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Modiano Urania

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Hello people!

As the title says, this is supposed to be a story. Now... a bit of a background:

It starts in the Frost Lands, where I threw off my goddes of misfortune and vengeance (Angyla) once again. By the power of the console she managed to evade her naturally bad RNG and found herself on Grass Mingle. While running away from a bearyena a leech attacked her. After using all water healing plants in the area, she went in a jungle, where she met Spark, an albino guy with two different wings, who led her to a healing fruit (the fact that she hadn't been eaten by a plant is surprising). After passing through a swamp they found Whale Island and decided to settle down. They had a daughter named Finch, so they are quite happy, everything is going swimmin- Bearyena attack. So, anyway, Angyla is pregnant again and Spark is teaching Finch the ancient art of flying with unbalanced wings. BUT, she had taken damage and died a day after the birth of her son Morning. A grieving Spark decided to move away from their old home and took little Morni- Oh. It seems Angyla's horrible luck was passed down to her son...

Spark dies from bearyenas and his kids go to the ports to another grass mingle, where Finch chased Morning away and settled near three mangroves (Morning lives near a jungle tree). It's almost done I swear. Finch met a wanderer named Pebble and they founded FinchClan (Morning doing the same, but he's really just clearing grass).

Blackrose (he's a man) joined FinchClan and Finchstar had Echokit with Pebble (Echokit is Finchstar's Frog-legged clone).

This was supposed to be short.

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Morningstar ran until he couldn't go on any longer.

The bearyena had long since lost his scent, but he would not take any chances.

"Hey there, you alright?"

Morningstar looked up and saw a red derp snout towering above him.

"o-oh yeah, I am. I'm Morningstar."

"Morningstar, like the weapon?"

"The... What is a weapon?"

"Nothin' important, name's Istri by the way. Been visiting my friend Pebble in FinchClan."

"Finch... Then I must go back." He turned around to leave, but felt Istri's tail brush his fur.

"You are her son..."

"No, she's my sister."

"I meant Angyla."

Morningstar was shocked: why did this wanderer know about her?

"Istri, what's going on?" A crippled nicheling came out from the grasses

"Hey Pebble! Just having a chat with Morningstar here, he's your mate's brother."

Why did he have such bad luck? Well, at least it couldn't get worse.

"Morning." A nicheling with mismatched wings flied off of an oak tree.

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"I-I was just leaving!"

Finchstar frowned "I... Brother, do you... would you like to see my kits?"

That he did not expect.

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"They look like you."

"Indeed." Awkward silence followed.

Echopaw decided to break it

"Will you stay here with us now, Uncle?"

"No, Echopaw. I have places to be, bearyenas to slay." Did he accidentally make himself sound cool?

"Uncle brave!" Little Brightkit bounced up and down from her nest. Oh no.

"Yeah, tell us more!" Echopaw, no!

"That's enough, Tiny, time to train." He was miracoulosly saved by Echopaw's mentor Blackrose.

Istri leaned in. "About those bearyenas, I'm quite good at killing 'em. Soooo, let's go to your place! You don't have a choice!"

Morningstar was slightly terrified. He then remembered seeing Nicheling bones near Istri when they met. 

"I could use a paw..." He chuckled nervously.

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They had been walking for a while, and decided to rest for the night.

"You are scared of me." Morningstar gulped. There was no reason to lie.

"Yes... Eeeeeeep!"

Istri blinked.

"What was that noise you just made..?"

He just hid his face under his wing.

"Well, time for some shut-eye. Good night, there is nothing to fear."

She moved away from him, knowing there wasn't enough trust between them.

"I will keep you safe, I promised her..."

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After a good night's sleep, the pair reached the outskirts of Morningstar's territory.

"You have a pretty tree."

"Thanks, I guess?"

Istri casually walked past him, found the bearyena and snapped its neck. That was fast.

"Job's done! The food's a bonus, of course." She picked it up and turned to her companion.

"Well, thank you again, Ma'am." He dipped his head and then heard a sound. It was like a squeak, maybe a kit got lost?

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A kit, just not a nicheling. (I also almost killed Morningstar...)

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Morningstar shuffled awkwardly.

"Hello, little baby! We are your parents now! Here's some tasty meat." Istri proceded to give the little one the flesh of his deceased parent.

Morningstar was surprised, horrified and regretting his life decisions. Overall, a normal social interaction for him. What was he supposed to do? Should he go back to his sister? Was Echopaw right all along?

"Squee..." The little one snuggled up to him and all his worries melted, nothing else mattered at the moment. He had a child to take care now and will do an amazing job at it!

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Istri smiled at the scene before her: Worried Morningstar was snuggled up with the bearyena kit, who they had named Wolfkit. (also there is a rabbil infestation)

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Updates before I finally add more to this mess.

Morningstar and Istri fell in love due to plot demands and had a kid named Hopekit

Their Bearyena son has become a warrior named Wolfclaw

Finchclan got attacked by a bearyena, but Blackrose destroyed it.

A female nicheling joined Finchclan, but I still haven't named her. I don't have screenshots of her but she looks almost identical to Istri and I haven't given her a name, so if you have suggestions, that would be appreciated.

Have a nice day!

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WHY DO I NOT KNOW GRAMMAR
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She woke to a bitter cold.

...

...

Where was she?

...

...

"You are here for a reason..." A voice, but from where?

"Questions, Questions... Echowing, you shall give up everything for your clan..." How did this voice know her name?

"Now... It is time for me to make questions... Echowing, do you promise to forever be loyal to your Clan, whatever happens?"

What kind of question was that? Of course she would!

"You know, it would be nice if you actually said it."

"I do, Voice...?"

"Bear... I hate those things..."

She turned around to see a giant grey and white beast lunging at her.

And then she awoke.

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"Where is she... Where is she!?"

Morningstar paced hurriedly through the empty camp, searching for anything that would help in finding his mate.

"Father, I have found nothing." Wolfclaw said while coming back to camp.

What were they supposed to tell Hopekit? That her mother just up and left?

"Yes..."

That voice was... familiar...

"There was no real love between you, she simply had a purpose. I do not revel in doing things such as these, but it had to be done."

"But- But I loved her, I really did! Right..?"

"No."

Morningstar couldn't take this anymore, what had he done to deserve this? Why couldn't he be happy, was it really so selfish?

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Allegiances, day 125

FinchClan

Leader: Finchstar: Small orange she-Ling with mismatched wings

Deputy: Pebble: Masked male with crippled paws

Healer: none

Warriors:

Blackrose: Handsome red male with black thorn-like spikes

Echowing: orange she-Ling with a feathered wing and a crippled paw, webbed hind legs

Brightskip: Yellow she-Ling with a feathered wing

Apprentices: none

Queens:

Dancingpetal (nameless wanderer, placeholder name): Massive black and pink She-Ling with blue eyes

Mother of Leafkit

Kits:

Leafkit: Red and pink male with leaf green eyes (parents: Dancingpetal and Blackrose)

Elders:none

 

Morningclan

Leader: Morningstar: Orange and white male with a bat wing

Deputy: Wolfclaw: Bearyena male

Apprentice: Hopepaw

Healer: none

Warriors: none (oof)

Apprentices:

Hopepaw: Orange she-ling with a bat wing

Queens: none

Kits: none

Elders: none

Outside the clans:

Some old guy, status unknown

Istri, Massive dark red She-Ling: status unkwnown

Random pic depicting the average day of a Morningclan... warrior?

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She inexplicably felt drawn to the west... Someone needed her...

"As one stays, the other must be there for their shunned kin, as usual. So mighty and powerful ,uh?"

"Kiki, don't be so harsh, I'm sure little Shi-Shi knows what she is doing!"

"That... Isn't what I was talking about... Glint, what are you two planning?"

"Family and Love, of course."

 

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Allegiances, day 130

FinchClan

Leader:

Finchstar: Small orange She-Ling with mismatched wings, currently caring for kits

Deputy:

Pebble: Masked male with crippled paws

Healer:

Echowing: Orange she-Ling with one wing and webbed hind legs

Apprentice: Leafpaw (training as a warrior)

Warriors:

Blackrose: Handsome red male with black thorn-like spikes

Apprentices:

Leafpaw: red and pink male with leaf green eyes

Queens:

Dancingpetal: Black and pink She-Ling

Expecting Blackrose's Kits

Kits:

Mothkit: Orange She-ling with a white mask

Sparkkit: Albino She-ling

Elders:

none

 

MorningClan

Leader:

Morningstar: Battlescarred orange and white male with a bat wing

Deputy:

Braveskip: Yellow and white She-Ling with one feathered wing

Healer:

Now hiring

Warriors:

Hopeclaw: Orange She-Ling with a bat wing

Every other rank in the clan:

none

 

Outside the clans:

some old guy, definitely dead

Istri: massive dark red she-ling, status unknown

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"So, this is what I must do?"

"Yes."

"I have to ask, why do you care?"

"Because-"

"Echowing, Echowing! You have to teach me EVERYTHING!"

Echowing was awoken by one excitable apprentice.

"Ugh. Let's just go train."

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Braveskip sat next to her mourning leader, with nothing to say. Hopeclaw soon joined them in their vigil.

He was tired.

First his father, then his mate, then his son...

"Why?"

"I don't know."

She turned to look at him "Let's go on a walk."

He simply nodded and got up.

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"Well, I guess this is it."

Hopeclaw finished burying Wolfclaw's body, then looked around the camp.

Why didn't she feel anything about it?

She sighed and decided to patrol.

Walking, pondering, walking, pondering, walking... intruder!

"Who's there?"

"ME, ROUGE!"

She was face to face with... an apprentice. How threatening.

"Leafpaw, get back here!" a pretty orange female hopped to their position. Oh, hey, that's the one she dreamed about.

"Sorry about my apprentice, Ma'am. We will leave right... now...?"

The stranger looked at her newly dull gem and smiled.

"Well, that didn't take long, colleague."

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