Help (A small, funny comic)

[GreenTheGreat]

 

 

(Just posting this now so my computer can function and I can delete all the pictures I have opened for this- Still working on this!)

 

 

[GreenTheGreat]

 

(NOT YOU GUYS, JUST ALL OF MY FORUMS AND SIMS AND RPS COMBINED.)

 

 

CREDIT FOR WORD/LYRICS

 

14 minutes ago, SilverHowl said:

So the fact that you based this entirely on how school works is really cool, I like how school just asks you for help and then just wishes you good luck, that doesn’t sound like helping of course that just sounds like a goodbye with no reassurance.. and I love it, that’s how I see schools depicted today and there needs to be a change on how it really works.

 

So for my ideas.. I suggest you try putting more thought into the dialogue, the design of the characters, and the overall story of the comic, course those are just suggestions that can have a pass.. what I REALLY think you should do is make more visible word bubbles! The words are so scattered and hard to integrate into the mind just from reading it alone.. I hope you can take this into consideration and improve the quality of the word bubbles.  

This was just a funny little test to see how people would like a sort of comic, and it seems I got some great feedback! While this alone is just a joke, it's also testing my skills and this is great feedback, thank you! (I do have a text tool for better dialogue, so I will use that in the future.)

[GreenTheGreat]

(Also I don't actually want help in this comic at all, I am content with my work I just like to joke about it)

[Zixvir]

1 hour ago, SilverHowl said:

You’re very welcome! I hope you intend to do more comics like I’m doing ^^

so you do comics now? I know a website if you use a youtube channel

[Zixvir]

hmm well if you do eventually do comics on youtube I can point you in the direction of a website if you tell me.

[Zixvir]

well you might be able to do it with help. and I don't know where to look

[Katumai]

i appreciate anything referencing Jack Stauber-