Jump to content
Stray Fawn Community

Place of the forgotten ones - The third era


Lilytuft

Recommended Posts

2 minutes ago, Fox leaf said:

"y-yeah, sure" she said

She felt cold

She could still feel the pain

She could feel the mental and physical pain

It still hurt

She wanted to talk about it

She needed to talk about it

But she couldnt

She just couldnt

The spirit knew that she shouldn't ask about this, but it was painfully obvious something was off. 

"Are you ok? You seem really upset all of a sudden...." 

Suddenly, another flashback. 

Other nichelings with similar platypus beaks, water bodies, and fin tails, cornering Dari and insulting him due to his differences. 

"Hey! Stop that!" Came a voice. 

It was her (the spirit). 

"What are you gonna do, whippersnapper?" One of them said mockingly. 

"I'm gonna stop you bullies!" She said as she lunged at them. However, she was easily pinned to the ground. 

She was about to be torn to shreds when the other nichelings was knocked off of her. Dari was on top of the bully. He scratched them and chased them off. 

"Thanks, Dari." She said. 

"You're welcome!" He smiled sweetly.

The flashback faded away. "Dari...He protected me..." She whispered to herself. "Sorry, sorry, it was nothing." She said as she realised she was back in the strange realm.

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

53 minutes ago, Regular human with face said:

(I've personally imagined that some form of collision exists, but that does sound cool. Maybe the lost are sort of ghostly as well? So yep, the paw can go through for the sake of the rule of cool)

But their paw made no contact with the lights, and soon they shifted,  turning away from the spirit. Hey!  Come back! 

They let out an annoyed yelp and walked after the lights. What are these lights? What is this...communication going on in my head? 

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

The spirit felt tears welling up in her eyes. What have I done? I'm so stupid, I chased off one of my only potential friends...No, you can't cry. 

She tried to hold it in, but she let herself. Tears streamed down her face. I'm too emotional, I'm such a baby. 

She wiped away her tears and started going back to where Fangs and the other nicheling were.

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

3 minutes ago, Fox leaf said:

"You already are. We both are and always will be." She said darkly and flew off

The spirit was flying away and landed in a tree.

Another flashback... more vigorous...

Pain

Pain flared as she was thrown to the ground

Clanmates

Young ones like her

Teasing her

"You never should've been born"

one yelled

it faded away

what am i...?

she asked herself

She curled up

she fell asleep

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

She was dreaming

Someone infront of her

multiple someones

"Your alone"

rang a voice in her head

"you always will be"

it echoed

She awoke, feeling guilty

"I NEVER shouldve been born. Ive proven that many times over. Like with that other spirit. Now im alone. I always will be.

She flew out of the tree, and down on the ground

she started to wander, unknowing where she would go

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

1 minute ago, Fox leaf said:

She was dreaming

Someone infront of her

multiple someones

"Your alone"

rang a voice in her head

"you always will be"

it echoed

She awoke, feeling guilty

"I NEVER shouldve been born. Ive proven that many times over. Like with that other spirit. Now im alone. I always will be.

She flew out of the tree, and down on the ground

she started to wander, unknowing where she would go

She eventually realized she was heading to the stream

How long had she been walking for? an hour? more?

Would Quacktail forgive her? Would she never have a friend again?

If she ever had one?

She saw the flow of water and stopped

it happened on the other side

she froze

and just stared t the water

waiting for anything to happen

She'd stay there as long as she had to

even if she died there

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

 

1 minute ago, Fox leaf said:

She eventually realized she was heading to the stream

How long had she been walking for? an hour? more?

Would Quacktail forgive her? Would she never have a friend again?

If she ever had one?

She saw the flow of water and stopped

it happened on the other side

she froze

and just stared t the water

waiting for anything to happen

She'd stay there as long as she had to

even if she died there

Something made her turn around. She noticed the winged spirit had returned. She approached them.

"I-I'm sorry. I should've considered your feelings. Are we..............friends?" 

Another tear streamed out of her eye, but she wiped it away. Dang it! I cried in front of her! Now she'll think I'm an emotional baby....

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Just now, AndromedaTheGalaxyCat said:

 

Something made her turn around. She noticed the winged spirit had returned. She approached them.

"I-I'm sorry. I should've considered your feelings. Are we..............friends?" 

Another tear streamed out of her eye, but she wiped it away. Dang it! I cried in front of her! Now she'll think I'm an emotional baby....

"I should've considered yours. You have as much right to your feelings as i do." She said

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

4 minutes ago, Fox leaf said:

 (@AndromedaTheGalaxyCat, if you only pause for a while to wait for my reply, i reply fairly quickly, so i find it really boring while im constantly reloading the page)

DID U SEE DISH?) Or are you not constantly reloading like ur meant to lol?)

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Just now, Fox leaf said:

"what do you know about your past?" she asked Quacktail

"I remember I had a friend named Dari, and there were other nichelings in our tribe who bullied him. I stood up for him and got bullied too. One day we left the tribe and went to an archipelago where we became mates and created a family. I must've then.....died........"

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Just now, AndromedaTheGalaxyCat said:

"I remember I had a friend named Dari, and there were other nichelings in our tribe who bullied him. I stood up for him and got bullied too. One day we left the tribe and went to an archipelago where we became mates and created a family. I must've then.....died........"

"Oh...." She said and felt slightly uncomfortable

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
×
×
  • Create New...