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bostonlobstah

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  1. On 12/31/2019 at 4:21 PM, Birthday Fawn (Philo) said:

    @manglolia Thank you :D
    Could you show me some examples where I did it wrong? Want to learn and improve!
     

    Same to you @Renio2222: Did you notice anything specific I do wrong often?

    sure thing!

    an example:

    Original: “You are such a scaredy cat sis!”, he laughed, then stepped out and shook the leaves off his pelt. 

    Edited: "You are such a scaredy cat, sis!" He laughed, then stepped out and shook the leaves off his pelt. 

    Alternatively: "You are such a scaredy cat, sis!" he laughed. Then he stepped out and shook the leaves off his pelt. 

     

    Basically there should no comma after the quotation ends. :)

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  2. That's an awesome story!!! Great work! I love how the tribe is portrayed in this. I can't wait for more ;)

    Grammar and stuff is pretty good, the quotations are done incorrectly but if you want me to edit I can help you out :D 

    Now I want to draw Nara :,D

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  3. 39 minutes ago, gaminggingerbread said:

    feather family, you're a bird and you can customize your bird and stuff

    FRICKEN ME AND JASPER USED TO PLAY THAT FHFKDFKGAFGJBEOU

    I need to tell her

    I can play with u if it's not too late

  4. Just now, Illuminati Fawn said:

    It's been too long since I've read warriors. Who's the one in jail? (it looks awesome btw)

    tallstar. I dunno if it suits him enough but I wanted him to be in the pic

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  5. Okay thanks everyone! 1 and 7 still need takers! Once they are in I will close :) I think this one will be humans :)

    Also I made this one last night with the monopoly template, based on warrior cats

    I don't regret a thing

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  6. Ok I have been hit with this idea

    You post a draw the squad template you would like for me to use, and yall can submit nichelings that I will draw in :)

    It can be a humanized squad or a nicheling squad :)

    I made one real quick but we can use any template really

    Just post your nicheling and the number you'd like!

    I call magnolia for 2 XD

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  7. 34 minutes ago, QuarkyFawn said:

    Pretty sure it’s “A Christmas Carol” thing... could be wrong, dunno 

    Someone correct me if I am wrong

    yes 

    bah humbug 

    that is my sister's favorite phrase lol

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  8. okay get ready for this

    I've been doing a lot of rough sketches with a thicc pencil tool because I can't do decent lineart for the life of me rip

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    a disney-warriors crossover I did one day

    it's cursed help me---

    (I made 2 others if ur curious)

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    aaaand i'm still into the fnaf lore so uh

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    Skylar Ginn (magicmoonss might know who I'm talking about)

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    and now....me n my sheep

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    warriors sona

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    bad doggo sketches (OCs and hypothetical OCs)

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    this is just the tip of the iceberg my dudes

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