criticize my art

[polly]

part 2 edition

i think??? ive improved since i last did this??? (which i deleted if you didn't know lmao)

so yeah

im gonna regret this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[ItzFadeDaNightWing]

too good to criticize sorrhy

[Poo]

Just now, polly said:

part 2 edition

i think??? ive improved since i last did this??? (which i deleted if you didn't know lmao)

so yeah

im gonna regret this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Alright. 

 

Time to criticize and roast art.  

 

 

#1 

This has so many pins, It might as well be a pin cushion( I like it) 

 

#2

 

I need to getaway from it. 10/10 

 

#3 

 

Yes. 

 

#4

Sheep goat. 10/10

 

#5

 

Love 

 

 

And the rest is yes. 

 

 

 

If I took it too far, I'm sorry. I like your art, no adjustments.

[Modiano]

Uhhh the humanoids have crooked legs

[Modiano]

2 hours ago, Modiano said:

Uhhh the humanoids have crooked legs

And ig they have oversized heads compared to their body but that might be a stylistic choice so

[BirbMonster]

Very pretty, all I can say is that the legs look a tiny bit off

[Poo]

11 hours ago, xXxTheLivingDeadxXx said:

Alright. 

 

Time to criticize and roast art.  

 

 

#1 

This has so many pins, It might as well be a pin cushion( I like it) 

 

#2

 

I need to getaway from it. 10/10 

 

#3 

 

Yes. 

 

#4

Sheep goat. 10/10

 

#5

 

Love 

 

 

And the rest is yes. 

 

 

 

If I took it too far, I'm sorry. I like your art, no adjustments.

In all seriousness, the first image of getaway is off...ish-, the eyes are just too big, that's all... I dunno, it's your art choice. 

[Lilytuft]

Since people are pointing out the legs and some of said legs seem to have hooves, here are some things that may help with the thought process of drawing them

https://drawingref.com/deer-hooves/

https://www.deviantart.com/etheringtonbrothers/art/How-to-draw-HOOVES-tutorial-769380600

https://valra-the-artist.tumblr.com/post/188052749796/cieldoberman-i-had-an-ask-for-how-i-draw-my

http://anthroanatomica.blogspot.com/2014/06/anthro-leg-gestures.html?spref=pi

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-d2nibaSykkk/U5DKJ3nuv6I/AAAAAAAAAUM/i0Hf20hzuLo/s1600/anthro_legs5.jpg

http://anthroanatomica.blogspot.com/2013/11/anthro-leg-structure-3.html

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-bBcLvwkvEdY/UpJ83N5grtI/AAAAAAAAARU/ogqjMFlfE5E/s1600/satyr+legs.jpg

[polly]

8 hours ago, Modiano said:

And ig they have oversized heads compared to their body but that might be a stylistic choice so

its a stylistic choice 

3 hours ago, xXxTheLivingDeadxXx said:

In all seriousness, the first image of getaway is off...ish-, the eyes are just too big, that's all... I dunno, it's your art choice. 

stylistic choice :))

11 minutes ago, Living in a bucket said:

Since people are pointing out the legs and some of said legs seem to have hooves, here are some things that may help with the thought process of drawing them

https://drawingref.com/deer-hooves/

https://www.deviantart.com/etheringtonbrothers/art/How-to-draw-HOOVES-tutorial-769380600

https://valra-the-artist.tumblr.com/post/188052749796/cieldoberman-i-had-an-ask-for-how-i-draw-my

http://anthroanatomica.blogspot.com/2014/06/anthro-leg-gestures.html?spref=pi

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-d2nibaSykkk/U5DKJ3nuv6I/AAAAAAAAAUM/i0Hf20hzuLo/s1600/anthro_legs5.jpg

http://anthroanatomica.blogspot.com/2013/11/anthro-leg-structure-3.html

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-bBcLvwkvEdY/UpJ83N5grtI/AAAAAAAAARU/ogqjMFlfE5E/s1600/satyr+legs.jpg

thank you!!!

[Lilytuft]

Passage looks great, but I have some minor nitpicks. First of all the fur is kind of having a life of its own. This might be just a stylistic choise due to xem being being a space cat (and a side effect of space not having any gravity), but I'll link a tutorial just in case

https://design.tutsplus.com/articles/how-to-draw-animals-quickly-render-fur--vector-17833 (I'm not very fond of this tutorial but the bit about fur direction is good)

I've outlined the parts that look off to me in red

Also I don't know how different space cat anatomy is to that of regular cats, but cats generally have shorter limbs and and muzzles (though both of these depend on style) and their necks are a little thicker. This can easily be changed by adding a bit off fur to the back of their head