘Neoki…’ He called out weakly, but his face hurt so much he couldn’t even think. The rock, it was-
A loud crack echoed across the ocean. Neoki and Randi managed to make eye contact, just before the rock under them gave way. And they understood. Randi’s revenge only made him bleed, destroying him until he was nothing like he was before. And Neoki’s inability to let go quietly wrecked her, until she was only an actor performing a play to those around her, acting like she was calm and in control, when in reality, her heart was lonelier than the ocean.
And the rock gave way. And they fell, down towards the water below, until the crashing of the waves swallowed them both, hungry jaws taking them under.
The wind whistled on the clifftop as Calypso finally reached the clearing. Kendyll and Alia only dimly heard her voice. Then everything was quiet.
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3 hours ago, pepper_ said:
it's bevayae you are rhe same petsob
I can't even read this-
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Also I like how the story is going so far! Your writing is very descriptive!
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7 hours ago, Andromeda_ said:
it's pronounced "Bree-ya" cause its Spanish hehe. Also speaking of Spanish HAPPY HISPANIC HERITAGE MONTHHHH THATS MY CULTURE BABYYYY)
WOOOOO
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Fess holds her kit close, trying her best to listen to what Neoki was saying while also making sure Inko didn’t toddle out of the nest. It hurt her to think that Inko would never know what King was like, how he smiled and laughed, how bold and kind he was. Fess had cried all her tears, but that didn’t mean her grief was gone. However, she knew that she had to be there for both her sons, no matter what. Neoki’s voice snapped Fess to the present. Neoki was frowning at her.
‘Uh, I’m sorry, what?’ Fess felt herself burn under her fur from the embarrassment.
‘The strange creatures that have been following us. I asked if you might know who they are, as you are one of the more experienced members of the tribe.’ Neoki patiently explained. She was sitting down on a slightly higher patch of ground. It was custom for leaders to stand during important announcements, but Neoki’s condition seemed to be getting worse the older she got. It seemed the tiredness and weakness she had was worst in her back legs, so much so that she had to sit or lie down most of the time. However, she could still walk around just fine, it was just too tiring for her. Her mind was still as sharp as flint though, and she was probably the most intelligent leader the Tribe of Sun has had for many moons.
‘Sadly, no. Anyone I can think of that might do something like this doesn’t fit the description Shee gave us.’ Fess sighed. Red fur and black fur. She suspected who the creature with red fur might be, but could she say it to Neoki? Neoki continued talking, about a plan of some sort, but Fess was already thinking. Cane was the only other creature who would probably remember Randi well enough to suspect him, but Cane was quiet and reserved. It was up to her.
‘Neoki, excuse me.’ Fess spoke up, standing up and handing Inko over to Aksit.
‘Speak.’ Neoki nodded.
‘The red-furred creature, I was thinking he might be…Randi.’ Fess spoke slowly. Fess couldn’t see it, but in that moment, Neoki’s muscles tensed, and her air of calm broke for a second. The rest of the tribe was quiet. The silence was like a veil, keeping Fess and Neoki hidden from everyone else. Neoki struggled to keep her voice even. Fess was one of her closest friends, why would she say something like this?
‘You and I both know that Randi is most likely dead. He was exiled as a child.’ Neoki said quietly. ‘And even if he was alive, why would he resort to killing his tribe like this? If he wanted revenge, he would have gone for me.’
‘Randi loved- loves you Neoki. I remember him, he never would have laid a paw on you.’ Fess argued. ‘Maybe he’s going after those who wronged him? Or those who he always secretly disliked?’
‘Fess, this is extremely unlikely. If you allow it, can we get back to making a plan?’ Neoki’s voice took on a cutting quality. This conversation was over.
‘Of course.’ Fess sighed, sitting back down. Cane gave her a pat on the back, for at least trying. Neoki was clever, that was true. But her grief made her blind to things that were obvious. Maybe Shee could explain some more. Where was he anyway?
‘Aksit, have you seen Shee anywhere?’ Fess murmured.
‘Nope. I think he was with Kendyll and Alia, but they arrived alone.’
‘Can you please go ask them? This is an important meeting, he should be here.’ Fess took Inko off her son. Aksit whispered to her that he would, and snuck through the crowd. Eventually he bumped into Alia. A quick explanation was all it took to bring a worried expression to her face.
‘But he was right behind us? He said he had to take care of something, and he’d join us in a few minutes.’ She frowned.
‘Shee?’ Neoki called, her face full of confusion. ‘Where is he? It’s his turn to speak.’
‘He’s still out there!’ Alia cried, darting away from everyone, and back to the place where they found the sick wanderer.
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‘At least tell me why you’re doing this.’ Shee spoke out loud. He was in an empty clearing, but he could feel them watching him. He had to do this, he knew the creatures had been following him for days now.
‘But if I tell you, you’ll run off and tell everyone, won’t you?’ The not-so familiar voice of Randi sent chills down Shee’s spine. He whipped around to face him, his fur as red as Neoki’s. He had changed so much, he was thinner, looked more agile, and more grown than before. But what changed the most were his eyes. There was a strange madness in them, something that he hadn’t seen before. Randi walked as if he was stalking prey. Shee stood his ground.
‘The chances of that are small.’ Shee said drily. ‘I know you have an accomplice.’
‘That he does.’ The voice of the shadow, from behind him. The shadowy creature looked much clearer in daylight, but his fur still remained an inky black.
‘You want to know why I’m doing this. Except I’m not going to tell you, because I’m not stupid.’ Randi spat. ‘All you need to know is that Kendyll is the creature I want to get rid of, and getting rid of you will help me get rid of him. Maybe then he’ll stop hanging around that orange creature, at least for two seconds.’
‘Why you then?’ Shee turned to face the shadow. It grinned back at him.
‘Let’s just say me and Randi are friends, of sorts.’ The shadow didn’t seem to be bothered by his half-mad friend. Randi snorted at that, but didn’t deny it. It seemed the shadow was enjoying this, while Randi just saw all this as a means to an end.
‘Are you going to hurt me?’ Shee tried to keep his voice calm and confident. It didn’t really work. Randi didn’t say anything. He leapt at Shee.
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‘Neoki?’ Alia’s voice.
‘Yes?’ Neoki’s voice, almost as distressed as Alia’s.
‘That plan you were talking about. Where one of us is bait. And the others hide and attack those creatures when they show up?’
‘What about it?’
‘We need to go ahead with it. Now.’
‘...I agree.’ Neoki whispered. They were too late to save Shee. She wouldn’t lose anyone else.
(okay things are getting dramatic lol)
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Can my sister join? (My sister joining art contests on the forums she doesn't have an account on strikes again)
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I have no clue how to draw dragons but here I am anyway lmao
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You know the way earlier I said I had problems with eating?
Well I think me and my family have figured out what it is. A gluten sensitivity. A literal gluten sensitivity 💀. That would also explain how I'm so ungodly thin, like you can see my ribs, it's because my body can't process the good nutrients bc I keep eating gluten. Anyways I've been going on a gluten free diet for a little while, and I actually feel a lot better, and my anxiety isn't as bad anymore either!
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Aksit prowled through the bushes, the stink of bearyena filling his nostrils. He had been tracking this one for days. Both Neoki and Fess had told him to stop it, to stop needlessly risking his life by seeking out bearyena, but he really couldn’t. In truth, he felt awful about going behind his Mom’s back, he loved her very much. But on the other hand, he couldn’t just let these monsters roam free. If Dad was still here, Aksit was sure he’d be proud of him. Dad was always daring, and Aksit wanted to be like him. Aksit paused.
Here.
He crept forward, his paws barely making a sound on the soft grass. He peered through the bushes at an empty clearing. Wait. Not empty. A small bundle of dark brown fur lay there. A creature? Aksit was about to stand up and go towards it, before it whined. It sounded nothing like a creature, and his blood ran cold as he realised it was a bearyena pup. He should kill it. Pounce on it, and rid this island of another monster. It whined again, louder this time. If bearyena could cry, this is probably what it would sound like. Pity panged in Aksit’s heart. Was it alone?
He crept forward, until he was right in front of it. It saw him, but didn’t move. Aksit stood up, but it still didn’t move. He walked all around it. Nothing. Just as he was about to poke it, he realised it was incredibly thin for a bearyena. He could see its ribs. Wasn’t its mother meant to care for it? The pup whined again, and he could see how its eyes were glazed over with pain. It was dying. Even if he fed it now, it wouldn’t do anything for it. Again, Aksit felt that pity in his heart. He could just leave it to die. It's not his problem.
Aksit turned to leave, before stopping. Would King want this? For his son to heartlessly turn his back on something that needed his help? Even though it was a monster, it was still just a pup…. He sighed, before scooching up beside it. It didn’t push him away, so he wrapped his tail around it to warm it up a bit. Maybe it mistook Aksit for its mother, or maybe it was just cold, but it curled up against him. He stiffened, but didn’t move. It was kind of Ironic, how he came here to kill a bearyena, and yet he was comforting one as it faded away.
‘Aksit! Don’t!’ A slightly familiar voice yelled across the clearing. The pup whimpered and tried to get up, but failed. Aksit gently patted its head to get it to calm down.
‘Hush. You’re scaring it.’ Aksit replied in a calm tone. He looked over at the voice across the clearing, at Shee as he stood there. Shee mustn't have heard, because he bolted forward and pulled Aksit away from the bearyena.
‘It’s only a pup, don’t hurt it!’ Shee cried, standing between the two.
‘I’m not a monster! I know that!’ Aksit hissed, before barging past and sitting down next to the pup again. Its breathing was more shallow now. ‘It’s dying. Let it die in peace.’
‘I thought you were…’ Shee paused for a moment, before realising what was going on. He seemed more than embarrassed as he spoke. ‘Ah. I’m sorry Aksit. I thought you were going to…’
‘You’re right, I hate bearyena. But I’m not going to kill a pup.’
‘Of course. Neoki was asking for you.’ Shee said, wanting to switch the subject. Aksit laid his head down and let the pup huddle against his fur. It made his fur stand on end, being so friendly with a bearyena, but he knew he had to do this. He couldn’t, wouldn’t let it die alone.
‘Tell her I’m busy right now. I’ll meet with her in a moment.’
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Fani felt the coughs rack her body again. She lay there, wheezing in the grass as her vision clouded. Not again! I was getting better, I was!
But this was worse than her ordinary cough attacks. Her heart almost stopped as she realised there was blood mixed in with her spit. She wasn’t even that sick! Denial flooded her thoughts. She was fine. She was going to be fine. Her limbs suddenly grew weak, and she collapsed to the ground. She heard distant voices, or maybe it was just her mind making it up. She weakly called out for help, but it came out as more of a rasp. She saw two creature’s in the distance, one fiery orange, and the other a pale yellow. They must be Olik and Kilo, the Gods of death, come to take her heart away! She wasn’t ready to die!
She struggled to get up, but the orange one bolted forward and gently helped her to lie down again. The yellow one looked incredibly agitated, and pulled the orange one away. Fani only felt a small amount of sadness at that. She was used to creatures staying away from her. They seemed to be talking. From what Fani heard, the orange one was named Alia, and the yellow one Kenny. The two seemed to come to a conclusion. Fani opened her mouth to beg them to help her, but only more coughing came out. Everything hurt…
Alia darted off, while Kenny stayed. He inched forward, until he eventually got close enough to help her to a nest nearby. Fani heard him muttering under his breath, about how this was ‘Against the rules’ and ‘Dangerous’. He helped her lay down. Faintly, she heard him ask if she was alright. She wanted to say, ‘Obviously not’, but she only coughed harder. It felt like her insides were falling out.
Alia rushed back with a healing fruit, and cracked it open. Fani tried to eat it, but she was too weak. Kenny seemed to think for a minute, before he cracked the fruit-nut against a rock, causing its juices to spill out. He gave it to her, and Fani drank it. She only hoped it wasn’t too late. She coughed for a few more minutes, the other two creatures standing to one side, worry in their eyes as they glanced at each other. However, Fani was already feeling like her eyesight was clearing up, and her throat hurt less. Eventually, it was only a small cough every minute or so. She wobbled to her paws, and smiled at her saviours.
‘Y’ saved me! Thank y’ so much, I don’t know how I can ever repay ye!’ Fani grinned at them. Alia smiled widely, and Kenny gave a small smile back.
‘No repayment needed! We’re just glad you’re okay!’ Alia chirped. A thought came to her. ‘My name’s Alia, you should join our tribe!’
‘Alia, no!’ Kenny whispered, but he underestimated Fani’s hearing.
‘No, s’alright, thank y’ for the offer, but I prefer to be alone.’ Fani reassured him. Just then, a spiky creature walked up behind them. Said something about the leader wanting to see them. Regardless, Fani wasn’t there to hear it, having already slunk away. She knew them over excitable types, like Alia. It was best if Fani left quickly, so as to not give the yellow creature any undue worry. Her paws already felt so much stronger! She’d have to go find that fruit Alia found, that would come in handy.
Fani didn’t see the two pairs of eyes watching everyone, one pair violet, one pair brown. Their disinterested gaze quickly left Fani, and stared at the others. Specifically Shee.
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I'm sorry I've been so irregular with my updates, I'll try and work on that, and I'll update today!
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If you want, either of these two
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https://spotify.link/HhXi1nhtkDb
Qjhsbdjdjkeksjbd THIS SOOOOOOOOONGGGGG
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Just now, Andromeda_ said:
THE NOSALGIC INTRO MUSIC 😭
It's candyland by tobu, I used to love the song 💀💀💀
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Why did I make this? Idk but it's funny lol-
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5 hours ago, Andromeda_ said:
Dawnrise
Risemask
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8 hours ago, Andromeda_ said:
I wonder what would happen if one of those minority-hating "sigma" ten year-olds joined the forums-
it would probably be chaos
They'd either get banned pretty quickly, or just wouldn't be able to find this place in the first place
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also we are at day 200 so the challenge is technically over but I'm continuing for story reasons
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(*rises from the dead*
have a short update :))
Ista trotted through the grasses, a few minutes ahead of the tribe. Calypso came with her, though it probably would have been better if she were alone. Calypso didn’t understand anything Ista told her, not knowing how to talk in the language Ista and Cane had come up with. Still, Ista tried. It wasn’t exactly easy making friends, when everyone else could hear and you couldn’t.
There is nothing here. Let’s go back to tell Neoki. Ista tapped against a smooth rock she always brought with her. Apparently, the rock made a sound, but she just counted the amount of taps she made to form certain words. Calypso’s face fell slightly, as she struggled to remember what each tap meant. Ista just pointed back at where the tribe was, until Calypso got it, and nodded. Just then, Calypso stiffened, and said something. Ista tried to read her mouth, but only got one word. Bearyena. She spun around and saw a bearyena running right at her, its jaws wide open to let out a roar she could not hear. Calypso grabbed her roughly by the pelt, and yanked her out of the way just in time. Ista jumped up and ran around the bearyena in circles, trying to distract it. Calypso screamed for help, before pelting at full speed at the bearyena, headbutting it with her horns. The bearyena roared again, and bit down on Calypso.
Just then, a flash of pink interrupted everything, as King ran forward and tore at the bearyena with his sharp claws. He had a defiant grin on his face, as he said something to Calypso, to which she smiled weakly at. Ista darted forward and dragged Calypso out of harm’s way, as King and the bearyena fought. But King couldn’t see everything, he couldn't see how the bearyena’s stance shifted, how it was readying itself to pounce on top of him. Ista tried to make a sound, tried to warn him, but her cry came too late. A strangled cry came from King, before the bearyena picked up his limp body and walked off, not turning around. Calypso tried to stand up, but her bite wound was too deep, and she collapsed. It was up to Ista to get Calypso to safety, and to tell the tribe the dark news. When Fess heard it, she didn’t wail. She only curled up in her nest, pulling Aksit close to her as silent tears rolled down her cheeks.
(KING NOOOO-)
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Alia sprinted through camp, her orange fur like a burning fire. A few creatures had to step out of her way as she wheeled around, looking for her brother.
‘Keeeeeeennyyyyyyyyy!’ She sang as she jumped over a carefully stacked pile of roots, ready to be packed into leaves to be carried on someone’s back. Tor snapped at her, but she didn’t quite catch what he said. Finally, she caught the sight of pale yellow fur, trotting towards Neoki. She darted in front of him, stopping him dead in his tracks. ‘Where are you going?’
‘Ali.’ He gave a small smile. ‘To Neoki, to ask her if there’s anything that needs doing.’
‘That’s what you said earlier!’ Alia whined, circling around her brother.
‘Is there something wrong with that?’ Kendyll raised an eyebrow at her.
‘Yeah! You’re tired.’ Alia tried to sound bossy, but her ears were flattened against her head, her eyes staring at the ground. ‘You look sick, Kenny.’ She mumbled. Kendyll frowned. These past few days, he had been working even harder than usual. The tribe needed to move, and losing both King and Cheri in such a short space of time wasn’t great either. He had to work. But the work gave him bags under his eyes, and sore paws that he never complained about. It made him a restless sleeper, it made his tail droop when he walked. He had thought no one would notice, so he could continue working in peace. But Alia noticed. Alia always noticed.
‘I didn’t mean to worry you.’ He murmured, and pulled her into a warm hug. She buried her face in his fur.
‘Why do you even do it anyway? Mum always said you worked too much.’ Alia said. Though she didn’t voice it, it was obvious she knew what had happened to Meda. Kendyll paused.
‘You know Neoki doesn’t like me. I just don’t want to be gotten rid of, that’s all.’ He whispered, so no one else would overhear.
‘But she wouldn’t throw you out, she’s good!’ Alia huffed, not caring if anyone else heard.
‘You don’t know that!’ He snapped. He quickly regained his composure, but his ears were flattened against his head. ‘Sorry. I just…if I was gone then you’d be… I don’t want to leave you alone Alia.’
‘But you’re going to if you make yourself sick!’ Alia stepped back, and sat down. It hurt Kendyll to see her like this, worried and angry. He shuffled his paws a moment, trying to think of a way that would let him keep working, and to stop Alia from worrying. There was none.
‘Ali, I’m sorry, okay? I didn’t know you were so worried. If I stopped working so hard, will you promise to stop worr-’
‘Yes!’ Alia beamed, almost pushing her brother over as she hugged him again. He smiled, ruffling her fur. Kendyll watched Neoki walk off to attend to something Cane was asking for, and anxiety wormed its way through his stomach. He did his best to ignore it. He would do anything for Alia. Just then, fur that was a bit brighter yellow than his stepped towards them.
‘Kendyll. Alia.’ Shee smiled, happy to see his two children again. He had so much explaining to do, but he had built up everything he needed to say to them these past few days.
‘Dad!’ Alia spun around, but she didn’t bound over to give him a hug, like she would have done before. She trotted forward and gave him a smile. ‘Where were you? Neoki said you came back a few days ago, but we couldn’t find you anywhere!’
‘I wanted to apologise, but I didn’t know how to say it.’ Shee hung his head in shame. ‘I am sorry. You needed me most when your mother died, but I pushed you away. I’m your father and I pushed you away. I want to fix it. Please, forgive me.’ Shee’s eyes were genuine, and full of love as he looked at his kids. Alia bounded forward and hugged him tight.
‘Of course dad! I missed you so much!’ She grinned, full of energy again. Kendyll guessed that she was just happy that Shee didn’t leave them for good.
‘Of course.’ Kendyll said curtly, not moving. He wasn’t as quick to forgive as Alia was. However, Shee seemed to understand. He nodded at his son as he hugged Alia.
‘Thank you.’ He smiled.
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Ozzy's super duper cool art contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Idk why I made this little guy a centipede but here you go