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in the sunshine she lay
she enjoyed its ray
until the clouds came out
and filled her with doubt
would the sun ever come?
would the sky stay numb?
no answer there were
but soon light hit her fur
for the sun had come back
and joy she did not lack
because in light she would lie
until she heard a cry
"Mother," it would shout
"Why did father run out?"
"Father went where?"
"He went over there,"
and the cub would point
and the lioness it would disappoint
for Father had run
to have great fun
with other mothers
with their sons and daughters
his mate and cub, shunned
forgotten, unloved and stunned
left to die
until there were no more questions of "why"
and a new lion would come
"Come with me, little one"
and the lions would run
as far as they could
away from that wretched,
horrible stud
to start a new family
of more than three
for a new cub would be bared
no more families would be shared
for this lion did not like to fuss because
"There is nothing more important than us."

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there slithered a snake
his name was Jake
his scales were as bright as day
his eyes like a sun's ray
wandered by a crow
"I'll warn you this, because I know;
if I see you again,
Someone will break your slimy skin!"
so Jake went away
to a meadow to play
until a rhino stepped
and Jake's family wept
for little Jake was gone
and there would never be a dawn
that the crow would not cry,
"You forgot I can fly!"

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33 minutes ago, Skysplash8 said:

she found a pretty blue flame
with this, she claimed her fame
though the trees fall and the water drains
all will remember her freedom from chains

I need to know. Is it supernatural? What is the story? Are all of them(Your poems) related?

Since this is about poems, accept this offering 😜 (I can't do poems)

What is a poem

Some say it's a curse

all about the traverse

I'll rather sleep on the verse

(I wasn't joking, I failed the test in school when we had to write one.)

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42 minutes ago, FawnCat said:

I need to know. Is it supernatural? What is the story? Are all of them(Your poems) related?

Since this is about poems, accept this offering 😜 (I can't do poems)

What is a poem

Some say it's a curse

all about the traverse

I'll rather sleep on the verse

(I wasn't joking, I failed the test in school when we had to write one.)

The poems aren't related, I just amde them up as I went xD In the first one, it's basically about a girl who was tied up and in chains, but she found a fire to burn the chains away, which made her famous. The chains and fire can be metaphorical, too :)

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9 hours ago, Skysplash8 said:

in the sunshine she lay
she enjoyed its ray
until the clouds came out
and filled her with doubt
would the sun ever come?
would the sky stay numb?
no answer there were
but soon light hit her fur
for the sun had come back
and joy she did not lack
because in light she would lie
until she heard a cry
"Mother," it would shout
"Why did father run out?"
"Father went where?"
"He went over there,"
and the cub would point
and the lioness it would disappoint
for Father had run
to have great fun
with other mothers
with their sons and daughters
his mate and cub, shunned
forgotten, unloved and stunned
left to die
until there were no more questions of "why"
and a new lion would come
"Come with me, little one"
and the lions would run
as far as they could
away from that wretched,
horrible stud
to start a new family
of more than three
for a new cub would be bared
no more families would be shared
for this lion did not like to fuss because
"There is nothing more important than us."

R.I.P. the cub

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10 hours ago, Just normal Lilytuft said:

R.I.P. the cub

That wasn't what it was supposed to imply xD it was supposed to be that the male lion left his mate and cub to die, bit they didn't die because this other male lion came and took them in (and promised to not take any other mates, since that other lion betrayed them).

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okay so I wrote another long poem (not as long as that other one though), but it's religious, so I'm just going to post a link to it, and if you want to read it, read it, and you can use the little comment feature at the top right corner (looks like a speech bubble) on the link's website if you want to make any comments on it. that way, if any fights ensue, it will stay in a safe place away from the forums (don't bring any fights here, please). Hopefully this is a good enough remedy to get around the rules xD I know that a majority of you will either not look at it or hate it (if you know you're going to hate it, please, just don't read it, I don't want to make people angry), but I really want to share this because I'm really proud of it :)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14Tobh46Ml4XkTbmYpVUrw8VCv_6Zb2R-nYp4zle1q9c/edit?usp=sharing

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6 minutes ago, baby yoda said:

My name is Oreo

I have no frend

I never perch

To go to bed

and wen I sleeps

upon the ground

girl moves me up

to safe and sound

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And wen I wake

up in the loft

i not so smart

my hed is soft

I sit alone

and beak is frown

while other play

I cant get down

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4 hours ago, baby yoda said:

my Name is may

I Stomp the ground

wen I hears grain

i Make big sound

Wen girl comes in

She give me kiss

she use the hand

to scratch the itch

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r/ilikthebred

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7 hours ago, Skysplash8 said:

That wasn't what it was supposed to imply xD it was supposed to be that the male lion left his mate and cub to die, bit they didn't die because this other male lion came and took them in (and promised to not take any other mates, since that other lion betrayed them).

I know, but irl when a new male takes over a pride or even a single lioness, it kills all of the previous male's cubs

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4 hours ago, Skysplash8 said:

okay so I wrote another long poem (not as long as that other one though), but it's religious, so I'm just going to post a link to it, and if you want to read it, read it, and you can use the little comment feature at the top right corner (looks like a speech bubble) on the link's website if you want to make any comments on it. that way, if any fights ensue, it will stay in a safe place away from the forums (don't bring any fights here, please). Hopefully this is a good enough remedy to get around the rules xD I know that a majority of you will either not look at it or hate it (if you know you're going to hate it, please, just don't read it, I don't want to make people angry), but I really want to share this because I'm really proud of it :)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14Tobh46Ml4XkTbmYpVUrw8VCv_6Zb2R-nYp4zle1q9c/edit?usp=sharing

Fun fact: It was a good poem

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7 hours ago, Just normal Lilytuft said:

I know, but irl when a new male takes over a pride or even a single lioness, it kills all of the previous male's cubs

I though they just killed the male Cubs? But oh well...pretend it's Lioden

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