Modiano Posted October 15, 2021 Author Posted October 15, 2021 33 minutes ago, Modiano Cards said: Why is this the best I've got for this? The new version of this bloke (i haven't chosen pronouns so this is what I'll refer the oc as) is better 1
Chiyanna Posted October 15, 2021 Posted October 15, 2021 On 10/13/2021 at 10:08 AM, Modiano Cards said: 💫Snazz💫 Yeah I'm pretty proud of this, send criticism please (looks good to me! of course I can't draw so I'm not rlly able to critisize other ppls stuff cause IDk what I'm talking about. If my sister were active on here I could tag her but unfortunately she is not....also she may be a little too vigorously critical...)
Modiano Posted October 15, 2021 Author Posted October 15, 2021 3 hours ago, Chousbbs said: (looks good to me! of course I can't draw so I'm not rlly able to critisize other ppls stuff cause IDk what I'm talking about. If my sister were active on here I could tag her but unfortunately she is not....also she may be a little too vigorously critical...) Criticize away, Chubbs' sister! 1
Chiyanna Posted October 15, 2021 Posted October 15, 2021 2 hours ago, Modiano Cards said: Criticize away, Chubbs' sister! (I will try and get her online, but if I cannot then I will wait for the next time we meet in person and show her it and type out her reply)
xKatty Posted October 16, 2021 Posted October 16, 2021 On 10/15/2021 at 9:53 AM, Modiano Cards said: Criticize away, Chubbs' sister! Hello! Sister here. Some advice I can give would probably start off with the structure of the piece. The head is off-centered, so something that helps me personally is to draw out the lines of the face. One line for it's length, the other for the width. And smaller lines for details such as the eyes and mouth. That way, if you follow your lines it will end up being more centered. The second critique I can give is the weight of the lines. All of the lines seem to be close to the same width and opacity, including the detailing. For traditional art, have a very sharpened pencil. I mainly use a mechanical pencil personally. This way, you can control the thickness and hardness of your lines, making it have a lot more depth and detail. And the third and final critique, is your use of angles and lines. Most of your shapes are very round and circular. This can be fine depending on your style, but given this piece looks to have more detail, that means you should also do more sharp shapes and lines. Such as triangles. One place that would have been good, is the chin/jaw of the creature. It would have made it look a lot more mysterious and powerful. If you have a hard time getting the lines right, I suggest looking at references. To be honest, just always look at references. It helps way more than I would have expected. I think that's all I'll give now, you did a really good job regardless and I really enjoy how the creature looks! It mainly comes down to execution and techniques that you can learn to make it when better. Hope you have a good day and this helped! 1 1
Modiano Posted October 16, 2021 Author Posted October 16, 2021 1 hour ago, xKatty said: Hello! Sister here. Some advice I can give would probably start off with the structure of the piece. The head is off-centered, so something that helps me personally is to draw out the lines of the face. One line for it's length, the other for the width. And smaller lines for details such as the eyes and mouth. That way, if you follow your lines it will end up being more centered. The second critique I can give is the weight of the lines. All of the lines seem to be close to the same width and opacity, including the detailing. For traditional art, have a very sharpened pencil. I mainly use a mechanical pencil personally. This way, you can control the thickness and hardness of your lines, making it have a lot more depth and detail. And the third and final critique, is your use of angles and lines. Most of your shapes are very round and circular. This can be fine depending on your style, but given this piece looks to have more detail, that means you should also do more sharp shapes and lines. Such as triangles. One place that would have been good, is the chin/jaw of the creature. It would have made it look a lot more mysterious and powerful. If you have a hard time getting the lines right, I suggest looking at references. To be honest, just always look at references. It helps way more than I would have expected. I think that's all I'll give now, you did a really good job regardless and I really enjoy how the creature looks! It mainly comes down to execution and techniques that you can learn to make it when better. Hope you have a good day and this helped! Thank you! I think it looks off-center because I took the photo slightly sideways, but i do also tend to draw like that too. He's supposed to have not much detail, since it's a shadow creature. I have no excuse for the round lines, i wasn't drunk enough for it to be understandable /j. Its eyes also came out wrong but you couldn't know that. I also couldn't use a specific pencil because I made it at school. 1
Modiano Posted October 17, 2021 Author Posted October 17, 2021 23 hours ago, Modiano Cards said: I have played the Stardew valley Pam has 3 hearts with me i barely interact with her
Modiano Posted October 17, 2021 Author Posted October 17, 2021 Bumble is a shapeshifter. Bumble's clawed arms are astral projections. Bumble probably doesn't have eyes. Or they're terrifying. Bumble's true forms are the one shown in the drawing and a striped dark yellow leviathan. Those things on the side of the head are feathers. Adopt please
Modiano Posted October 18, 2021 Author Posted October 18, 2021 Do you believe genderbending is transphobic????
cookie Posted October 18, 2021 Posted October 18, 2021 2 hours ago, Modiano Cards said: Do you believe genderbending is transphobic???? i dont think so as long as theyre not like, mocking trans people with it or something [you mean when people like make a design for a fictional character as the opposite gender right] 1
Modiano Posted October 20, 2021 Author Posted October 20, 2021 I had a dream. Would I be able to add the idea it gave me to the Mothverse or is this its own story? No clue
Modiano Posted October 20, 2021 Author Posted October 20, 2021 On 10/17/2021 at 10:35 PM, Modiano, Eater of Worlds said: Bumble is a shapeshifter. Bumble's clawed arms are astral projections. Bumble probably doesn't have eyes. Or they're terrifying. Bumble's true forms are the one shown in the drawing and a striped dark yellow leviathan. Those things on the side of the head are feathers. Adopt please AAAAA
Modiano Posted October 20, 2021 Author Posted October 20, 2021 I think I'll complete the boiler room first, I'm only missing a gold bar and fire quartz
Modiano Posted October 20, 2021 Author Posted October 20, 2021 On 10/19/2021 at 11:06 AM, Modiano, Eater of Worlds said: Look at this masterpiece AAAAA It doesn't show it smh
Modiano Posted October 20, 2021 Author Posted October 20, 2021 Look what I made Warrior cats prefixes and suffixes ― Perchance Generator
Modiano Posted October 20, 2021 Author Posted October 20, 2021 I caught some anchovies on Stardew feeling happy. And like 287644 bass.
Modiano Posted October 20, 2021 Author Posted October 20, 2021 I only need fire quartz and my first room will be completed
Modiano Posted October 20, 2021 Author Posted October 20, 2021 I still haven't upgraded the house- Also I'm dating Haley
Modiano Posted October 20, 2021 Author Posted October 20, 2021 Just now, Modiano, Eater of Worlds said: I still haven't upgraded the house- Also I'm dating Haley I was going for Penny but Haley had more hearts for some reason
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