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Everest just sorta layed at the side of the cave. He kept itching at his wounded eye, which is probably not the best way to go about it. Him itching at the wound caused a weird liquid to stain the white fur around his paws, along with some blood.

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Im making a big ol poster-ish thing with the song 'That's not how the story goes', because it could honestly fit this rp and its sequel

For example, the main line: "But there's no happy endings, not here and not now. This tale is all sorrows and woes. You might dream that justice and peace win the day, but that's not how the story goes."

And:

"I once loved a girl and she thought well of me, we thought we'd happy together. But im alone now as you can well see; she's cold in her grave forever." I think of this less as a romantic thing, and more as maybe Finch mourning Carrion? Not sure

"You'd think that four children would lead pleasant lives, but that's not how the story goes..." Reffering to Rabbitspring, Flash, Vissen and Snowdove (I know it's 'three' not 'four', but for the sake of this I changed it)

 

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1 minute ago, Clover said:

Im making a big ol poster-ish thing with the song 'That's not how the story goes', because it could honestly fit this rp and its sequel

For example, the main line: "But there's no happy endings, not here and not now. This tale is all sorrows and woes. You might dream that justice and peace win the day, but that's not how the story goes."

And:

"I once loved a girl and she thought well of me, we thought we'd happy together. But im alone now as you can well see; she's cold in her grave forever." I think of this less as a romantic thing, and more as maybe Finch mourning Carrion? Not sure

"You'd think that four children would lead pleasant lives, but that's not how the story goes..." Reffering to Rabbitspring, Flash, Vissen and Snowdove (I know it's 'three' not 'four', but for the sake of this I changed it)

 

The main four :’( now it’s just two of them left or like 1 and 1/2 bc Rabbitspring is in a coma like state

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(Just thought I'd put this thing I wrote here)

WARNING: THIS IS HORRIBLY DARK, WHAT HAVE I DONE-

 

The wind whipped her violently, though the sounds rang hollow in her ears as she stared down the cliff. 

Had she just?

She felt like vomiting. She could still feel her claws digging into flesh, she could still hear the desperate cries of her love as she begged her to stop. Blood stained the tips of her claws, marking her stark white fur with crimson. 

She didn't notice she was crying until a drop of cold water fell on her paws, which finally led her to sobbing. She crumpled, curling in on herself. That was it.

She had just murdered Rabbitspring. She felt like screaming, like clawing her own eyes out, but she did none of it. Her body moved not an inch as she lay in the snow, paws covering her face as her body wracked with sobs. 

She hated herself. So much. She stared at the gems hanging around her neck, suddenly feeling nothing but fury. What was that? What happened?

Wait...

Finch. This was his fault. He killed Rabbitspring.

Without a second thought, she jumped up, running at full speed down the slope. That rat was going to pay. He would suffer for this.

 

 

Next thing she knew, Finch was pinned under her. Blood sprayed the snow, and she could feel flesh ripping violently beneath her claws and teeth. 

She could hear Bubbli screaming, begging her to stop. She thought she almost saw Issi out of the corner of her eye, but who cared?

Finch was limp. He seemed to be nothing but a-

She nearly gagged, what had she done?

Finch was unrecognizable. His fur was almost completely gone, scattered on the ground around them. He almost looked skinned, if she were being honest.

...When had she clawed his eyes? There seemed to be nothing but crimson voids where they used to be.

Bubbli was sobbing, curled up between a couple of nichelings from Jubileze's tribe. She was shaking violently, and Snowdove felt horrible guilt stab her in the gut.

She was a monster now, wasn't she?

 

 

She felt weak.

She couldn't breathe very well, were the rocks really that sharp?

One of Hope, it hurt. It hurt so bad.

Why hadn't she just died from the fall? Why did she have to suffer through being practically impaled?

She sighed-or at least tried to. She could hear the steady dripping of her blood as it flooded from every wound in her body. She could taste it.

She hoped whole-heartedly that she could see Rabbitspring again, that she could see Flash and Vissen. 

But that was a low chance.

There was no way she was getting out of The Rotting One's clutch this time.

At least Issi was still left, right?

The forest was dark. It smelled of death, and she didn't bother trying to get up. Everything hurt. Black oozed from her massive wound, and she knew it would never heal.

 

"Welcome, chosen one."

 

 

Note: THIS IS AN AU, A REALLY DARK ONE. I LOVE TORTURING MY CHARACTERS, ALRIGHT?-

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2 minutes ago, Clover said:

(Just thought I'd put this thing I wrote here)

WARNING: THIS IS HORRIBLY DARK, WHAT HAVE I DONE-

 

The wind whipped her violently, though the sounds rang hollow in her ears as she stared down the cliff. 

Had she just?

She felt like vomiting. She could still feel her claws digging into flesh, she could still hear the desperate cries of her love as she begged her to stop. Blood stained the tips of her claws, marking her stark white fur with crimson. 

She didn't notice she was crying until a drop of cold water fell on her paws, which finally led her to sobbing. She crumpled, curling in on herself. That was it.

She had just murdered Rabbitspring. She felt like screaming, like clawing her own eyes out, but she did none of it. Her body moved not an inch as she lay in the snow, paws covering her face as her body wracked with sobs. 

She hated herself. So much. She stared at the gems hanging around her neck, suddenly feeling nothing but fury. What was that? What happened?

Wait...

Finch. This was his fault. He killed Rabbitspring.

Without a second thought, she jumped up, running at full speed down the slope. That rat was going to pay. He would suffer for this.

 

 

Next thing she knew, Finch was pinned under her. Blood sprayed the snow, and she could feel flesh ripping violently beneath her claws and teeth. 

She could hear Bubbli screaming, begging her to stop. She thought she almost saw Issi out of the corner of her eye, but who cared?

Finch was limp. He seemed to be nothing but a-

She nearly gagged, what had she done?

Finch was unrecognizable. His fur was almost completely gone, scattered on the ground around them. He almost looked skinned, if she were being honest.

...When had she clawed his eyes? There seemed to be nothing but crimson voids where they used to be.

Bubbli was sobbing, curled up between a couple of nichelings from Jubileze's tribe. She was shaking violently, and Snowdove felt horrible guilt stab her in the gut.

She was a monster now, wasn't she?

 

 

She felt weak.

She couldn't breathe very well, were the rocks really that sharp?

One of Hope, it hurt. It hurt so bad.

Why hadn't she just died from the fall? Why did she have to suffer through being practically impaled?

She sighed-or at least tried to. She could hear the steady dripping of her blood as it flooded from every wound in her body. She could taste it.

She hoped whole-heartedly that she could see Rabbitspring again, that she could see Flash and Vissen. 

But that was a low chance.

There was no way she was getting out of The Rotting One's clutch this time.

At least Issi was still left, right?

The forest was dark. It smelled of death, and she didn't bother trying to get up. Everything hurt. Black oozed from her massive wound, and she knew it would never heal.

 

"Welcome, chosen one."

 

 

Note: THIS IS AN AU, A REALLY DARK ONE. I LOVE TORTURING MY CHARACTERS, ALRIGHT?-

All I can say is I’m glad Snowdove didn’t kill her wife :’) also it’s beautiful written and extremely gory, a perfect combination? Also yes, it’s Finch’s fault somewhat, he did go a little to fast  

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1 minute ago, Flower said:

My son has been looking for your child

My child has ran away. I've Been looking for her too

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1 minute ago, FawnCat said:

My child has ran away. I've Been looking for her too

Ah yes. 
“Issi!”

Finch called, his fur was ruffled from the wind that flattened nearly everything to the bleak mountain side. 

“ISSI!”

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1 minute ago, Flower said:

Ah yes. 
“Issi!”

Finch called, his fur was ruffled from the wind that flattened nearly everything to the bleak mountain side. 

“ISSI!”

Issi groaned a bit and lifted her head. Still groggy from sleep. "Finch?" She yawned and looked at Bubbli still asleep next to her. She looks around and notice she doesn't see the new Nicheling she met today.

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5 minutes ago, FawnCat said:

Issi groaned a bit and lifted her head. Still groggy from sleep. "Finch?" She yawned and looked at Bubbli still asleep next to her. She looks around and notice she doesn't see the new Nicheling she met today.

(Is she in the cave?) 

“I’ve been looking for you..” he said in a quiet tone, as if he were afraid to upset her more then he already had by not watching Bubbli carefully enough

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Just now, Flower said:

(Is she in the cave?) 

“I’ve been looking for you..” he said in a quiet tone, as if he were afraid to upset her

(No just next to a big tree. She tried to make nests for them to sleep in but she couldn't so the just curled up and slept behind the tree and some rocks.)

Issi blinked before her brain clued her in. "Finch!" She jumped up and walked to him. "What are you doing here?" She looks around it was still a bit dark but closer to the morning hours. "Wait, why where you looking for me?"

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Just now, FawnCat said:

(No just next to a big tree. She tried to make nests for them to sleep in but she couldn't so the just curled up and slept behind the tree and some rocks.)

Issi blinked before her brain clued her in. "Finch!" She jumped up and walked to him. "What are you doing here?" She looks around it was still a bit dark but closer to the morning hours. "Wait, why where you looking for me?"

“Because I was worried that you took Bubbli away from the cave without telling me.” He said, his voice turning into a slight snarl. (She was mad at him bc he was sleeping and Bubbli sneaked away to the mountains by herself)

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Just now, Flower said:

“Because I was worried that you took Bubbli away from the cave without telling me.” He said, his voice turning into a slight snarl. (She was mad at him bc he was sleeping and Bubbli sneaked away to the mountains by herself)

Issi frowned. "She was at the cave and went off on her own to find me." She looked at Bubbli still sleeping. "I already talked to her about it." Issi looked at him. "Why does it seem that you're mad at me?" She sat down and licked some off her fur that stood up. "I didn't do anything wrong."

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Just now, FawnCat said:

Issi frowned. "She was at the cave and went off on her own to find me." She looked at Bubbli still sleeping. "I already talked to her about it." Issi looked at him. "Why does it seem that you're mad at me?" She sat down and licked some off her fur that stood up. "I didn't do anything wrong."

“Because you didn’t talk to me about anything.” He snapped, pacing back and forth. 

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Just now, Flower said:

“Because you didn’t talk to me about anything.” He snapped, pacing back and forth. 

She stopped licking her fur and look at him. "What was I suppose to say." Her voice was soft but had a slight edge to it. "You seem to forget that I'm not like the rest of you." She stood up and glared at him her voice raised, "I can't play the loving mother and wife part!" Issi growled and huffed. "I've always been alone. Maybe it was better that way!" She took a step back. I didn't mean to say that... right?

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Just now, FawnCat said:

She stopped licking her fur and look at him. "What was I suppose to say." Her voice was soft but had a slight edge to it. "You seem to forget that I'm not like the rest of you." She stood up and glared at him her voice raised, "I can't play the loving mother and wife part!" Issi growled and huffed. "I've always been alone. Maybe it was better that way!" She took a step back. I didn't mean to say that... right?

“Fine! Then stay alone.” He said, his expression stung and furious. “I’ll be with Rabbitspring, if you even care to know she’s in a coma!” Why are you using that for leverage if it’s your fault she is in one in the first place?

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Lemme just join real quick

A nicheling enters the cave. Out of breath. It is clear they had been running for a while. When they look up, they have a surprised expression "You! You are the ones from my dream!"

image.png.8ffa5892e9744b6d0290756e2c977e97.png (I feel like she'd be a mix, but mostly from Tundra heart. I dunno, I don't understand the system much.)

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1 minute ago, Flower said:

“Fine! Then stay alone.” He said, his expression stung and furious. “I’ll be with Rabbitspring, if you even care to know she’s in a coma!” Why are you using that for leverage if it’s your fault she is in one in the first place?

Issi growled. "Fine! I was better off alone anyway!" She looked away from Finch over to the snow valleys in the distance. What am I doing? I've been the happiest I've ever been in my life with him. Good, Issi we are always ruining everything. She wanted to step away but stopped. "I owe Rabbitspring." She looks at him fleetingly before going to Bubbli's side. "Time to wake, Bubbli." "I'll go to help Rabbitspring."

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Just now, G00gle Translate said:

Lemme just join real quick

A nicheling enters the cave. Out of breath. It is clear they had been running for a while. When they look up, they have a surprised expression "You! You are the ones from my dream!"

image.png.8ffa5892e9744b6d0290756e2c977e97.png (I feel like she'd be a mix, but mostly from Tundra heart. I dunno, I don't understand the system much.)

Jubileze looked up, fur bristling.

"WOAH, who are you?!" She snapped, swinging her tail around in case she needed to fight.

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1 minute ago, FawnCat said:

Issi growled. "Fine! I was better off alone anyway!" She looked away from Finch over to the snow valleys in the distance. What am I doing? I've been the happiest I've ever been in my life with him. Good, Issi we are always ruining everything. She wanted to step away but stopped. "I owe Rabbitspring." She looks at him fleetingly before going to Bubbli's side. "Time to wake, Bubbli." "I'll go to help Rabbitspring."

Bubbli yawned, stretching.

"Hm?" She said groggily, looking up at Issi with her eyes still closed.

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