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@SilverTheFloofyCat

 

Iapetus. 

Who doesn't know the name of the Dark Market's King? The one who dances to and fro, studded choker on show for all to see (it glints, catching your eye) and furred red coat open? 

Nobody was unaware, and perhaps, that was the worst thing. 

For now- and you see them enter from where you sit (across from the room), sliding into the chair at the edge of the King's throne (a simple wooden desk)- all he had to do was pounce

Although, you think, low and deep in your mind, that pounce is a strong word- so strong, when all he does is trail his hand under the new victim's chin.

Perhaps it's the purr to his words that made you think this. Perhaps its the way he'd lean in, smirk and bare (it's the routine, you think. Smirk and bare his teeth). Perhaps it's the flutter of a hand, or the wink of a kaleidoscope eye. 

 No, you whisper. 

It's the four words. His mantra, you suppose. 

'Let's make a deal.'

The deal was their soul. 

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Guest SilverTheNicheling
Posted

Beautiful, lovely writing of your character! *claps*

Guest SilverTheNicheling
Posted

Taking me a few more reads to figure it out though, I still think it’s very good!

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