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  1. This was the first Niche video where I edited out that awful background noise a good bit and amped up the audio (though it still isn't as loud as I'd like it, pretty sure it's louder than the other two episodes) Also first one where I thought of making a thumbnail! Though if you go to youtube now and look at the other 2 of this season, you will see that I have added thumbnails for them as well. Anyway, enjoy this video and let me know what you think about it (and the thumbnail).

    **Spoiler Alert**

     

    To read the description highlight the white text below

    After a year of dormancy, we are finally back! And after over 40 episodes, we have finally left the archipelago. So it's no surprise that to kick this off we are starting a new season. This new season is going to follow our now much smaller tribe, called Group A (or the Exploration Group), as they travel through the remaining islands on the way to Home Island, the goal. Some of these islands we may stop on to breed and collect food, others we will travel through as quickly as possible. So get ready to enjoy this journey as I try to complete storymode with this tribe that has so much history.

    This episode, we finish the path to the port and the nichelings start getting prepared for going to the next island. Anarame has her third child, who still doesn't carry the bearyena snout, but has double bearyena claw. She spends the last of her life with her new mate, who loves her and all of her daughters (though her eldest is with the rest of the group across the river). A bearyena attacks and the family escapes across the river. Now we have 11 members, and only 10 spots on the port. Who will stay behind to fight the bearyena? Maybe neither of Anarame's daughters...maybe someone else entirely.

     

     

  2. 10 minutes ago, YourLocalStranger said:

    'It's just a memory, it's not here right now!' Thief agreed with the Nervous Brother. Sharp was quite obviously freaking out, but Thief didn't really know what to do. 'Just breathe, alright? No one here will hurt you. Right now, you're safe.' He said this both to the new spirit and to Sharp. 

     

    Newly Forgotten

    The spirit didn't understand all the words. The tone was comforting, though. They threw a distressed glance at the glowing one. 

    Nervous Brother

    "It's okay, we can go away from here. What did you see? What scared you?" Maybe I can help them like Guiding helped me

  3. 2 hours ago, PeanutBrittle said:

     

     

     

     

    The spirit looked at the scene with much fear. Her gaze came back to Crystal “Wait” she thought “The words she muttered, why did I say anything??” She had realized that by asking herself what knowing the past was like, Crystal had wanted to try and help. That seemed to go bad…

     

    She turned to Sharp, the screaming piercing her ears. “Hey hey, calm down. She’s gonna be ok” the words were the first comforting thing she can think of. In reality, she had absolutely no idea what was going on.

     

    3 hours ago, Andromeda_ said:

     

     

     

    Sharp began to panic and didn't know what to do. He was getting overwhelmed. He curled up and covered his eyes and tried to get the memory out of his head, but it was all he could think about.

     

    6 hours ago, YourLocalStranger said:

    Thief glanced over. The mumbling suddenly gave way to an angry yelling. But it wasn't crystal yelling, was it? He was somewhere else. 

    The yellow and black nicheling was beside him again. He was much clearer than in the previous memories, Thief saw that they were about the same age in the memory. The nicheling had antlers, heat body, and a peacock tail, and he wore a large grin in his face. Thief felt himself smiling right back. They were running and laughing, while someone was yelling at them from behind. Thief turned around and saw an old nicheling, she looked like someone had tripped her, and the berries she was carrying were spilled everywhere. 'You nuisances!' she screamed after them. 'I don't even know why your mother puts up with you two!' Thief and the other nicheling just laughed, and kept running. Thief nudged the nicheling, and then they started playfighting, the sun shining brightly in the sky. The memory slowly faded. Thief felt alone again. As he got back to his senses, he realised: I have a brother. Had. That nicheling said how did our mother put up with us, that means we shared a mother!

    His spirits fell again when he remembered what happened when the gray nicheling broke his paw. His brother had turned away. Left him. The dark nicheling that Thief had killed must have been important to his brother. More important than Thief had been. His mind was spinning. 

    Thief barely noticed, his mind caught up in his own thoughts, but once he did notice, he put a comforting paw on his friends shoulder, and cast a worried glance over at Sharp. 

    The screaming snapped Thief out of his own thoughts. Thief didn't know what to do. He tried to get in front of the new nicheling, to bring them back out of wherever the memory had brought them. 'Wake up! Please!' He said as loud as he could without yelling. For some reason yelling had never agreed with him. 

     

    6 hours ago, Fox leaf said:

    "Leave her. Pain is not a reality here" Crystal said

    Newly Forgotten

    They were shook out of their memory, but it was burned into the mind. They backed away from the glowing one (Crystal), because of what it reminded them of. Then, with flashes of the memory still being brought up, they began to run. 

    Nervous Brother

    They ran after the new spirit, "You're alright, just memory." They said as the spirit turned to them momentarily. 

  4. On 2/16/2023 at 7:15 PM, A Nicheling said:

    The best time of this forums XD

     

    On 2/14/2023 at 8:12 PM, Lilytuft said:

    This was before we even had an rp section. Everyone was creating countries and there was this big war that spanned so many threads that the rp section was made

    Wish I had been around to see it. Sounds epic

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  5. 52 minutes ago, Fox leaf said:

    "Yes. My friend had faded a bit the last time I saw her. No memory flashes."

     

    2 hours ago, PeanutBrittle said:

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    The spirit looked down at the nicheling “Is he ok?? What happened?” She asked him

     

    2 hours ago, Andromeda_ said:

    Sharp muttered a quiet "It's alright." The memory was stuck in his mind. He had a mate and children??? He died to a balance bear??? His brain was swirling.

     

    2 hours ago, Andromeda_ said:

     

     

     

     

     

    "...Pain..." 

    (gore warning)

    A memory flash. Sharp's eyes flashed blue. A strange creature, which he recognized as a balance bear from his previous memory. The balance bear charged at him, impaling him with its claws. Blood stained both Sharp's fur. Sharp screeched in pain. There was another scream, and Sharp looked over to see a pink female nicheling with white spots, a purr snout, antlers, and heat body. Two little nichelings with purr snouts and antlers just like her were behind her, looking frightened and crying. 

    "Daddy!" One of the little nichelings cried. Before everything went black, and the memory was gone. 

     

    Sharp stood there in shock, breathing quickly. The tense aura of the memory was still surrounding him. The word pain repeated in his head.

     

    2 hours ago, Fox leaf said:

    Its where you are before you come here. Its where there is pain and colours."

    Nervous Brother

    "And memories, they must come from there," they repeated, looking at some of the others having memory flashes, "because you come from there, and you cause more."

    Newly Forgotten

    The memory continued, but most of it was forgotten as soon as it was remembered. It all seemed blurry and distant. But when this happened... 

    1 hour ago, Fox leaf said:

    Crystal mumbled a few words. Nobody could hear them, but they generally triggered memories

    Suddenly something horrible flashed before her. She started screaming, both in the memory and for the others to hear. 

    Nervous Brother

    When they hears the screams they turned toward the new spirit, "What's wrong?" They said with alarm. That's when they saw that their glowing eyes had dissapeared. Panic rose within them. 

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  6. 1 hour ago, Fox leaf said:

    There are two worlds. The living and the dead. You are in the dead and I'm needed in the living"

    "Living?" Asked Nervous Brother, finally putting the pieces together, "Is that the place before, where mind-thought...memories come from?" 

    Newly Forgotten 

    They looked down at their new shadow, larger now, and looked back up to see things had changed some. Not much, but the blue swirled around in a way that made them uncomfortable. And they sensed a presence beside them.

    Their eyes continued their blue glow,  as far as anyone else around them was concerned, but they couldn't see that themself. 

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  7. Just now, Fox leaf said:

    (My newest one. The one that died in the living rp)

    "By past I mean the... Dead? Deceased? Passed?" Crystal said awkwardly

    Nervous Brother

    "Well, I know dead... We are for sure. So...we are past, and there are not dead...others?"

    Newly Forgotten

    When they were close to this new one, their eyes flashed blue. They saw in their mind the same stretch of blue they had seen before, with the same noise they couldn't make sense of. And they were looking out at it in peace and wonder. They looked down at their reflection, but didn't understand enough to see any more than the shadow they were now. Suddenly the shadow turned bigger.

    Nervous Brother

    They checked on the new spirit out of the corner of their eye, and saw that their eyes were no longer white. In fact, looking at them triggered a memory flash in them, two blue circles staring back at the spirit from a murky puddle. "Blue," they murmured to themself, as their own eyes flashed all but disappeared from the dark landscape for a moment. The memory flash was gone as soon as it came, and with the light in their eyes returning, they looked at Crystal, and saw this...other...for lack of a better word, was the same color. "Color!" they blurt out, before Crystal had a chance to respond to their first question.

     

    ((Sorry for long response and not giving u oppurtunity to reply first btw, just tryna figure out how to rp with myself lol

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  8. 1 minute ago, Fox leaf said:

    Monster?

    (Oh yeah, in the other rp "monster" was the term for the murderer, I think cause they actually physically changed into a monster at night kinda like a werewolf. But IDK really why, that was just the term the creator of rp gave it

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  9. 1 hour ago, Lilytuft said:

    It's a text based murder mystery game. A bit like Among Us except it's only text and has roles similar to what you've done here

     

    45 minutes ago, Fox leaf said:

    It's supposed to be the Roblox game, Flicker 

    ((Yeah I know of Flicker! Played it a few times :) But there's yet another game that has similar rules and roles, One Night Werewolf, which is a board game

    I think this kind of thing is a popular concept and there's been many successful games based on this. There's even another rp on the forums like this called Seeing Things which is similar (though not Niche based). Unfortunately it did die, and though we're trying to bring it back not sure it can happen. It was active before two of the most active rpers got killed by whoever the monster/traitor was RIP.

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  10. 9 hours ago, Fox leaf said:

    "Y-es" Crystal started "Its because I'm actually still alive. I have been given gifted to talk with the past and present." She turned to the striped nicheling. "You recently passed. I saw you many times from the loss of other spirits." The nicheling jumped and the scarred one was watching with bright eyes

    (I'm an idiot probably, but which one does the striped nicheling refer to?)

    Nervous Brother

    "Past? You mean, along with being dead, we are in a place which doesn't even exist anymore?" always curious, and always even more confused, Nervous Brother had to find out more. This spirit was rather curious, anyway, with their glow that reminded Nervous of something they couldn't quite place.

    Newly Forgotten

    At first drawn to the soft glow of this one, the spirit cautiously got ever-closer, trying their best to stay away from the others, but still close enough to the voice they were drawn to.

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  11. So I made another Clan generator video....

    I am being unfaithful to Niche

    This is exactly the reason this needed to be moved to off topic lol. Anyway, don't worry if you would rather see more Niche videos cause I am working on editing one right now! (I haven't edited much in the past as my early Niche videos attest, but I'm making my audio better and occasionally cutting things out now). But if you're one of the over 150 view(ers) that have watched my Clan Gen videos so far, thank you for your support :) It is awesome to have a single video about to break 150 views. Ep 2 hasn't done so well yet, but I think partly that's because it is an episode 2, (and not 1, ep 1 almost always gets more views), partly cause it wasn't posted on a weekend, and partly cause I haven't yet posted a link on here for you guys! Also, I am always open to tips and constructive criticism, so let me know what you like about the videos, and what needs to be improved. Plus, for that matter, let me know things about thumbnails too, cause I am just now starting to make them and could use some tips! So, if you have a bit of time, tell me which thumbnail you like better, Clan Gen ep 1, or Clan Gen ep 2. The thumbnail should be the first thing you see before you click on the embedded video and it starts playing!

     

    Our clan is called SavannaClan, a new clan which lives in burrows underneath a vast grassy plains. They used to be another clan generations ago, but upon their home being destroyed they wandered around until they found this place where they could easily catch prey and escape predators using their swiftness. But with so few members, and an unknown truly deadly danger able to strike suddenly any moon, will they be able to survive?

    **Spoiler notice!!** 

     

    Highlight the white text under this sentence to read

    This episode, it at first seems like we left our bumpy start behind us, with Featherbracken's rat bite being healed. But it leaves her leg permanently injured. And we start getting ominous messages about the clan not having enough prey, leading me to believe the clan is slowly starving. Down a member after the death of our first medicine cat, with Leopardeye having earned her medicine cat name, we desperately need more members to hunt, but none have come so far. And to make matters worse, yellowcough has started spreading around the camp, infecting nearly half our clan! Does SavannaClan have what it takes to get through this?

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  12. 19 hours ago, PeanutBrittle said:

    "Thanks" She said, no other words being able to come out of her mouth. She pondered to herself who these nichelings were and what they were like. She made notes in her head of them, the large one with the stinky tail seems to be the leader, there's the small one with the antlers, the one with the spikes on their back who seems to be freaking out and she thought there was one next to them, then those two that seem pretty untrustworthy in her opinion. If there were any other, they hadn't said anything. 

    Nervous Brother

    They smiled once more and then turned to Theif "Let's go."

    12 hours ago, YourLocalStranger said:

    (YODA??????) 

     

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  13. Newly Forgotten

    The silhouette of this nicheling is of average size, with two runner-legs, and a swimming tail. They have antennae on top of their head, and fangs protruding from their mouth. If you look really closely at their shadow, you'll see that there are splotches that are darker than others, which may have been patterning of some sort in life. ((Feel free to make a drawing for them :) quote this post if you do!))

    -Blacks out often when not around other spirits.

    -Doesn't talk much yet, and tends to keep distance from others.

    -Eyes flashed blue upon having a memory.

    -Remembers hearing Nervous Brother's voice in life, and so follows them around incessantly.

    -Only memory so far involved calling out for help across an open expanse, but nobody being able to come as Nervous Brother coughed and told her it would be alright.

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  14. On 2/14/2023 at 3:51 PM, Andromeda_ said:

    "Yeah." Sharp agreed. "Guiding is a much better teacher than us." He started going in the direction they saw the little nicheling go.

     

    3 hours ago, PeanutBrittle said:

    “I’m sorry to interrupt your conversation, but where are we? … Wait am I DEAD???” She winced as she realized what the scarred nicheling had said

     

    3 hours ago, Andromeda_ said:

    Sharp flinched. "I'm sorry and it's probably hard to process, but yes, you're dead." He said quietly.

     

    2 hours ago, YourLocalStranger said:

    Thief glanced gratefully over at Sharp. 'What he said.' Thief said, flicking his tail in Sharp's direction.

    'Her name is Guiding. She's been here a while, i'm sure she can answer all your questions.' He said to both the spirit that the Nervous Brother found, and to the other new one. 'Besides, we've been out on the moors for way too long, I want to see something that isn't endless nothingness.' Thief tried to joke.

     

    2 hours ago, YourLocalStranger said:

    'Uh.' Thief turned around. They had picked up quite a few nichelings, Thief wasn't really keeping track. 'Six?' he said, slightly unsure of himself. 'Here, this way.' he pointed towards where the swamp was.

     

    2 hours ago, YourLocalStranger said:

    'I mean, I don't know if they're okay with going.' He pointed at the spirit the Nervous Brother found. 'But I'm going, yeah.' Thief started walking in the direction of the swamp. Or where he thought the swamp was. After all, they were still technically lost. 'On second thought, let's stay with the others until we're 100 percent sure that's the right way.' He said, trying to keep the nervousness out of his voice. He got lost once, that was enough for him. He sat down for a second, glad to give his bad paw a rest, as he squinted into the horizon, trying to see through the fog. He thought he saw a tree? 

    The Nervous Brother

    They stayed mainly out of the conversation, keeping an eye on the spirit they had helped find. They felt that was important somehow; though Nervous Brother was happy to have found yet another spirit out here in the nothingness. They shifted uncomfortably as the scarred one scared the new spirit and argued with others, Nervous wasn't one for conflict. At least, they hadn't been for as long as they had been in this place. But what about before? The mind-flash, Reme-morie, gosh I forgot that word again, whatever, that they had about their sisters indicated that they did argue once themselves.  "Ready to go back to swamp am I," they said, mixing up their words again, "happy to have found you." They smiled at the newest found nicheling.

    Newly Forgotten

    They followed the shadow-lights from a distance. They didn't understand what was going on, but stayed closest to the voice they recognized, and this voice's lights pointed at them almost constantly. It was a bit unnerving, but maybe, they know my voice too! Without the constant blackouts and pounding of their head, the spirit looked around, seeing the endless shadows and almost nothing. It seemed...abnormal. Between looking around and looking at the voice they knew, the new spirit didn't hear much of the conversation. 

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  15. 7 hours ago, Andromeda_ said:

    "What? Maybe you knew each other when you were alive? And you had a memory flash about The Nervous Brother?" Sharp wondered.

     

    2 hours ago, YourLocalStranger said:

    Thief looked just as confused. 'Do you know him?' he asked the new nicheling, gesturing towards the Nervous Brother. 

    Unknown Newly Forgotten

    "Heard...voice," they said. They didn't recognize many of the words the others were saying, but tried their best to articulate what they were thinking.

    Nervous Brother

    "My voice?" When they saw the confusion enveloping the new spirit, Nervous Brother realized they needed to be brought back to Guiding. "We have to bring them back to the swamp. Guiding helped all of us, Guiding can help this one too."

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  16. On 2/12/2023 at 2:28 PM, Andromeda_ said:

    "Great, we triggered a memory flash for them." Sharp slowly approached the nicheling once the memory faded away. "Are you alright?"

    The Nervous Brother

    "I think they can't hear yet, until the lights...err...eyes go back to normal."

    Unknown Newly Forgotten

    The sound of coughing was not all they heard as the memory faded, a crashing sound could be heard as well, and then somebody talking broke through, and suddenly they gasped.

    "You," they said, looking straight at the smaller shadow with spikes on their back (nervous brother).

    The Nervous Brother

    "You?" they asked, confused, "Me? What?"

     

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