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5 minutes ago, Flour said:

She suppressed a laugh. ‘’It’s alright.’’ She said, stepping between them. ‘Applepaw what do you think you did wrong?’’

“I wasn’t ready and I didn’t put enough force...”

Posted
2 minutes ago, Broken said:

“I wasn’t ready and I didn’t put enough force...”

She nods. ‘’Cherrypaw how about you?’’

Posted
26 minutes ago, Flour said:

She nods. ‘’Cherrypaw how about you?’’

“I rushed and didn’t think about what I was doing so I tripped...”

Posted
Just now, Broken said:

“I rushed and didn’t think about what I was doing so I tripped...”

She nods again. ‘’So now that you know the problem do you think you can try it again and try to do better than last time?’’ She prompeted. 

Posted
1 minute ago, Flour said:

She nods again. ‘’So now that you know the problem do you think you can try it again and try to do better than last time?’’ She prompeted. 

They both nodded and tried again. They did better this time. Applepaw seemed like he was trying to not be too strong to not hurt Cherrypaw. But she whipped around and bit his leg before he had time to react.

Posted
Just now, Broken said:

They both nodded and tried again. They did better this time. Applepaw seemed like he was trying to not be too strong to not hurt Cherrypaw. But she whipped around and bit his leg before he had time to react.

She kept watching and added ‘’Applepaw don’t hold back, Cherrypaw can take it.’’

Posted
Just now, Flour said:

She kept watching and added ‘’Applepaw don’t hold back, Cherrypaw can take it.’’

He nodded. This time, before he could kick her, she whipped around and scratched him, claws unsheathed obviously.

Posted
Just now, Broken said:

He nodded. This time, before he could kick her, she whipped around and scratched him, claws unsheathed obviously.

She started forward but looked at Wetleap, her gaze asking if she should intervene.

Posted
4 minutes ago, Flour said:

She started forward but looked at Wetleap, her gaze asking if she should intervene.

He shook his head. Applepaw fell down shocked and Cherrypaw lept off, looking at you. But while doing so, Applepaw lept onto her, knocking her down. 

Posted
Just now, Broken said:

He shook his head. Applepaw fell down shocked and Cherrypaw lept off, looking at you. But while doing so, Applepaw lept onto her, knocking her down. 

She sat back down. ‘’Reminds me of when we trained together.’’ She said

Posted
Just now, Flour said:

She sat back down. ‘’Reminds me of when we trained together.’’ She said

He nodded and chuckled. Applepaw bit Cherrypaw’s neck and she yowled.

Posted
Just now, Broken said:

He nodded and chuckled. Applepaw bit Cherrypaw’s neck and she yowled.

She shot to her paws and darted to her apprentices side before pulling back.

Posted
1 minute ago, Flour said:

She shot to her paws and darted to her apprentices side before pulling back.

Cherrypaw got up and Applepaw’s face sunk into fear.

”I’m so sorry... I don’t know what happened. I just got mad that I..”

Posted
Just now, Broken said:

Cherrypaw got up and Applepaw’s face sunk into fear.

”I’m so sorry... I don’t know what happened. I just got mad that I..”

She didn’t say anything. She was focused on weather Cherrypaw was ok or not.

Posted
1 minute ago, Flour said:

She didn’t say anything. She was focused on weather Cherrypaw was ok or not.

She looked at you. She seemed fine, just tiny specks of blood on her neck, nothing extreme.

Posted
1 minute ago, Broken said:

She looked at you. She seemed fine, just tiny specks of blood on her neck, nothing extreme.

She sighed in relief and turned to Applepaw. ‘’It’s fine. My mentor had us fight with claws unsheathed all the time.’’

Posted
Just now, Flour said:

She sighed in relief and turned to Applepaw. ‘’It’s fine. My mentor had us fight with claws unsheathed all the time.’’

“Still, I’m sorry...”

Posted
Just now, Broken said:

“Still, I’m sorry...”

‘’We’re just going to do some demonstrations for the rest of this session then.’’ She said, turning to Wetleap

Posted
Just now, Flour said:

‘’We’re just going to do some demonstrations for the rest of this session then.’’ She said, turning to Wetleap

“Okay.” 

You showed demonstrations for a couple more attacks until the sun began going down.

Posted
Just now, Broken said:

“Okay.” 

You showed demonstrations for a couple more attacks until the sun began going down.

‘’Alright, time to go home.’’ She purred. 

Posted
1 minute ago, Broken said:

You all walked back to camp, tired.

She yawned and walked into camp, heading to the medicine cat den

Posted
1 minute ago, Flour said:

She yawned and walked into camp, heading to the medicine cat den

Sparrowpelt greeted you and shook his head.

”I’m sorry... she died.”

Posted
1 minute ago, Broken said:

Sparrowpelt greeted you and shook his head.

”I’m sorry... she died.”

She lowered her head. ‘’This shouldn’t of happened..’’

Posted
Just now, Flour said:

She lowered her head. ‘’This shouldn’t of happened..’’

“I know... I’m sorry... but she was injured far beyond fix. We tried everything.”

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