Applesauce Posted November 11, 2020 Author Share Posted November 11, 2020 Speaking of Nunu, he's decided to take a break from hunting and try something new. He's going down to the beach to pursue his passion as a beachboy! Or something like that in his world. It might just be his father's side, but really just wants to eat some calms. Plus he's bored of all this grass gathering. 3 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 11, 2020 Author Share Posted November 11, 2020 Akari points him the way. She thinks he'd be a pain if he had to gather anymore grass. 4 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 11, 2020 Author Share Posted November 11, 2020 Meanwhile Floo goes back and tries to talk to the tall buggy creature again. He apoligizes for being rule before but no dice. He's even starting to think that it might not be a creture at all. Just a tall mound of dirt. Crazy, right? When he's done he heads back towards the tree where Akari waits. 'I can't open this nut!' She tells him. 'How do you do this!?' Floo encourges her but still, no crack. 5 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 11, 2020 Author Share Posted November 11, 2020 Having master cracking skills and infinite space in his stomach, Floo just shrugs and eats it himself. Hopefully she won't mind. 3 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 11, 2020 Author Share Posted November 11, 2020 Morning! And the tree has gifted Akari a nut! How nice. 'Why don't I get one?' Floo is jealous. Akari notices and kindly pats him on the head, giving him the nut to crack. They can spilt it later. 5 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 11, 2020 Author Share Posted November 11, 2020 At the beach Nunu is disapointed to find no clams. Very sad. Oh but what could this be? He see's some blueish grass, topped with some bramble and weeds unlike any ground on this island. He steps onto the port and is greated by a scary sight. Tis a skull hanging ominously from a tall, jagged rock. He feels like he should say hello, but he decides he doesn't want the spirits after him. 5 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 11, 2020 Author Share Posted November 11, 2020 He takes a step back. The port itself smells pleasant. Lots of fruit and flower await on this island. But has a deadly undertone. Would it be worth it? He decides to ask Floo and Akari. 6 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 14, 2020 Author Share Posted November 14, 2020 Floo and Akari wander on towards the back of the tree to find more nuts. Akari waits patiently as he gathers them. 5 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 14, 2020 Author Share Posted November 14, 2020 In the morning she leads Floo over to a quiet spot behind the tree. She clears away the grass. She knows he's getting weaker and that today could be his last. In a short time, Nunu joins them. Though eager to tell them about the port he'd found, his enthusiasm dissipates when he sees Akari's face. It's time. 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 14, 2020 Author Share Posted November 14, 2020 They stay by his side the whole day. Akari and Floo trade stories of their travels well into the afternoon. The two share a lot in common. Maybe if they new eachother in their younger years they could have started a nice family. When she doozes off to sleep he picks berries with Nunu. He couldn't think of a better way to spend a day. Nunu holds in a sniff 'I know you'll miss me,' Says Floo. 'But you won't be sad forever. I know you can get passed this because there are better things waiting you.' Nunu squeezes him, his tears evaporating onto his strange green fur. 'Thanks for always being there.' Floo hugs him back. 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PincerClaw420 Posted November 14, 2020 Share Posted November 14, 2020 NOTHING IN LIFE COULD HAVE PREPARED ME FOR THIS *keysmashes* 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowleopard0 Posted November 14, 2020 Share Posted November 14, 2020 WHY IS THIS SO SAD ;( ;( i'm actually crying over this poor lime poofball 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 14, 2020 Author Share Posted November 14, 2020 Though he knows his time has come, Floo is happy. He's surronded by his good friend and nephew who care for him very much. Under a large, green tree, On a peacful little island in the middle of a great blue ocean. And as he closes his eyes for the very last time, He knows he would have it no other way 1 6 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 14, 2020 Author Share Posted November 14, 2020 30 minutes ago, PincerClaw420 said: NOTHING IN LIFE COULD HAVE PREPARED ME FOR THIS *keysmashes* 29 minutes ago, Snowleopard0 said: WHY IS THIS SO SAD ;( ;( i'm actually crying over this poor lime poofball I'm so sorry guys! I was thinking of giving you a warning but then my brain was like, "mmm no, it's part of the story." evil brain it was. If it makes u feel better I'm doing the last part tomorrow. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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mhiahia Posted November 14, 2020 Share Posted November 14, 2020 1 hour ago, Applesauce said: I'm so sorry guys! I was thinking of giving you a warning but then my brain was like, "mmm no, it's part of the story." evil brain it was. If it makes u feel better I'm doing the last part tomorrow. Honestly I think its wonderful - sad and wonderful. The ending sequence, where you gradually zoom out is very beautiful, and the story has come to a beautiful end. An ending needs to fits its story, and this is a perfect fit. Love it. 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 14, 2020 Author Share Posted November 14, 2020 9 minutes ago, mhiahia said: Honestly I think its wonderful - sad and wonderful. The ending sequence, where you gradually zoom out is very beautiful, and the story has come to a beautiful end. An ending needs to fits its story, and this is a perfect fit. Love it. Thank you so much. I think this meme I stole from pancakes homethread perfectly captures how I feel about your guy’s support on this playthrough. 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 15, 2020 Author Share Posted November 15, 2020 Night comes and goes, and with morning comes a somber, steady drizzle. After leaving their friend with all the flowers and berries they could find, Nunu takes Akari to the port. When they get there, Akari looks at him and places her paw upon his shoulder. This is something he must do alone. Nunu steps onto the port, the jungle brush soft against his paws and the wind cold in his mane. He looks back at Akari and the island one last time. She gives him a warm, assuring smile as they wave their goodbyes. Nunu looks across the ocean. He is scared. Espcially without his uncle to guide him, but he knows in his heart he is ready. And slowing but surely he starts on his journey, taking the first steps across the ocean and into the rest of his life. The End. 1 5 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
irisflowering Posted November 16, 2020 Share Posted November 16, 2020 ohmygosh. wow. This is so sad Floo no... Nunu going off on his own *cries* It's a great end to a very captivating story, but I agree with whoever said this (apparently I cannot remember a name for 5 minutes) *KEYBOARD SMASH* 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MАTTRESS Posted November 16, 2020 Share Posted November 16, 2020 leaves from the vine: Finally, a worthy opponent! Our battle will be legendary! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 16, 2020 Author Share Posted November 16, 2020 15 minutes ago, gamingcookie said: leaves from the vine: Finally, a worthy opponent! Our battle will be legendary! Whoa that’s some next level sad. Are u guys ok? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PincerClaw420 Posted November 16, 2020 Share Posted November 16, 2020 3 minutes ago, Applesauce said: Whoa that’s some next level sad. Are u guys ok? no 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 16, 2020 Author Share Posted November 16, 2020 Speaking of avatar, I know it’s a stretch but I can’t stop thinking about it - 4 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MАTTRESS Posted November 16, 2020 Share Posted November 16, 2020 23 minutes ago, Applesauce said: Whoa that’s some next level sad. Are u guys ok? no 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted November 16, 2020 Author Share Posted November 16, 2020 Letter of Appreciation Sorry to hear I made y’all feel something. I know I said it before but I’ll say it again, thank you all so much for reading. I can be very insecure about writing, and your words have really helped me get over that dread. I even started making an outline for a comic I’ve been thinking about for months. Plus it helped me get over 20 pages of story. So in a way, you guys were part of the making. In short, I just glad you all enjoyed it. 5 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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