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54 minutes ago, Magicmoonss said:

wat is it? Is it a hole? Is it a bannana? Is it just broken? I have no clue.

Usually when people make threads like this, they want constructive criticism... Just a hint...

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Just now, Lilytuft said:

Usually when people make threads like this, they want constructive criticism... Just a hint...

I know but I honestly had no clue on how to give constructive critisism on that nose, I don't know where to even start with it.

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1 minute ago, Magicmoonss said:

I know but I honestly had no clue on how to give constructive critisism on that nose, I don't know where to even start with it.

Yeah. It’s pretty bad. How does this looks?

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Just now, Nugget v3 said:

Yeah.

Then my suggestions would be to make it bigger, maybe a bit more squarish and/or trianglish. And get rid of the three lines that are right above it, as they're a bit confusing.

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1 minute ago, Magicmoonss said:

Then my suggestions would be to make it bigger, maybe a bit more squarish and/or trianglish. And get rid of the three lines that are right above it, as they're a bit confusing.

This?

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1 minute ago, Nugget v3 said:

Let’s all appreciate how much I’ve improved since my first piece of digital artwork

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You have indeed improved a lot. I'll see if I can find my earliest digital drawings

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10 minutes ago, Magicmoonss said:

You have indeed improved a lot. I'll see if I can find my earliest digital drawings

I deleted the original files, as I tend to do with works I don't like. But, thankfully I can turn to deviant art for some unsaved ones.

 

Some of my earliest Niche related ones (the second one is earlier)

Liis by magicmoonss     image.png.27faff4377433f50c8492c977f18660a.png

And just my earliest one:

Cat Witch by magicmoonss

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Just now, Magicmoonss said:

I deleted the original files, as I tend to do with works I don't like. But, thankfully I can turn to deviant art for some unsaved ones.

 

Some of my earliest Niche related ones (the second one is earlier)

Liis by magicmoonss     image.png.27faff4377433f50c8492c977f18660a.png

And just my earliest one:

Cat Witch by magicmoonss

Cat in a witch hat!

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I really really love how you've drawn the horns on all your nichelings, but especially the last one! 

With regards to the nose as mentioned above, if you want to keep the illusion of depth with the more obvious nose, one thing you can do is use a colour slightly darker than your base colour (but not as dark as the outline colour) and put a few parallel lines right above the nose. It's kinda similar to what is in the third picture, but much closer to the nose itself. My advice for the second picture would be to just round out the chest just a little bit more. Not only to give it more of an impression of a rib cage, but also to distinguish a little better where the neck ends and the body begins.

Finally, with digital drawings, it can be really helpful to flip the image after you've worked on it for a bit, especially if you want your nicheling to look kind of symmetrical. It's a bit like how with traditional drawing, one of the suggestions I saw a lot was to hold the drawing up to a mirror. It sort of disrupts your mental image of the drawing and lets you see how it actually looks/how it looks to other people.

I hope that helps!

(side note, I love the crossed eyes on your rogue male, he is just unbearably cute) 

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On 8/17/2019 at 5:26 PM, takoyamAAA said:

criticize meeee

I don’t care how much you criticize

well I probably will but

do it

do it

pictures are in order of newest to oldest

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gamer those still suck

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