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Just now, Dumbledoor said:

(That's just mean...)

(What do you expect from some kid named Kirduk? and did you think this was directed at you? It wasn't. It was for SILVER.)

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1 minute ago, Dumbledoor said:

Silver turned to her. "Friend."

Friend! She turned to Shore who looked at her in fear. Foe. Not friend. She circled him like a shark. her eyes glinted coldly.

"I'm sorry mother forgive me!" He said and he pounced on her. His claws were sheathed and he pinned her down by the shoulders.

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Just now, Renio? said:

(What do you expect from some kid named Kirduk? and did you think this was directed at you? It wasn't. It was for SILVER.)

(I know it was for Silver, that's mean to Silver. And....)

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Just now, Dumbledoor said:

(I know it was for Silver, that's mean to Silver. And....)

(yeah. But he didn't say it.
HE THOUGHT IT.
and you better not bring back that whole reading mind thing.)

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But then, the sun started coming up and Silver's scar faded. She looked down. "I- I'm so sorry!" She jumped off and ran away.

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Just now, Renio? said:

(yeah. But he didn't say it.
HE THOUGHT IT.
and you better not bring back that whole reading mind thing.)

(I'm not. I know that, but I can still know what he's thinking)

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Just now, Dumbledoor said:

But then, the sun started coming up and Silver's scar faded. She looked down. "I- I'm so sorry!" She jumped off and ran away.

Saturn's scar burned silver then disappeared leaving her regular fur. "Brother I I'm sorry!"

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Coal watched the sun rise, listening to the others around him. The scar on his throat had already faded.

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Just now, FlowerMask said:

Saturn's scar burned silver then disappeared leaving her regular fur. "Brother I I'm sorry!"

"Saturn! Thank the stars your back! I'm sorry I had to do that I- I didn't want to get hurt." He wrapped his tail protectively around her.

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"I- I need to go!" She looked lovingly at Shore then ran over to where Bronze was.

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Silver kept running, she got to the edge of the island. She had to stop herself so she wouldn't fall into the water

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1 minute ago, FlowerMask said:

"I- I need to go!" She looked lovingly at Shore then ran over to where Bronze was.

Bronze looked at her, but then turned away.

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Just now, Renio? said:

His voice sounded like it was out of a movie.
"Gracefully, you take your precious time."

(Who are they talking to?)

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Just now, Dumbledoor said:

Bronze looked at her, but then turned away.

She looked away and saw Silver she Blushed and looked back to Bronze.

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Coal looked around, not sure what to do or where to go now. No nicheling would want to be near him. They never did.

(anddddd the negativity is back)

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Just now, FlowerMask said:

She looked away and saw Silver she Blushed and looked back to Bronze.

"What do you want?" He asked.

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Kirduk ran to Nashill. "YES!" He answered.
"Yes indeed, I've taken time. Come with me," Nashill said and fluttered back into the bushes with Kirduk behind him.

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2 minutes ago, Dumbledoor said:

(Who are they talking to?)

(Do they always have to direct anything they say at anyone? I didn't quote anyone, so basically everyone who could hear him.)

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Just now, Renio? said:

(Do they always have to direct anything they say at anyone? I didn't quote anyone, so basically everyone who could hear him.)

(Okay)

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