wikipedia [he/him] Posted November 15, 2019 Share Posted November 15, 2019 see a warrior story! (it explains the rules! ^^): however, please keep this serious! @Strayed Away Fawn @The Fawnth Doctor @Broken @The Flower Fawn ----------- ALLEGIANCES Ivoryclan Leader Ratstar - russet coloured tom Deputy Puddlehawk - fluffy white tom Apprentice, Fawnpaw Medicine Cat Fallenlight - black and brown tom Apprentice, Volepaw Warriors Slowcall - golden she-cat Apprentice, Slowpaw Milkbrook - russet coloured tom Thunderpool - lively smoky black she-cat Tumblehollow - black and white tom with patches of darker fur Shredstep - gray and white tabby tom Apprentice, Darkpaw Apprentices Darkpaw - dark orange she-cat Fawnpaw - blue-gray tabby she-cat Volepaw - light brown tabby she-cat Slowpaw - brown and cream tom Queens None..? Elders Duskbright - muscular black tom Kits Blizzardkit - night-black she-cat Dewykit - speckled white she-cat Raccoonkit - dark orange she-cat Silverkit - black tom Oakkit - dark orange tom Antlerclan Leader Ashstar - red and white tom with pale orange stripes Deputy Waspjaw - silvery gray tom Medicine Cat Swiftclaw - creamy brown tom Apprentice, Dustpaw Warriors Ivymist - mottled light brown she-cat with dark brown stripes Fireberry - unusually pink tom Apprentice, Oddpaw Brushsky - black and brown she-cat Apprentice, Ratpaw Raccoonsky - speckled ginger she-cat with ice-blue eyes Apprentice, Spiderpaw Rippleeye - dark black tabby tom with powerful hind legs Apprentice, Quickpaw Apprentices Quickpaw - gray tom Oddpaw - dark black tabby tom Ratpaw - russet coloured she-cat Dustpaw - red and white she-cat Spiderpaw - light gray tom Queens Dustypelt - red she-cat Frosttail - black and brown she-cat Elders None. Kits Tornkit - white she-cat Slowkit - gray and white tom Royalclan Leader Clawstar - blue-gray tabby tom Deputy Birchhawk - black and white she-cat with one missing ear Medicine Cat Tanglethroat - reddish-brown tom Apprentice, Fleetpaw Warriors Ryewish - dark black tabby tom Apprentice, Morningpaw Leafwatcher - pale gray tom Birdmask - handsome blue-gray tom Apprentice, Sunnypaw Brindlefin - huge reddish-brown tom Palepad - smoky black tom Brightleaf - blue-gray she-cat Ivyheather - long-legged white she-cat Blackshine - bluish-gray tom with black tipped fur Apprentices Fleetpaw - blue-gray tabby she-cat Morningpaw - black tabby she-cat Sunnypaw - bluish-gray she-cat Queens Slatewhisper - reddish-brown she-cat Rowanspots - smoky black she-cat Aspencreek - smoky black she-cat with a large scar on their back Elders Darkgrass - black tabby tom Goosetree - light brown tabby she-cat Riverstep - bright ginger tom Lakeheather - pure white tom Kits None. Honeyclan Leader Morningstar - dark brown she-cat Deputy Pouncebird - beautiful white she-cat Apprentice, Weaselpaw Medicine Cat Starlingshade - dark cream tom Apprentice, Sparrowpaw Warriors Minnowspark - lithe light tortoiseshell tom Apprentice, Dappledpaw Starlingfish - dark brown tom with green eyes Squirrelpelt - dusky brown tom Apprentice, Fernpaw Sneezethorn - red tom Vinehawk - smoky black tom Apprentices Weaselpaw - dark brown she-cat Sparrowpaw - mottled light brown she-cat Dappledpaw - dusky brown tom Fernpaw - mottled light brown she-cat Queens Sootswipe - black tabby she-cat Elders Tallspots - light orange tom Kits Coldkit - dark tortoiseshell tom Breezekit - dark brown tabby she-cat CATS OUTSIDE THE CLANS Fading - ghostly white tom Ferret - golden tabby tom ----------- ARC ONE LEANING ON METAPHORS PROLOGUE Characters: Fading - ghostly white tom (No Clan) Tanglethroat - reddish-brown tom (Royalclan) Waspjaw - silvery grey tom (Antlerclan) Volepaw - light brown tabby she-cat (Ivoryclan) The white tom slinks in, unseen if it wasn't for his ghostly pale pelt- Waspjaw, sat under the moon-flooded oak, huffs. "Took you long enough," He says, cool-toned, harsh. The pale tom chuckles and smiles at him. "Waspjaw," He purrs, "Aren't you neglecting your duties coming here?" The deputy jolts, icy eyes narrowing at the languid pace the ghostly one had set. "Maybe so," Waspjaw replies, stilling in his seat. Beside him, Tanglethroat had been washing his herb-stained paw, a sigh escaping his muzzle. "Wasp, you know better than to argue." Tanglethroat flicks his tail, laying deeper into the branches that formed a protective nest around him. Volepaw, below Tanglethroat, clears her throat, paws kneading the sliver-coated grass. "Fading," she murmurs, soft as the white tom's steps, "Why did you bring us here?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aether Posted November 15, 2019 Share Posted November 15, 2019 1 hour ago, wikipedia (angel) said: Quickpaw - gray tom Oddpaw - dark black tabby tom Ratpaw - russet coloured she-cat Dustpaw - red and white she-cat Spiderpaw - light gray tom (Why is this so satisfactory? anyways:) (Also, I feel like we need eye colors so we don't have a dovewing incident... I need to add those to mine too.) "You will see in due time." The pale tom replied. "You are young and irresponsible. The secrets we hold can destroy the forest and cannot under any circumstance be shared." Volepaw was intimidated. How did I get here? She remembers meeting Fading while she snuck out one night. He convinced her to come here. What did I get myself into? Why are Waspjaw and Tanglethroat here? She knew they were both relatively high positions in their clans So what does he want with me? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wikipedia [he/him] Posted November 16, 2019 Author Share Posted November 16, 2019 20 hours ago, Strayed Away Fawn said: (Why is this so satisfactory? anyways:) (Also, I feel like we need eye colors so we don't have a dovewing incident... I need to add those to mine too.) "You will see in due time." The pale tom replied. "You are young and irresponsible. The secrets we hold can destroy the forest and cannot under any circumstance be shared." Volepaw was intimidated. How did I get here? She remembers meeting Fading while she snuck out one night. He convinced her to come here. What did I get myself into? Why are Waspjaw and Tanglethroat here? She knew they were both relatively high positions in their clans So what does he want with me? Meanwhile, Fading had swept over to the other toms, dripping whiskers a glimmer of moonlight in the still air; his fur was a brand of white unlike what Volepaw had ever seen within the clans, and somewhere within her question-filled mind, another springs to play. Was Fading a kittypet? If he was, how did he know?CHAPTER ONE Fawnpaw - blue-gray tabby she-cat with forest green eyes (Ivoryclan) Oddpaw - dark black tabby tom with one lime green eye and one ocean blue eye (Antlerclan) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broken Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 9 minutes ago, wikipedia (angel) said: Meanwhile, Fading had swept over to the other toms, dripping whiskers a glimmer of moonlight in the still air; his fur was a brand of white unlike what Volepaw had ever seen within the clans, and somewhere within her question-filled mind, another springs to play. Was Fading a kittypet? If he was, how did he know?CHAPTER ONE Fawnpaw sat in her nest, the other apprentices still asleep. She knew that her mentor would come in and think of an excuse to not train her. She knew Puddlehawk hates her, but she didn't care. Soon she would be a warrior, and then deputy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aether Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 14 minutes ago, Broken said: Fawnpaw sat in her nest, the other apprentices still asleep. She knew that her mentor would come in and think of an excuse to not train her. She knew Puddlehawk hates her, but she didn't care. Soon she would be a warrior, and then deputy. Usually apprentices would jump for joy if their mentor decided not to train them for a day. But not Fawnpaw, she was ambitious. But she would never become deputy if she was never trained. maybe today she’d talk to Puddlehawk about finally training her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wikipedia [he/him] Posted November 16, 2019 Author Share Posted November 16, 2019 @Strayed Away Fawn@Broken@The Flower Fawn Added (main) character list for chapter one! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flower Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 18 minutes ago, Strayed Away Fawn said: Usually apprentices would jump for joy if their mentor decided not to train them for a day. But not Fawnpaw, she was ambitious. But she would never become deputy if she was never trained. maybe today she’d talk to Puddlehawk about finally training her. Fawnpaw got up from her nest and padded out of her den. Birds chirrped and warriors were causally talking to each other although she didn't see Puddlehawk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wikipedia [he/him] Posted November 16, 2019 Author Share Posted November 16, 2019 7 minutes ago, The Flower Fawn said: Fawnpaw got up from her nest and padded out of her den. Birds chirrped and warriors were causally talking to each other although she didn't see Puddlehawk. She gave a growl, low in her throat- where was that puffball of a deputy off to now? It would be bearable if the moon-damned tom actually taught her anything, but no- he decided he had to wander off at all the wrong moments! Her blue-grey tail lashed, and with a huff, she turns to the russety tom sat upon the dusty rock- great. A meeting. Upon the rock, Ratstar stares blankly down at the gathering of cats; they bustle and murmur, fearful eyes glancing up at him. He takes a breath. "Today, Puddlehawk went missing." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broken Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 1 minute ago, wikipedia (angel) said: She gave a growl, low in her throat- where was that puffball of a deputy off to now? It would be bearable if the moon-damned tom actually taught her anything, but no- he decided he had to wander off at all the wrong moments! Her blue-grey tail lashed, and with a huff, she turns to the russety tom sat upon the dusty rock- great. A meeting. Upon the rock, Ratstar stares blankly down at the gathering of cats; they bustle and murmur, fearful eyes glancing up at him. He takes a breath. "Today, Puddlehawk went missing." I'm gonna reply. One sec Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broken Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 1 minute ago, wikipedia (angel) said: She gave a growl, low in her throat- where was that puffball of a deputy off to now? It would be bearable if the moon-damned tom actually taught her anything, but no- he decided he had to wander off at all the wrong moments! Her blue-grey tail lashed, and with a huff, she turns to the russety tom sat upon the dusty rock- great. A meeting. Upon the rock, Ratstar stares blankly down at the gathering of cats; they bustle and murmur, fearful eyes glancing up at him. He takes a breath. "Today, Puddlehawk went missing." Fawnpsw gasped, although she wasn't sure why. Well... with Puddlehawk gone I could train myself... She glanced at the exit and slipped towards it. She ran through without anyone noticing. If I do get caught I could say that I was looking for Puddlehawk. She sniffed in and smelled another cat. She looked around and realized that she was close to the Antlerclan border. She stepped back and smelled... squirrel! Her eyes darted around looking for it and saw it under a tree. She got into a hunter position, snuck forward, and lept. But the squirrel must've seen her coming because it skittered away and she landed with her nose covered with dirt. She growled and heard a short behind her. She whipped around and saw another apprentice across the border. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flower Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 ima reply Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flower Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 7 minutes ago, Broken said: Fawnpsw gasped, although she wasn't sure why. Well... with Puddlehawk gone I could train myself... She glanced at the exit and slipped towards it. She ran through without anyone noticing. If I do get caught I could say that I was looking for Puddlehawk. She sniffed in and smelled another cat. She looked around and realized that she was close to the Antlerclan border. She stepped back and smelled... squirrel! Her eyes darted around looking for it and saw it under a tree. She got into a hunter position, snuck forward, and lept. But the squirrel must've seen her coming because it skittered away and she landed with her nose covered with dirt. She growled and heard a short behind her. She whipped around and saw another apprentice across the border. Oddpaw snorted at the apprentice then looked at her with wide innocent eyes when she whipped her head around at him. "I used to fall on my face all the time as a kitten." He chuckled as he stepped closer to the border. "I guess some of us just take a little longer to figure out how to control their balance." He turned his head so only his lime green eye was visible as he watched the squirrel give Fawnpaw a death glare. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flower Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 I kinda regret making oddpaw like this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flower Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 @TrashFawn2490 can I edit it or are you writting something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 Just now, The Flower Fawn said: @TrashFawn2490 can I edit it or are you writting something? I'm just sitting and watching yes you can edit it :0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flower Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 1 minute ago, TrashFawn2490 said: I'm just sitting and watching yes you can edit it :0 Ok ty I just saw you were veiweing it. (Wait that sounds stalkery) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wikipedia [he/him] Posted November 16, 2019 Author Share Posted November 16, 2019 1 minute ago, The Flower Fawn said: I kinda regret making oddpaw like this (its fine!! possibly he has a cold outer exterior only because she's an outsider cat?) 13 minutes ago, The Flower Fawn said: Oddpaw snorted at the apprentice then looked at her with wide innocent eyes when she whipped her head around at him. "I used to fall on my face all the time as a kitten." He chuckled as he stepped closer to the border. "I guess some of us just take a little longer to figure out how to control their balance." He turned his head so only his lime green eye was visible as he watched the squirrel give Fawnpaw a death glare. Fawnpaw bristled, her blue-tipped fur standing on end. "What are you doing?" She hisses, unsheathing her claws- hunting wasn't particularly her strong suit, but fighting definitely was. "And what are you?" The black tabby gives her an amused grin. "Oddpaw, at your disposal." He mock-bows, his wide tail splayed out behind him. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flower Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 Just now, wikipedia (angel) said: (its fine!! possibly he has a cold outer exterior only because she's an outsider cat?) Fawnpaw bristled, her blue-tipped fur standing on end. "What are you doing?" She hisses, unsheathing her claws- hunting wasn't particularly her strong suit, but fighting definitely was. "And what are you?" The black tabby gives her an amused grin. "Oddpaw, at your disposal." He mock-bows, his wide tail splayed out behind him. She suppresses an amused smirk. "Why are you so close to our border?" She hissed lashing her tail aggresively. "How do I know your not spying spy." She spat the last word out. Oddpaw feigns supprise. "Me? A spy? I would never!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broken Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 9 minutes ago, The Flower Fawn said: She suppresses an amused smirk. "Why are you so close to our border?" She hissed lashing her tail aggresively. "How do I know your not spying spy." She spat the last word out. Oddpaw feigns supprise. "Me? A spy? I would never!" Fawnpsw slightly chuckled. "You didn't ask my question. Why are you so close to our border?" She hissed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flower Posted November 16, 2019 Share Posted November 16, 2019 Just now, Broken said: Fawnpsw slightly chuckled. "You didn't ask my question. Why are you so close to our border?" She hissed. "Can't a cat go for a nice walk these days?" He asks his eyes going wide in false innocence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aether Posted November 17, 2019 Share Posted November 17, 2019 4 hours ago, The Flower Fawn said: "Can't a cat go for a nice walk these days?" He asks his eyes going wide in false innocence. "I can tell you're lying." she growled "You can't tell a squirrel from a mouse. How would you ever know." She was getting more infuriated by this tom every second. Finally it got to the point where she unsheathed her claws and walked up to him. "Oh, someones getting mad." He smirked She swiped a paw at him cutting him across his nose. It felt satisfying. But this was what Oddpaw wanted... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wikipedia [he/him] Posted November 17, 2019 Author Share Posted November 17, 2019 11 hours ago, Strayed Away Fawn said: "I can tell you're lying." she growled "You can't tell a squirrel from a mouse. How would you ever know." She was getting more infuriated by this tom every second. Finally it got to the point where she unsheathed her claws and walked up to him. "Oh, someones getting mad." He smirked She swiped a paw at him cutting him across his nose. It felt satisfying. But this was what Oddpaw wanted... Fawnpaw fights back the urge to snarl as she puffs up her chest and strides towards Oddpaw, paw raised- and she leaps, unsheathed claws colliding with the arrogant apprentice, bowling him over and dangerously close to the ledge separating Royalclan from Ivoryclan. "Go on then," She seethes, looking down, suppressing the thrill that being in charge brought. "Brag, won't you?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flower Posted November 17, 2019 Share Posted November 17, 2019 3 hours ago, wikipedia (angel) said: Fawnpaw fights back the urge to snarl as she puffs up her chest and strides towards Oddpaw, paw raised- and she leaps, unsheathed claws colliding with the arrogant apprentice, bowling him over and dangerously close to the ledge separating Royalclan from Ivoryclan. "Go on then," She seethes, looking down, suppressing the thrill that being in charge brought. "Brag, won't you?" "I think I will." He says. Fawnpaw digs her claws in deeper in his scruff, satisfied when he winced in pain. "Are you scared? Want your mommy?" She taunted . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aether Posted November 17, 2019 Share Posted November 17, 2019 Just now, The Flower Fawn said: "I think I will." He says. Fawnpaw digs her claws in deeper in his scruff, satisfied when he winced in pain. "Are you scared? Want your mommy?" She taunted . A Royalclan patrol consisting of Leafwatcher and Ryewish and an apprentice she didn't recognize comes upon them. Leafwatcher quickly knocks Fawnpaw off of Oddpaw. "Why is there a Antlerclan apprentice fighting a Ivoryclan apprentice nearly over the border!" Leafwatcher exclaims to no one in particular, "You two are coming with us until your leaders decide what to do with trouble makers like you." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wikipedia [he/him] Posted November 17, 2019 Author Share Posted November 17, 2019 1 minute ago, Strayed Away Fawn said: (Do you mean Antlerclan?) (no, oddpaw wouldnt have made it up if the cliff separated him) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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