Modiano Urania Posted February 3, 2021 Share Posted February 3, 2021 I went through my first playthrough and was inspired to make a new one... Will this go better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 3, 2021 Author Share Posted February 3, 2021 Three Nichelings wake up on the shore "Ugh... where am I?" The only male slowly sat up and looked around. He saw a crabbit "Who are You!" He turned around to see a white-furred female hissing at him "Me? Oakstar" The female scoffed "Suuuure. And I am Whitetail" The third nicheling finally sat up and shook her fur "Oakstar?" "Blossomleaf!" "He's... actually a leader." "Yeah, no idea what the ancestors were thinking" "I'm right here" "Sorry. I wonder where my sister is..." 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 3, 2021 Author Share Posted February 3, 2021 Somewhere else, a similar situation unfolded... "Lilyripple, there's a nest here!" "Thank you, Oddwing..." While the two clanmates conversed, a grey nicheling stood awkwardly nearby. She squinted and then approached them "Um... Hello?" The male turned around "Oh, you." He looked at her claw "There's some fish over there" She nodded and went to the water "Wait, what's your name?" "Right! It's Cinderspots" "Pleasure to meet you" (why do they always blink) 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 3, 2021 Author Share Posted February 3, 2021 "Where's my mentor?" "I don't know" "But you are an elder!" "I'm not, you unruly apprentice!" "Snowpaw, I don't like the look of this place..." Says Finchpaw, looking at the colorful strands of grass. "Don't worry Finchpaw, it's just grass, I'll protect you." Batnose sighed and listened for sounds of other nichelings: where was she? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 3, 2021 Author Share Posted February 3, 2021 Oakstar's group hears a yowl. "What was that?" Whitetail narrowed her eyes "Sounded like a nicheling" Blossomleaf suddenly started rushing in the yowl's direction --- Blossomleaf saw a nicheling in labor while being attended by two inexperienced warriors. "Sister!" Cinderspots called her over "Thank goodness you are here! Lilyripple is kitting!" Blossomleaf nodded and went to help the new mother 2 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 3, 2021 Author Share Posted February 3, 2021 "Congratulations, it's a tom" Lilyripple cuddled her little kit. "Where did you go- Lilyripple, Oddwing!" Whitetail bounded over and nuzzled her clanmates. "Whitetail! It's so good to see a friend" 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 3, 2021 Author Share Posted February 3, 2021 The nichelings are reunited and catch up on what happened. OakClan is created, with Whitetail being the deputy OakClan allegiances Leader: Oakstar: brown striped male Deputy: Whitetail: albino female with a long tail Healer: Blossomleaf: white and orange female (Cinderspots' littermate) Warriors: Batnose: pale male with red stripes Oddwing: red male with a feathered wing (Finchpaw's brother) Cinderspots: gray and black female Snowpelt: Brown and white male Apprentices: Finchpaw: pale yellow female with a feathered wing Queens: Lilyripple: Pink and red female mother of Lichenkit Kits: Lichenkit: Small pink and red male Elders: 3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 6, 2021 Author Share Posted February 6, 2021 Batnose and Lilyripple had gone behind the thornwall to find more toxic berry bushes. It went wrong A growl was heard, the only warning before the carnivore lunged at Batnose and threw him at the nearby rock. "No!" Lilyripple lost her mate, just like that, facing a hungry bearyena. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 6, 2021 Author Share Posted February 6, 2021 Cinderspots and Oddwing's four kits that have never been mentioned have been apprenticed: Wrenpaw to Snowpelt, Snakepaw to Whitetail, Mousepaw to Oakstar and Grasspaw to Blossomleaf 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 6, 2021 Author Share Posted February 6, 2021 A wanderer has joined the clan after being saved from a bearyena, that was the fourth in a row 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 8, 2021 Author Share Posted February 8, 2021 Could anyone give criticism about this, please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FawnCat Posted February 10, 2021 Share Posted February 10, 2021 On 2/9/2021 at 8:30 AM, modiano said: Could anyone give criticism about this, please? Wouldn't know what to criticize. It's alright. Maybe a bit confusing, you jump around a lot without saying things like the days and times. Although I just assume you use the day counter as an indicator of that. 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 10, 2021 Author Share Posted February 10, 2021 THIS IS A MEDIUM DIFFICULTY ISLAND, SIR 3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 10, 2021 Author Share Posted February 10, 2021 Also, children 1 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 10, 2021 Author Share Posted February 10, 2021 "All nichelings old enough to hunt gather here!" "These three apprentices have worked hard for their clan, and I ask that our ancestors accept them as warriors. Mousepaw, step forward." Mousepaw smiled a little and walked forwards. "From now on, you will be known as Mouseleap. We honor your quick thinking and compassion as we wlcome you as a warrior of OakClan." The newly-named Mouseleap dipped his head and went back to his spot. "Wrenpaw, step forward." At that, Whitetail looked at Oakstar doubtfully. Oakstar frowned in her direction and tilted his head. She shook her head and looked away. Wrenpaw grinned widely as he stepped forward. "From now on, you will be known as Wrenclaw. We honor your strength and resilience as we welcome you as a warrior of OakClan." Wrenclaw sat back without performing a dip until Whitetail glared at him. "Snakepaw, step forward and let's be done with this." Snakepaw looked hurt at that. "Your name's Snakefeather, we honor your bravery and loyalty as we welcome you and all. Meeting dismissed," Oakstar bolted away. Whitetail growled and followed after him. 3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 10, 2021 Author Share Posted February 10, 2021 Allegiances, day 25 OakClan Leader Oakstar, massive brown tomdog with lighter stripes Deputy Whitetail, albino vixen with a long tail Medicine Foxcat Blossomleaf, small white vixen with orange splotches Grasspaw, green tomdog with a gray mask Warriors Cinderspots, small grey vixen with black spots Oddwing, red tomdog Root, crippled dark yellow tomdog Snowpelt, small brown tomdog with white dapples Lichenwing, small pink tomdog with a red mask Mouseleap, small brown tomdog Wrenclaw, small brown tomdog Snakefeather, purple-furred vixen Apprentices none Queens Finchbright, small pale yellow vixen mother to Sunkit and Flipkit Kits: Sunkit, small dark yellow pup with a pink mask Flipkit, massive light brown bunny with a bird beak Elders: Lilyripple, crippled pink vixen with a red mask 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 13, 2021 Author Share Posted February 13, 2021 Flippaw ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- She was, admittedly, disappointed by her mentor. Some root-obsessed rouge they found and recruited for really no reason! Of course she'd get the weird one while Sunpaw got Cinderspots, why couldn't she get Mouseleap? He was an actually good warrior who was clan-born! So dreamy... if only he didn't spend so much time around Whitetail, ugh. 3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 13, 2021 Author Share Posted February 13, 2021 Cinderspots ------------------------------------------------------------ She had noticed Sunpaw never put much effort in his training, though it didn't seem to be due to disinterest. He was so... sad. She thought that perhaps spending some time with his sister would lift his spirits, but Flippaw was too busy pining over Mouseleap to aknowledge her brother. Cinderspots thought that Flippaw had no future as a warrior if she kept this up, this... not caring about her clanmates. Some might say she was overreacting, that she was just an apprentice but that was exactly her point! It couldn't have been Root's fault, he was such a kind tom- "Whitetail? you seem a bit sick, maybe you should see Blossomleaf." "I already did, she said I'm expecting, Mouseleap." She was going to be a grandmother. She was going to be a grandmother. She was going to be a grandmother. She was going to be a grandmother. "What?! Mouseleap you can't do that! She's so old and I am young!" Flippaw... "Now, now. You should be happy for your clanmates." Thank the ancestors for Root. She was such an annoying vixen! Mouseleap was going to reply, but a growl cut him off. A bearyena had entered camp, and Wrenclaw was fighting it alone. She immediately went to help her son. 1 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 13, 2021 Author Share Posted February 13, 2021 *cries in forgetting about the rouge male* 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 14, 2021 Author Share Posted February 14, 2021 What do you think of the characters so far? What's your favourite (even though only 3 of them have shown personality, I guess appearance-wise too)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 14, 2021 Author Share Posted February 14, 2021 Just 2 sibs, hanging out at the beach, talking about life... while their boss stares from the grass 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 14, 2021 Author Share Posted February 14, 2021 Pricklekit and Tumblekit! 1 1 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FawnCat Posted February 16, 2021 Share Posted February 16, 2021 On 2/13/2021 at 10:31 PM, modiano said: *cries in forgetting about the rouge male* That always sucks when that happen. On 2/15/2021 at 5:38 AM, modiano said: What do you think of the characters so far? What's your favourite (even though only 3 of them have shown personality, I guess appearance-wise too)? Like you said we haven't seen all of them in action yet My fav was Lilyripple (Although I think she won't be alive much longer as she's already an elder) Flippaw seems interesting so far. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 20, 2021 Author Share Posted February 20, 2021 Why did I...? 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modiano Urania Posted February 20, 2021 Author Share Posted February 20, 2021 Lilyripple ------------------------------------------------------------------- She had been having pleasant chats with Root in the last few moons. It made her think about the future, she didn't have much time left and Lichenwing was a disappointment. She would not let her legacy be tainted by that... she loved her son, but he was not suited for clan life. "Root, I have been enjoying the time we spend together and... Would you like to be my mate?" Mmh, too sudden. "Of course, Lilyripple! I like you too" Apparently not. I am sorry, Batnose, it's for the best... 2 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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