Katumai Posted April 30, 2019 Share Posted April 30, 2019 SO, I'M WRITING MY OWN WARRIORS BOOK. I finally finished up the allegiances, and my hand hurts. I'm going to be posting the chapters and stuff here, unless someone tells me I should get rid of it. Please excuse the odd names in SkyClan, it's, well, SkyClan. Spreading Darkness Allegiances ThunderClan Leader: DappledStar-Tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes-Envies plenty of cats who she sees as competition, she however, does accept when she finally realizes there never was competition Deputy: SorrelSpring-Brown speckled shecat with yellow eyes-She has a very hard time of accepting change, very persistant Medicine cat: HollowBird-Black tom with grey hollow eyes-He never expects perfection and is proud of his apprentice no matter what, very quiet Med cat app: PoppySwipe-Calico she-cat with green eyes-She loves her job, but constantly gives up, thinking she can't do it Warriors: MintFlame-Grey tabby tom with amber eyes-A very unsympathetic cat, "get over it" personality PerchBrook-Mottled grey tom-Has a lot of self confidence and goodwill Apprentice, StonePaw MistMask-Pale grey she-cat with orange eyes-Courteous, Hard-working Apprentice, CricketPaw RustFrost-Rusty brown tom with yellow eyes-Aspiring, usually late ShellSpots-Blue-grey she-cat with ream spots dotting her pelt-Responsible yet stubborn OakTail-Pale brown tom with white patches and covered in scars-Mature, determined Apprentice, Nightpaw PlumTuft-Pale grey she-cat with green eyes-Devoted, closed minded ReedBriar-Dappled cream she-cat with blue eyes-Practical, dependant DaisyHeart-White she-cat with yellow spots and golden eyes-Selfish, unenthusiastic, indifferent TwigShade-Grey she-cat-What TwigBranch's name was supposed to be SilverIce-Icy grey tom with white tabby stripes and blue eyes-Inconsiderate, thoughtless, unreliable FireDust-Redbrown she-cat with amber eyes-Secretive, closed off, self-reliant Apprentices NightPaw-Black she-cat with a white flame shaped patch on her chest-Quiet, independent StonePaw-Dark grey tom-Trusting, practical CricketPaw-Brown tabby tom with golden eyes-Naïve, impractical, fearful Queens WillowFall-Pale grey she-cat-Indecisive, affectionate-Mother of Shadekit(Dark grey tom), QuickKit(Dark grey she-cat), and DoeKit(Pale brown she-cat) HollySpring-Black and white she-cat-Selfish, unresponsive-Expecting SilverIce's kits RiverClan Leader: SnakeStar-Pale tom with broad, black stripes-Dishonest, responsible Deputy: HazeClaw-Pale grey tom with blue eyes and long fur-Brave, fierce Medicine cat: RoseBreeze-Dappled red she-cat with green eyes-Caring, sympathetic Med app: SalmonPaw-Pinkish brown tom with reddish eyes-Easily irritated Warriors LeopardGaze-Spotted golden tom-Selfless, snappy, rude ShrewFang-Brown tabby tom-Friendly EchoMask-Silver lynx point she-cat FireFin-Red tabby she-cat with yellow eyes TawnyJay-Golden she-cat with soft, feathery fur Apprentice, BubblePaw ToadFish-Black tom Apprentice, FurzePaw JaggedStem-White tom with black patches and a crooked tail Apprentice, CattailPaw OddSpark-Lilac tabby she-cat with white paws and menacing amber eyes Apprentice, BoulderPaw BlizzardFire-White she-cat with an orange tail Apprentices BubblePaw-Soft grey, almost white fur with blue-grey spots covering his pelt and a bob tail-Happy, bubbly BoulderPaw-Dark grey tom with white paws-Controlling, aloof FurzePaw-Cream tabby tom with white paws-Rude, controlling CattailPaw-Cream she-cat with white ears-Malice, hatred Queens LightBee-Yellow she-cat with white spots-Mother of Carpkit(Black tabby tom) ShadowClan Leader: ViperStar-White tom with black patches Deputy: FireShine-Red she-cat Medicine cat: HazelBurrow-Cinnamon tabby she-cat Warriors AdderScar-Sandy brown she-cat with large black stripes Apprentice, AmberPaw SkunkFang-White tom with unusual black swirls LynxClaw-Pale brown she-cat with several small, black spots TigerSnarl-Brown tabby tom Apprentice, ApplePaw ColdShock-Blue-grey she-cat with menacing blue eyes CloudLeopard-White she-cat with black leopard spots Apprentice, InkPaw MistyWing-Light grey tabby she-cat with white stripes Apprentice, QuailPaw ThornSpirit-Brown-gold tabby tom SparrowLeaf-Light brown tom Apprentices InkPaw-Very dark grey tom with black stripes QuailPaw-Tortoiseshell she-cat ApplePaw-Apricot tom AmberPaw-Apricot she-cat WindClan Leader: ChestnutStar-Cinnamon she-cat with a white dash on her chest Deputy: HeatherFlame-Cream tabby she-cat with purple eyes Medicine cat: AshHeart-Smoky grey she-cat Med app: BouncePaw-Brown tabby she-cat Warriors PetalSpark-Pinkish cream she-cat LakeBlaze-Grey tom with black spots AuroraBliss-Pinkish she-cat, covered in small brown dots SnowShock-White she-cat with grey paws and mismatched eyes Apprentice, CrowPaw FlintThorn-Ash grey spotted tom Apprentice, DriftPaw PigeonWind-Grey, white and black calico tom CopperFlame-Copper brown tom DustSky-Chocolate tabby tom RubblePath-Silver tom Apprentices DriftPaw-White tom CrowPaw-Black tom Queens LilyThroat-Expecting CopperFlame's kits SkyClan Leader: StarfishStar-Cream she-cat with reddish specks Deputy: WaspWing-Yellow tom with black stripes Medicine cat: TokenBird-Brown and gold tom Med app: EnvyPaw Warriors Waffle-Fawn tom with light brown spots, look oddly like squares SpringBlossom-White she-cat with golden stripes Apprentice, CoffeePaw FeatherShade-Silver she-cat Apprentice, PumpkinPaw DragonStone-Purpleish black tom with red eyes Apprentice, WrathPaw RedWing-Calico she-cat Apprentice, GreedPaw ThrushTwig-Sandy grey speckled tom Apprentice, SlothPaw TawnyFur-Golden-brown tom with amber eyes Apprentice, PridePaw HoneyThorn-Yellow she-cat MousePetal-Pale grey she-cat with silver points Apprentice, CaramelPaw BrightLight-Blindingly white she-cat with bright green eyes Apprentices CaramelPaw-Brown Siamese CoffeePaw-Pale brown tom with white swirls in his fur PumpkinPaw-Orange she-cat EnvyPaw-Black tom with green eyes GreedPaw-Blue-grey tom SlothPaw-White she-cat with grey eyes WrathPaw-Flame colored tom with red eyes PridePaw-Grey tabby tom with purple eyes Queens IvoryHeart-Lilac point Siamese she-cat-Mother of PearlKit(Cream point Siamese she-cat) and RubyKit(Flame point Siamese she-cat) @Renio2490 @FlowerMask @Jojo @Skysplash8 @Brokenshock @MelonNicheling (I think that's everyone) 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sky Posted April 30, 2019 Share Posted April 30, 2019 I can't find Brightlight help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 30, 2019 Author Share Posted April 30, 2019 3 minutes ago, Skysplash8 said: I can't find Brightlight help oh yeah, you never told me what clan she was in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broken Posted April 30, 2019 Share Posted April 30, 2019 1 hour ago, Katumai said: FireShine-Red she-cat "I have no personality." Quote from Fireshine. (Not real quote) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sky Posted April 30, 2019 Share Posted April 30, 2019 3 hours ago, Katumai said: oh yeah, you never told me what clan she was in (sorry!) it can be whatever. I guess SkyClan because of that name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 30, 2019 Author Share Posted April 30, 2019 1 minute ago, Skysplash8 said: (sorry!) it can be whatever. I guess SkyClan because of that name K, i'll edit it 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sky Posted April 30, 2019 Share Posted April 30, 2019 also I thought of this scenario: cat thinks they're dying, sees Brightlight "I can see the light at the end of the tunnel! It's blindingly bright! I must be transitioning into StarClan... Wait... is that Brightlight? When did she go to StarClan? Oh, wait..." you don't have to use it I just thought of it and thought it was funny heh 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 30, 2019 Author Share Posted April 30, 2019 2 minutes ago, Skysplash8 said: also I thought of this scenario: cat thinks they're dying, sees Brightlight "I can see the light at the end of the tunnel! It's blindingly bright! I must be transitioning into StarClan... Wait... is that Brightlight? When did she go to StarClan? Oh, wait..." you don't have to use it I just thought of it and thought it was funny heh I may or may not do that 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 30, 2019 Author Share Posted April 30, 2019 I finished the prologue, so I might as well post it before trying to sleep: Prologue The night was silent, not even the chirping of the crickets or the hoots of the wise owls breaking the uneasy silence. The moon filtered softly through the trees, pale light reflected onto the grass in the lush forest. Soft pawsteps echoed through the forest, a soft tap against the grass and ground. The four cats padded through the forest, they were on the evening patrol, and had wandered into the deep parts of the forest. The felines were starting to get worried, as they may not be able to find their way back to camp. "Great, now we're going to die in the woods with no cat around!" A pale grey she-cat hissed, her green eyes shining through the darkness. Her ears were pinned back in frustration. "Calm down, PlumTuft. That's irrational, even if we can't find our way back, the rest of the clan will find us by morning." A cream female flicked her ear, looking around in the darkness. Her pale coat stood out the most from the patrol of cats, who would be noticeable if not for their darker pelts. As the two mollys argued, a small gray tom stood next to a larger tom. The small one looked up at the bigger one, feeling anxious. He felt wrong, like something wasn't right. He felt uneasy. "PerchBrook, are we lost?" The big tom looked down at his apprentice, his large head nodding. "I'm afraid so, StonePaw." StonePaw hung his head, shifting his paws around. Great, now he felt even more anxious. "Do ReedBriar and PlumTuft really have to fight about it, though?" PerchBrook sighed, opening his mouth to speak when he suddenly stopped. His ears perked up, listening as he heard something. "Be quiet!" the tom whispered loudly, shutting up the two she-cats. PlumTuft tilted her head, an annoyed expression adorning her face. "What?" Everyone stopped as the faint sound of rustling was heard from around them. It kept getting louder as the heartbeats passed, and the four cats pressed closer together. PerchBrook nudged StonePaw behind him, standing in front protectively. Suddenly, the sound stopped. It was quiet again. Nothing and nobody moved for heartbeats. Then suddenly, screeches of pain disturbed the sound of silence. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jojo Posted April 30, 2019 Share Posted April 30, 2019 Cool start, even though I am not quite sure why warriors would get lost in their own territory Also I am weirdly proud to see Hazeclaw up there XD Also, also might I suggest to edit your allegiances with bold text for the ranks? (just makes its easier to see, no real need to do it otherwhise ) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aether Posted April 30, 2019 Share Posted April 30, 2019 19 hours ago, Katumai said: EchoMask-Silver lynx point she-cat FireFin-Red tabby she-cat with yellow eyes TawnyJay-Golden she-cat with soft, feathery fur Apprentice, BubblePaw ToadFish-Black tom Apprentice, FurzePaw JaggedStem-White tom with black patches and a crooked tail Apprentice, CattailPaw OddSpark-Lilac tabby she-cat with white paws and menacing amber eyes Apprentice, BoulderPaw "Ah! I don't care about personalities anymore." - Katumai 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted May 1, 2019 Author Share Posted May 1, 2019 Chapter 1 The camp was loud and bustling in ThunderClan territory, the birds chirped in the trees as the cats chatted away in the clearing. However, an uneasy feeling lingered between the felines, concern lacing the mews of most cats. A patrol returned to camp, carrying prey in their jaws as they pushed their way in. A sleek black she-cat looked around, the white dot on her chest gleaming in the sunlight. She dropped the mouse she had carried in, quickly grooming herself before taking another look. DaisyHeart paced uneasily beside the warriors den, and WillowFall sat by the nursery, her daughter MistMask next to her. It had been days since PerchBrook,, ReedBriar, PlumTuft and StonePaw had gone missing. CricketPaw, StonePaw's brother, was chirping happily as he ate with OakTail and RustFrost. For whatever reason, nobody had decided to inform StonePaw's littermate of his disappearance. NightPaw couldn't imagine not knowing her sibling was missing. That is, if she had any. StonePaw was the closest thing she had to a brother, and while she generally tried to keep calm about it, she was severely worried about the grey apprentice. She sighed, growing restless. She gave up trying to rest, and walked out of camp. She nodded a greeting to ShellSpots who was standing guard, not waiting for one back as she made her way into the forest. The young she-cat stalked through the undergrowth, her paws treading lightly over the ground. Sunlight filtered through the trees, shining in dapples on NightPaw's black fur. Her sleek pelt was smoothed down, keeping herself looking small so her prey couldn't see her easily. She hopped quickly over a fallen branch, sniffing the air for a target. She scented a vole not far away, and quietly stalked through the woods. She flinched momentarily as she stepped on a thorn, but quickly recovered when she spotted her prey. The molly crouched down, slowly stepping forward, watching as the vole nibbled on something. She bunched her muscles, getting ready to pounce, when something flew out of the undergrowth. She jumped back in surprise as a grey blur skidded to a halt in front of her, stumbling and falling to her side. NightPaw hissed, ready to defend her territory when she notices something. "StonePaw?" --------------------------------------------------------------------- 'Five warriors, kin not by blood, but by spirit, soul and heart, will stop the spreading darkness' 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aether Posted May 1, 2019 Share Posted May 1, 2019 On 4/29/2019 at 8:29 PM, Katumai said: EnvyPaw-Black tom with green eyes GreedPaw-Blue-grey tom SlothPaw-White she-cat with grey eyes WrathPaw-Flame colored tom with red eyes PridePaw-Grey tabby tom with purple eyes Gluttonpaw? (Hollowpaw(mouth)) Lustpaw? (Lovepaw(-eyes or heart)) --- Envy = Greenpaw(glow) (Green with Envy) Greedpaw = Ghostpaw(shade) (Sneaky, so he can steal) Slothpaw... ok that one kinda fits but Slugpaw(shell) Wrathpaw... that one too but: Violentpaw(slash) or Ragepaw(fang) Pridepaw = Lionpaw(roar)(Pride of lions... lion is a symbol of pride...) COULDYA BEEN MORE CREATIVE... (are they the 'Spreading evil?') Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broken Posted May 1, 2019 Share Posted May 1, 2019 Hmm, I wonder if Nightpaw and Stonepaw will become mates when they're warriors... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted May 1, 2019 Author Share Posted May 1, 2019 1 minute ago, Aetherskye said: Gluttonpaw? (Hollowpaw(mouth)) Lustpaw? (Lovepaw(-eyes or heart)) --- Envy = Greenpaw(glow) (Green with Envy) Greedpaw = Ghostpaw(shade) (Sneaky, so he can steal) Slothpaw... ok that one kinda fits but Slugpaw(shell) Wrathpaw... that one too but: Violentpaw(slash) or Ragepaw(fang) Pridepaw = Lionpaw(roar)(Pride of lions... lion is a symbol of pride...) COULDYA BEEN MORE CREATIVE... (are they the 'Spreading evil?') Sorry, I just wanted to that because SkyClan is weird and I didn't do Lust and Gluttony because I thought they wouldn't really fit in I guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted May 1, 2019 Author Share Posted May 1, 2019 3 minutes ago, Brokenshock said: Hmm, I wonder if Nightpaw and Stonepaw will become mates when they're warriors... Maybe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aether Posted May 1, 2019 Share Posted May 1, 2019 19 minutes ago, Katumai said: Sorry, I just wanted to that because SkyClan is weird and I didn't do Lust and Gluttony because I thought they wouldn't really fit in I guess Ah... One huge red herring you set me up for >.< I mean.. Loveheart is a viable name for skyclan... (and hollowmouth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aether Posted May 1, 2019 Share Posted May 1, 2019 19 minutes ago, Katumai said: Maybe Nightpaw feels like Stonepaw is her sibling... Sibling feeling = not mates That's gross. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted May 1, 2019 Author Share Posted May 1, 2019 Just now, Aetherskye said: Ah... One huge red herring you set me up for >.< I mean.. Loveheart is a viable name for skyclan... (and hollowmouth I meant that 'lustpaw' and 'gluttonypaw' wouldn't really sound right I guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broken Posted May 1, 2019 Share Posted May 1, 2019 Just now, Aetherskye said: Nightpaw feels like Stonepaw is her sibling... Sibling feeling = not mates That's gross. Well, that usually happens with kids, kind of like in Lion King, but they end up with each other Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted May 1, 2019 Author Share Posted May 1, 2019 1 minute ago, Aetherskye said: Nightpaw feels like Stonepaw is her sibling... Sibling feeling = not mates That's gross. I know, but take into consideration that my dad is dating my aunt and besides, I said MAYBE- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broken Posted May 1, 2019 Share Posted May 1, 2019 Just now, Katumai said: I know, but take into consideration that my dad is dating my aunt and besides, I said MAYBE- Well, maybe ; ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aether Posted May 1, 2019 Share Posted May 1, 2019 32 minutes ago, Katumai said: I know, but take into consideration that my dad is dating my aunt and besides, I said MAYBE- WAIT WHAT?! Then again: Clearsky x Star Shadow was a thing sooooooooooooooooooooo.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sky Posted May 1, 2019 Share Posted May 1, 2019 1 hour ago, Aetherskye said: Star Shadow who?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aether Posted May 1, 2019 Share Posted May 1, 2019 20 minutes ago, Skysplash8 said: who?? um... DotC... Was gunna be Thunder's mate but clear sky was like: "I gotta make my son's life as miserable as possible. and confuse. and enrage the shippers." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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