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Zixvir

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  1. you forgot to update the list of characters on the dragon thing, also, did you make an game out of the book? just curios, and of course, your stories are amazing! very awesome.

  2. 1 hour ago, gamingcookie said:

    are you watching rat of two e

    the antagonist is just the person who loses, not the person who's evil, so the "bad guy"(the chef) is actually the good guy, evidenced here

     

  3. 1 hour ago, W-C-A19RanSSdom87F-P-C said:

    KK, imma make it once I'm finished with the actual story!

    well you will have to choose if it is multiplayer, and how many players in game(don't try to do infinite, it's basically impossible and if you want to and no one shows up you will have to put in alot of effort, all for nothing, but you will at least still have the story.) and what type of game it will be, an rp/sim, a text adbenture, and weather it will happen before, after, during, or even in the same universe as the story, of course, it is a small story, so I imagine it to be in a simaler universe, but not the same universe as the story, you do you.

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  4. 1 hour ago, W-C-A19RanSSdom87F-P-C said:

    Only got 3 chapters so far.. any ideas?

    well you can do whatever, even let it get out of hand, as there is no such thing.

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  5. 3 minutes ago, gamingcookie said:

    (they know how to spell they were spelling badly on purpose)

    they know that (well most likely, I don't know anyone who doesn't) it is a Joke

    oooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

  6. 11 hours ago, gamingcookie said:

    heres the build I built its a libray

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    fthe exterior which looks bad and I just kinda gave up on trying to make it look good does anyone know how I can make it better

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    you could put a secret room inside and make it so they need to use candle parkour to get there, is could be behind a painting, or you could make a hole with with bookshelves inside.

    25 minutes ago, PincerClaw420 said:

    zivir what is thbis word i nmedd answers

    1. I can barely read this(learn to spell)

    2. ppl means people.

  7. 2 hours ago, gamingcookie said:

    it got 9k likes and it said 1 hour ago on tge comment ?

    can you spell check before posting? it helps ppl understand when you say something, unless you don't want anyone to understand, so could you please tell me what this says.

  8. new ability: confused:

    when a psychic or ghost move is used, this pokemon becomes immune to confusion based attacks for 4 turns but gets a lower special defense and gets confused, they also lower the opposing pokemons special attack.

    (note: this only happens once per redraw, so if you redraw your pokemon (switch back to it even after the ability is used  on that same battle)

    it will activate again after a ghost or psychic move is used.)

     

  9. 25 minutes ago, gamingcookie said:

    confusion deals damage though it just has a bit of a chance to make the target confused ?

    I know, but I did that because I am the eternally confused, so as such, I am the master of confusion, so I am immune to confusion.

    and all confusion effects.

    that would either be my ability, or a move I could use called confused, witch would make me immune to confusion effects for 2 turns, but it lowers special defense. 

  10. 2 minutes ago, Zixvir said:

    hmmm, maybe you could finish the book(anywhere) and you could make a bunch of small stories, then, when you're old enough, you could publish a book with all those small stories!

    they would probably do quite well, or you could do marketing, but you would probably have to learn marketing, and you would have to most likely get a team, but it's your choice! your future is in your hands.

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  11. 3 minutes ago, W-C-A19RanSSdom87F-P-C said:

    Chapter 2: The Pack

    The next day, the family saw that Hope was actually walking around, like she was getting better! "Mom! Look!" Lilith pointed to the gash, that was now already almost healed.. what had happened? The pup was now bouncing around, playing with the girls, over all just feeling so much better! The family heard a rustle in the bushes outside, it was scary.. but Hope seemed to like it, there was the rustling turned to growling, "Mom? What's going on?" Christine asked, Ania stayed quiet, putting her finger over Christine's mouth, keeping her quiet.. a shadow of some sort of animal appeared on the wall, Hope barked, the animal was coming around the corner.. Hope barked again, the animal saw Hope, and the family, it started growling.. "W-wolf.." Ania whispered..

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    Want more? Or..

    Just feedback?

    hmmm, maybe you could finish the book(anywhere) and you could make a bunch of small stories, then, when you're old enough, you could publish a book with all those small stories!

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