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Just now, Clover said:

It doesnt seem that far off tho-

No, Pression's tribe does a fight to the death to determine the leader. This tribe is NORMAL--

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Just now, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

No, Pression's tribe does a fight to the death to determine the leader. This tribe is NORMAL--

It could be in the PAST, AND NOW THAT I HAVE THOUGHT OF IT, I WILL NEVER LET IT GO-

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3 minutes ago, Clover said:

It could be in the PAST, AND NOW THAT I HAVE THOUGHT OF IT, I WILL NEVER LET IT GO-

Maybe. Maybe that's why Chestnut is the leader-- 

I mean- Everest got to keep some guards when he came out on top--

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When Chestnut bred with Rodriguez, she didn't expect them to have any strength, but a bearyena-clawed child proved her wrong. Chestnut examines the child, pushing the child over to see the response. The child just stumbled, not leaving the nest. The child soon just passed out, too young to understand what just happened. 

Chestnut just told the unnamed heiress to go find her father. Rodriguez gets up to escort her, but Chestnut tells him to stay.

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The tribe find some ports that seemingly lead to another jungle. Mud immediately hops on, looking at the rest of the tribe expectantly. When nobody joins her she just scoffs. "C'mon! Before she comes to find us!" She called to them. Amber came closer, but was still hesitant. "We can't just leave without a leader.." She mumbled, looking back towards the crowd of fearful nichelings. "And I don't think any of us are exactly fit to lead.." She said, looking back over towards Mud.

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(gonna test something out- Perspectives?)

 

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Honey's P.O.V: Mother seemed mad today. She hurt brother's eye, and he keeps holding it. Did he do something bad? Anyways... I see a weird plant up ahead. It smells weird, and every so often I hear a hiss coming from it.    Oh! Almost forgot something! Today a stranger called Peanut came up and started taking our berries! It made mom really mad. Is that why she hurt brother?

 

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Mushroom's P.O.V: Today we heard really loud yelling. I looked up and saw the bird man calling out for help. It worked, because some cool nichelings rushed over! Bird man seemed to know them, but I know that these guys are still strangers. The large black-furred nicheling looks familiar. That might just be me missing dad, but I feel like I've met him before. Maybe one of the evil men mother told me about?        When I waved my claw at the man I didn't expect to be hugged, but I guess that's just what happened? He was talking about some other dude named Nukir. I'm a little scared.

 

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Almond's P.O.V: Mommy and Mud have been fighting all day. Walnut helped sneak me onto the ports when mom wasn't looking. It feels wrong not to listen to mom, but everybody keeps telling me that what Mud's saying will help us. Walnut is trying his best to keep me entertained, but it's hard not to run back over to mom.

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5 minutes ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

(gonna test something out- Perspectives?)

 

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Honey's P.O.V: Mother seemed mad today. She hurt brother's eye, and he keeps holding it. Did he do something bad? Anyways... I see a weird plant up ahead. It smells weird, and every so often I hear a hiss coming from it.    Oh! Almost forgot something! Today a stranger called Peanut came up and started taking our berries! It made mom really mad. Is that why she hurt brother?

 

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Mushroom's P.O.V: Today we heard really loud yelling. I looked up and saw the bird man calling out for help. It worked, because some cool nichelings rushed over! Bird man seemed to know them, but I know that these guys are still strangers. The large black-furred nicheling looks familiar. That might just be me missing dad, but I feel like I've met him before. Maybe one of the evil men mother told me about?        When I waved my claw at the man I didn't expect to be hugged, but I guess that's just what happened? He was talking about some other dude named Nukir. I'm a little scared.

 

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Almond's P.O.V: Mommy and Mud have been fighting all day. Walnut helped sneak me onto the ports when mom wasn't looking. It feels wrong not to listen to mom, but everybody keeps telling me that what Mud's saying will help us. Walnut is trying his best to keep me entertained, but it's hard not to run back over to mom.

WZEtsrydufgiuh i have so many questions-

Peanut is yet another nicheling to add to the ever growing family of nut nichelings

I cant help but ask why Honey has bearyena claw, it could have easily been in one of her parents' mutation menus just because, but im ME, so im saying that its for story purposes-

Nukir you say? Where have I heard THAT cursed name before?

Also, Almond is really growing on me. 10/10 love her

 

Finally, have some more nut names:

Hazelnut

Macadamia

Beechnut

Acorn

Breadnut

Candlenut

Palmnut

Kolanut

and finally, Filbert. A type of nut thats used as 'filler' in a lot of nut dishes. Beautiful choice of name, I know

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Honey's P.O.V: Brother opened his eyes today! Mom seemed to be mad, but I don't know why. He has really pretty eyes! 

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Honey's P.O.V: I decided to bring brother towards where all the noise was, but he keeps bumping into stuff. I think he's just really clumsy, but dad seemed sad when he saw him. Is there something bad about brother? Why do mom and dad not like him?

 

Mushroom's P.O.V: The dude from yesterday keeps following me. Why is he following me? Am I special? Ugh.. I just want to be left alone...

 

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Almond's P.O.V: They're still fighting... It's starting to make me mad, and I think Walnut agrees that we need to make these two shut up. Maybe I can convince mom to come with us? I kinda feel bad for her. She used to be free, but she told me about how the tribe needed more people at the time.. I just wish she'd make this easier for herself.

 

 

(Chestnut is lonely gorl)

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7 minutes ago, Clover said:

WZEtsrydufgiuh i have so many questions-

Peanut is yet another nicheling to add to the ever growing family of nut nichelings

I cant help but ask why Honey has bearyena claw, it could have easily been in one of her parents' mutation menus just because, but im ME, so im saying that its for story purposes-

Nukir you say? Where have I heard THAT cursed name before?

Also, Almond is really growing on me. 10/10 love her

 

Finally, have some more nut names:

Hazelnut

Macadamia

Beechnut

Acorn

Breadnut

Candlenut

Palmnut

Kolanut

and finally, Filbert. A type of nut thats used as 'filler' in a lot of nut dishes. Beautiful choice of name, I know

Chestnut's father was the decendant of a bearyena. He carried a lot of the genes, but she herself didn't get anything other than the brown fur. The claw is in her menu as a sort of recessive gene-

 

Nukir- I meant my god of strength but okay- 

 

Almond is bb. Steal and Honey are best siblings. 

 

Filbert. Need to make that a royalty name. I wanna swear so bad right now-

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Almond's P.O.V: More people have been coming, and it just seems to make mom more and more angry. I really want to help her, but Walnut is telling me to just stay still. I'm scared...

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Mushroom's P.O.V: He's still following me! Everybody gives me a weird look when I ask them to get this stranger away from me, which does NOT help. What will it take for him to leave me alone?!

 

Honey's P.O.V: We're almost at the ports, but brother keeps falling over. Why is this happening? His legs are fine, why can't he just walk in a straight line without hitting something?  Is this why mom hit him? Does it help fix him? Why is he so wrong?

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This play through is so sad and I LOVE IT. Also, I'm loving the P.O.V.'s, but I also love your normal writing, so maybe a combination of both??

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wanted to talk about the POV stuff idk
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Rodriguez stares at the lonely meadow of meat plants. He then looks down to see Chestnut. She looks up at him with fear in her eyes. "Where is everybody?" She questioned, trying to cover up the fear.

"They are leaving.." He mumbled, looking off in the distance. He could almost see the ports from his spot in the tree.

 

 

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Me and brother got to the ports today. We saw Amber crying and trying to get to Almond... What happened? Ebony and Mushroom have had to block her. I don't think we can wait much longer. `\Honey/`

 

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R.I.P Chestnut- Eaten by plants.

 

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Rodriguez watched Chestnut struggle for a bit before taking flight. She was getting what she deserved.

 

 

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Father is here! But now we don't know who to bring with us... Brother started talking today, but it was hard to hear him over the crowd surrounding us on the ports. He seemed to be calling out for dad. Why did he want dad so much? He never got to see dad like I did, why does he suddenly want him? Am I not good enough for him? `\Honey/`

 

Rodriguez or Venom?

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2 hours ago, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

Rodriguez or Venom?

Rodriguez.

I like this so far. At one point I was thinking you're going to do like two islands at once. Make a save and play one where we see Chestnut and how she's corrupting the tribe and the other save shows Mud and her tribe of misfits trying to survive there own way. 😄

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2 minutes ago, FawnCat said:

Rodriguez.

I like this so far. At one point I was thinking you're going to do like two islands at once. Make a save and play one where we see Chestnut and how she's corrupting the tribe and the other save shows Mud and her tribe of misfits trying to survive there own way. 😄

Hmmmmmm-- tempted- very tempted-

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The stones fall behind the nichelings, Walnut leading the group onto land. Honey set Steel down on the damp forest floor. 

 

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As the tribe thinks of what to do next, Steel stumbled around until he felt a surface like back home. He climbed into the nest and curled up, exhausted from the trip. Honey went to his side, trying not to get caught on the thorns. Walnut looked over with a smile before turning to address the rest of the tribe. They decide to try heading East.

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Rodriguez flew up into a tree so that he could keep an eye out for predators. Mud followed him, making a nest by the side of the tree so that she could keep her baby safe. Almond stayed and started digging in the sand, memories of her mother running through her head. Walnut sat next to Steel, eventually falling asleep. Mushroom poked one of the thorns before quickly pulling her hand away. She said something under her breath before backing up a bit. Ebony stares at the weird berry bushes, wondering why they were purple and covered in small white thorns.

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On 5/6/2020 at 10:15 PM, Dysfunctional Numbers Foxy said:

Ebony stares at the weird berry bushes, wondering why they were purple and covered in small white thorns.

Because they wanted to be that way. They begged the gods for some protection against nimble fingers. It didn't work for the poor bushes.

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Almond walks over to Steel, looking at the grey male. She'd found his behavior a bit odd, and when she saw his eyes she knew why. Mom had told her all about the different types of nichelings she'd met, and this nicheling looked a lot like one of those nichelings. Mostly because of the eyes.
She saw how annoyed Honey was, and decided to look after Steel for a while. Steel was happy that someone would want to spend time with him, but Honey wasn't so eager. 

 

Mud looked down at her child with a puzzled look. She poked the child around a bit, trying to figure out why it looked so odd. Rodriguez looked down from his tree, looking at the child. He suggested a name, and Mud just sorta shrugged and walked away. This made Rodriguez really confused, and he just sorta watched her leave the newborn next to the nest.

 

Tanner looked over at Dodo, noting how weak the nicheling looked. Dodo had been weakly poking at the thorns, and seemed way too jumpy. Tanner looked over at the water, and he suddenly had an idea. He walked over to Dodo and offered to teach them how to fish. Dodo was uncertain, but Tanner managed to convince them.

 

Ebony and Mushroom just sorta did their own thing, trying to find some wanderers.

 

Walnut saw Honey sneaking after Almond and Steel and decided to approach her. Honey jumped when Walnut spoke, and quickly turned around. She started making a bunch of excuses, and Walnut just sorta stared at her. Honey just sorta inched closer to the palm tree.

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Honey wacked the palm tree and then hid behind some thorns. A loud crack was heard, and suddenly Almond was unconscious. It took Steel a while to realize what happened, but once Walnut was done freaking out he tried to explain to Steel that the wind was really strong.
Steel ended up refusing to go anywhere until Almond was conscious again.

 

Tanner's just trying to teach Dodo how to fish.

 

Kokonaut (the newest member) had been talking to Rodriguez before hearing someone in the distance. They bolted away before Rodriguez could stop them.
Kokonaut ran right into her mom, who had been trying to climb a tree for some reason. She looked up the hill and saw two nichelings she'd never met. Her new goal was going to be making friends with them. Uuuuuuuuuuntil she smelled something else.

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Kokonaut searched through the grass a bit to find a male staring down at her. He jumped up to huddle around her as the two nichelings at the top of the hill fled from something. Kokonaut had no idea what was happening, but chills went down her spine when she heard growling nearby. The male must have known that a bearyena was coming.

 

Walnut makes sure that Steel is okay with Almond before running off to find Honey. He questioned her sanity, which just made her mad. They started to argue, but two nichelings interrupted by popping up at the shore. 
Dodo seemed to be having fun, and didn't seem as jumpy as before. Walnut smiled like nothing had happened, but Honey was still just really annoyed. Tanner had also been having fun, but they went back to tough boy act when they saw the other two.
Dodo was telling Walnut how fun fishing was, and about how they had been chasing some fish. Walnut just saw Dodo as an innocent child who was really hyper for some unknown reason.

 

Mud had been right next to the stone, about to start hopping, when she suddenly heard splashing in the water behind her. She backed away from the stone and turned around to see Ebony facepalming and Mushroom splashing around frantically. Mud growling before walking over to the shoreline with a smile. She asked about what was happening, and Mushroom screamed something about drowning. 

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The bearyena had managed to get close enough to swipe at Kokonaut, but the wanderer held it back while telling the child to run. Once the child had gone as far as they could, they ran after ze child to stop the bearyena from catching them. (my brain is breaking, one moment)

Kokonaut looked up at the wanderer, tilting her head. She questioned him, but he refused to answer the questions.

 

Tanner watched as Dodo left to go check out some noises in the distance. He then turned back to Honey and Walnut, who were uncomfortably silent. He questioned them, and when Walnut opened his mouth to talk he got slapped by Honey. Honey growled at him as a warning not to say anything. Walnut sighed and looked over at the water. Tanner narrowed his eyes before trying to swipe at a nearby Mr. Krabs.

 

(toneb ediiiiindde))O(I    (Kinda don't wanna delete that until I find out what I was saying-)

 

Mud hesitantly walked up to the shore to help Ebony get Mushroom to move. Mud looked over to the other shoreline to see her child next to a pinkish nicheling. She was a bit nervous, but after getting Mushroom to the shore she decided to go talk to the nicheling.
When Mud came back to the ports, she saw Ebony winking at Dodo, and Dodo just sorta taking a step back. She scoffed, then pushed between them to get to her spot. She might act like a loner, but she still wants attention. Mushroom was just hiding behind Ebony and staring at the water.

 

Steel had been curled around Almond, still waiting for her to wake up. He tried to crack a coconut open, but he didn't exactly have the requirements, so he was going in blind. (Please don't murder me I just wanna get better at puns aaaaaaaaaaa-)

 

Rodriguez called out a few times, seeming a bit unamused. He didn't really have anyone to talk to.

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Steel woke up to someone booping him. He opened his eyes tiredly, but that wasn't gonna do anything.
"Hey, sleepyhead, wake up!" A voice teased. Steel lifted his head up, looking over towards where the voice was coming from. "Almond?" He questioned tiredly, excitement soon kicking in. "Almond!" He chimed, standing up. He smiled as she got up. "Well yeah, who else would it be?" She asked jokingly.

After a bit of talking, Steel and Almond made their way over to the others.

 

Tanner convinced Honey and Walnut to get moving towards the ports, since the tribe had been hearing growls in the distance. Walnut may or may not have had to drag Honey, but they were able to get to the ports in due time.
When they arrived, Tanner saw Ebony trying to flirt with Dodo. Dodo kept shutting him down, but it still gave Tanner a weird feeling. Tanner walked up to Dodo, glaring at Ebony. Dodo was excited to see Tanner, and started to talk to talk to him, oblivious towards the staring contest going on.

 

Mushroom stared at the stones ahead, a wave of nausea going through her again. Mud put a paw on her shoulder to calm her down, smiling when Mushroom looked over at her. Mud tried her best to calm Mushroom down, but Mushroom couldn't stop thinking of all the deep water they'd be walking over.

 

Rodriguez looked down from his tree to see Steal and Almond walking away. He watched them leave before leaning back and spreading out his wings. He took flight, diving towards the shoreline near the ports. He looked up at the tree looming over him. It was pretty short, so he'd stay down on the shore for now.

 

Kokonaut was carried to the ports by the wanderer. Honey was confused when she saw the male, and started yelling at him to get him away from the child. He just calmly walked up and put Kokonaut down between Honey's paws. He then looked up at the yellow nicheling, raising an eyebrow as she continued to yell. Walnut nudged the wanderer to get his attention, and apologized for Honey's growling. Honey started yelling at Walnut because she didn't want to apologize, but Walnut and the wanderer both just ignored her. Walnut started talking to the wanderer, Kokonaut chiming in a few times. The wanderer eventually told them that his name was Peachskin.

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As distant growls grew near, the tribe startled to huddle on the ports.

Steel and Almond stayed next to each other, Steel catching Almond up on stuff that's happened. It wasn't much, but it kept him happy, which made Almond happy.

Walnut decided to help try to calm Mushroom down. Mushroom ended up burying her face in Mud's shoulder so that she didn't have to look at the water. Mud tried not to complain about her personal bubble, since they didn't want Mushroom to see the water rising because of the rain.

Ebony decided to talk to Honey, trying to ignore Tanner's glaring.

Tanner stopped glaring at Ebony when he started talking to Honey. Tanner looked down at Dodo. Dodo wasn't too short, but still shorter than average.
Dodo smiled sweetly at Tanner. It gave Tanner a weird feeling, which he tried to ignore.

Deep growling caught everyone off-guard, and everyone turned to see Rodriguez surrounded by bearyenas. Peachskin quickly turned and pushed Kokonaut onto the ports, then turned and got ready to go over and help if he needed.
Dodo started freaking out, whimpering and trying to back away. Tanner looked over at him, and it sorta made him sad to see Dodo scared. He put a paw on Dodo's, trying to calm him down. Dodo started saying stuff about the huge bearyenas, but Tanner shrugged and turned to look back at the bearyenas.

Rodriguez had already jumped up onto the tree, smirking as he watched the bearyenas struggle below him. He looked over at the group and tried to do a thumbs up, but he only had the one hook at the end of his wing to do so.

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Once the bearyenas started to get tired, Rodriguez leaned back and flew over to the last port. All the ports are now occupied.

Dodo looked around, then back at Tanner. Tanner smiled at Dodo, telling him he'd stay back to make sure that the bearyenas wouldn't come after them. Dodo looked sad, but nodded.

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And off they go to a new island~

 

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Tanner, Male, loves to fish.

Death: Eventually eaten by bearyenas

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Peachskin, Male, Not much known about him

Death: They eventually bleed out because of piranha bites.

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Ebony was first to step foot onto the new island, and all that his mind could think was "heat". It was overwhelming. He rushed up into the grass as the rest of the tribe filed in. 

Almond had been having to tell Steel when to jump, and she was glad she finally had a break. Mud pushed past them and into the first next she saw. It was the most comfortable place to rest, and it only fit for a queen such as herself. Well, half-queen. Steel and Almond decided to stick close to her so that they wouldn't block the others' path. 

Honey glared at Almond before running forward into the unknown. Walnut sighed and chased after her, followed by a traumatized Mushroom. 

Dodo just sorta walked off by himself, trying not to think too much. He just needed to stay happy until the tribe settled, that's all. Nothing else. He can just think happy thoughts right now.
Suddenly, a small nicheling jumped out of the grass. Dodo ducked, and the nicheling flew right over his head. Dodo quickly turned around and looked at the nicheling, and wasn't entirely surprised to see a child, but was still scared. The child looked up at Dodo, growling as they bared their teeth.
Mushroom looked over to see something small threatening Dodo, and sorta nudged Honey. Honey looked over with a growl before seeing the child.

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