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I think your main problem is the muddy lineart. Your lines sometimes look a bit wobbly and the ends of the lines go over other lines. I can't help you with the wobbliness, but you could try and clean up stuff like this

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That being said, there is a certain fluidness to your linework that I really like and you know how to make interesting poses. Keep up the good work!

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6 minutes ago, Lilytuft with antlers said:

I think your main problem is the muddy lineart. Your lines sometimes look a bit wobbly and the ends of the lines go over other lines. I can't help you with the wobbliness, but you could try and clean up stuff like this

kuva.png.5d04f9bfbc4461e4cf3aff0e406292dc.png

That being said, there is a certain fluidness to your linework that I really like and you know how to make interesting poses. Keep up the good work!

ah, yea, I've kinda noticed that, too. Thank you!

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