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  1. Summer holidays have started, and I am ready to continue this! I will update tommorow. My writing style might be a little different because I haven't been writing for a little while. 

    Also the computer I have this save on is really old, and steam is shutting down on it in like 200 days so I may have to shorten the end goal of this playthrough to like 250 or 300 days :(. 

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  2. 16 hours ago, swweet tea said:

    Does anyone have any criticism or suggestions? I just want to give a good story to the one person reading this.

    (I know ive been dead on the forums for the past two months shh) 

    Anyways

    I think the story is good so far! I don't have any criticisms, but maybe it would be a cool idea to see tiger moths part of the story? Just an idea, since he's a bit of a background character right now. 

  3. (I actually had a really good plotline in my head for how this would work out, and I love this playthrough and want to continue it. The only reason I stopped was because of school, I found I didn't have the time nor energy :(.

    SO.

    The moment the summer holidays are started, which is in like 2 months, I'll continue this and hopefully get around to giving you guys a finished story. I really love this playthrough and I hate just abandoning it like this lol) 

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  4. 11 hours ago, Lilytuft said:

    If I were to hypothetically eventually somewhere in the distant future make a PotFO video with Dark Side by Alan Walker, which part of the song would you like to focus on your character (it could be present, flashbacks or both) and would you be interested in making some art/animatic/animation for it? If you aren't interested in drawing yourself but the part you want in the video spoils your character's story, you can DM me with what you want drawn

    This is all very hypothetical and I will probably forget about this but it would be fun if (I can't figure out how to finish this sentence but you get the point)

    It would be a cool idea, if it was being made I think I could make at least a small bit of art for it. And I think for Thief it would focus on him being exiled and then flashing back to the present with his friends/people that are currently in the POTFO with him. 

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  5. 58 minutes ago, Chiyanna said:

    Well thought out backstory! Sad that you can't continue, but it's alright. Should we say that Thief got "lost" (as in disappeared for good)?)

    (thanks! And yeah, thanks for understanding. You can say he thought he saw something in the distance and wandered off, and the others couldn't find him, and he disappeared for good.) 

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  6. Just now, YourLocalStranger said:

    I'm sorry but you guys can keep it going without me, I don't want this to die because me and other people had fun with it, but I don't really want to participate anymore. Sorry :(

    And also I might as well infodump Thief's whole backstory real quick. He had an identical twin brother who kept appearing in his memories. The two always made trouble and were pulling pranks. His brother and him weren't exactly liked because they were the children of a rouge, but their mother still loved them. 

    One day a clan member tried to kill Thief's mother (the dark furred nicheling). He tried to stop the nicheling but accidentally threw his mother over the edge of the cliff. The clan member used that so Thief would be exiled. His brother didn't want to be exiled as well, so he didn't speak up when all of this was happening to Thief. The leader broke Thief's paw so he would be useless to any other tribe's nearby. 

    Thief wandered for a little while, but no tribe would take him, and a few years later he died very young. A bearyena was chasing him and he was trying to run, but he slipped and fell into a rushing river and drowned. No one wanted to remember him, not even his brother, so he got put in the place of the forgotten ones. His name was meant to be Vishen. 

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  7. 22 hours ago, AndromedaCake_ said:

    we might be able to keep it alive if stranger comes back 

    but the old forgotten rp lasted like 31 pages so this is much longer

    I'm sorry but you guys can keep it going without me, I don't want this to die because me and other people had fun with it, but I don't really want to participate anymore. Sorry :(

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  8. 1 hour ago, Shortcake said:

    like i said before, i suck at cat anatomy,

    Yeah I do too, don't worry lol, that's why I took the part without cats in it lmao

  9. AGH I'M SORRY IM TAKING SO LONG! I've started it, but school is awful and I still haven't found the time to finish it. I'm still working on It tho

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  10. 34 minutes ago, Chiyanna said:

     

     

     

    (Should we assume @YourLocalStranger came too?)

    Nervous Brother

    "We can't keep looking forever. We have to get these two new spirits back to the swamp." The other that constantly followed Nervous seemed to be zoning out and largely confused still.

     

    (Yeah I came along sorry for not replying) 

    'I agree with Nervous Brother. We should get the new ones back to the swamp.' 

  11. 1 hour ago, Andromeda_ said:

    when i was younger (like 6 or 7) i went to the window and there were people outside and for some dang reason i opened the window anf howled like a wolf. they looked at me like i was insane and left. i still think about that moment a lot and it makes me cringe so badly

    Aaa I feel so bad for you-

    One time when I was like 8 I didn't know what the expression 'with friends like you, who needs enemies?' meant. I said it to my ENTIRE group of friends and I think this is why I'm the weird kid at school 😭😭😭

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  12. Just now, YourLocalStranger said:

    Here you go! Sorry it took so long, schools been kicking my butt-

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    Wait a second I just realized I forgot to sign it-

    ... 

    Nvm I'm too lazy to turn the computer back on again to sign it lol

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