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50 minutes ago, Sky said:

-The head shape does need to be changed. I like Goggles's example

-I think the fangs are fine. However, the chin still looks weird...

-mane definitely needs fixing, like you said

-I like the neck floof, however it kinda looks weird from the side. I think using the other material would make it look better, but I also think it needs to go just a little farther down the chest. (Later I might be able to draw and show what I mean but I can't right now)

-I think the tail should be fluffier! How is Adam going to keep himself warm with that??

-His little smile is too close to his nose. Maybe make it go down a little more before curling up? (again, later I might draw this)

-The ears look really thick. Obviously nichelings aren't THAT realistic, but on real animals, ears are pretty thin.

my version:

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1 minute ago, Philo said:

@Sky Could you post again? The image is broken.

whoops!

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oh, and some other things I noticed:

-I think the nose should be a little thinner, like in the drawing above. Poison Fangs has a slimmer nose than other snouts.

-Like Spacestar said, the paws should be bigger. Adam's probably huge, so baby-him should have big paws. Think of puppies!

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1 minute ago, Sky said:

whoops!

1029927460_liladam.png.a7160bc2a398605c3a83ec788aac2704.png

oh, and some other things I noticed:

-I think the nose should be a little thinner, like in the drawing above. Poison Fangs has a slimmer nose than other snouts.

-Like Spacestar said, the paws should be bigger. Adam's probably huge, so baby-him should have big paws. Think of puppies!

Awh! that looks amazing!

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Posted
23 minutes ago, Sky said:

whoops!

1029927460_liladam.png.a7160bc2a398605c3a83ec788aac2704.png

oh, and some other things I noticed:

-I think the nose should be a little thinner, like in the drawing above. Poison Fangs has a slimmer nose than other snouts.

-Like Spacestar said, the paws should be bigger. Adam's probably huge, so baby-him should have big paws. Think of puppies!

what did you draw this with? that brush looks familiar

Posted
On 12/26/2019 at 5:56 PM, Sky said:

On the topic of Niche merchandise, I'm collecting enamel pins for my jacket (that is, if I find a pin I like, I wear it--i have 3 so far), and if you guys made a Niche pin, I'd love it. Just saying xD

yes!

10 hours ago, Philo said:

New iteration just came in and I'm not sure how to feel about it ^^
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10 hours ago, Philo said:

So they took pretty much all of our feedback into account.
In my opinion the head-shape looks pretty weird now, especially from side view. Also not a fan that the mane goes up so straight.
About the teeth: I'm not sure if we should keep trying to paint them on or should we go back to having them attached as seperate objects (but they might not be totally straight). Also curious to hear what you think of the neckfluff ^^

tail needs longer, teeth should be seperate( try making a mouth, it would make the teeth work better, so slit eyes and a thin snout too then it would work perfect, send the the picture of in game adam) the head mane should be like someone drew, the gem, maybe out of enamel or or bone, the hind legs are thin and long when looked at from the side, the head is very thik, should be elongated, tbh the whole of it is chubby, stretch it out a bit, if I looked at it from the back I would notice the sharp shapes and the baldness, tail is thin make thik, very disproportionate in general. yeah,  very far away, not in the middle, looks like a cartoon, not even niche.

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Posted
7 minutes ago, Zixvir said:

tbh the whole of it is chubby, stretch it out a bit

it's a baby

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Posted
57 minutes ago, Bucket Friend said:

what did you draw this with? that brush looks familiar

Krita. brush is Charcoal Pencil Medium

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Posted
On 3/14/2020 at 1:33 AM, Philo said:

The colors are still a bit off, the chin should actually be the same color as the ears. And the belly too :)
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I was just looking at this picture and realized that the plushie has no ear stripes

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tried drawing lil Adam with the charcoal brush. not that great, but something. see how cute those big paws are??

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Just got some pictures with less perspective so we can actually see the proportions :)
(And one from below)
These pictures made it visible that the front paws are in the air xD
So I think I will request them to be a bit bigger. Same goes for the tail.

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Posted

adam doesn't have stripes on his nose,  also he needs stripes on his ears.

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try making a smol mouth and attatch the teeth in there, that should work, also any of the yellow is too yellow, make all the yellow compare better to the pic of adam.

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On 4/27/2020 at 1:03 PM, Sky said:

-The head shape does need to be changed. I like Goggles's example

-I think the fangs are fine. However, the chin still looks weird...

-mane definitely needs fixing, like you said

-I like the neck floof, however it kinda looks weird from the side. I think using the other material would make it look better, but I also think it needs to go just a little farther down the chest. (Later I might be able to draw and show what I mean but I can't right now)

-I think the tail should be fluffier! How is Adam going to keep himself warm with that??

-His little smile is too close to his nose. Maybe make it go down a little more before curling up? (again, later I might draw this)

-The ears look really thick. Obviously nichelings aren't THAT realistic, but on real animals, ears are pretty thin.

I agree with everything here. Also @Zixvir's profile pic reminds me, Adam kinda reminds me of a simba plush I had as a kid :)

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Well, there have been many versions of Adam in the time being ;)
I'll check if we can do the ear stripes.

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oh it's based off of that adam. use the drawing of adam to make it, the drawing looks cuter and more realistic.

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Well, it's a bit of mix from all the Adams there are/were. Trying to combine them into the cutest possible design.

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Ok folks, I really have no clue which I find better, so help me decide please ^^
Should we keep the current "fluffy" material for the neck? -> REACT WITH "HAHA" if you prefer this
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Or should we switch to this "fur-like" one? (In orange of course) -> REACT WITH "CONFUSED" if you prefer this
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Thanks!

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