Renio2490 Posted June 1, 2019 Share Posted June 1, 2019 Off they went, down the river. A river of death, a river of life. The one who kills, but brings back life. They go floating down the river. One day they'll be back, but in a different way. Years from now, a child will be named Jullik, and another will be named Ohea. They were only so young, as they floated down the river. He had drowned, just the sister was left. Breathing she was, breathing she could, but one thing was sure, She couldn't stay like this, and had to turn into her brother, the one thing she feared her whole entire life would happen as she watched her brother carried away. Jullik and Ohea were good children, but in a snap they would be gone without their parents, Ohea was gasping, while Jullik was lifeless. Soon enough, Ohea went with her brother. And I watched it, as well thought that, so many years ago. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacestar TheThundersuncat Posted June 1, 2019 Share Posted June 1, 2019 Do you like Kafka. Or vague short stories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted June 1, 2019 Author Share Posted June 1, 2019 Just now, something about space♡ said: Do you like Kafka. Or vague short stories what I just like dark stuff except minus the insane part 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacestar TheThundersuncat Posted June 1, 2019 Share Posted June 1, 2019 Just now, Renio2490 said: what I just like dark stuff except minus the insane part They`re not (all) insane. Nor is insane any meaningful metric, I guess, unless in the sense of incomprehensible. But that`s a no anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted June 1, 2019 Author Share Posted June 1, 2019 Just now, something about space♡ said: They`re not (all) insane. Nor is insane any meaningful metric, I guess, unless in the sense of incomprehensible. But that`s a no anyway what even is Kakfa? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacestar TheThundersuncat Posted June 1, 2019 Share Posted June 1, 2019 Just now, Renio2490 said: what even is Kakfa? A well-known author in my country for the same themes this story mentions. He wrote a lot of short stories, symbolic and dark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted June 1, 2019 Author Share Posted June 1, 2019 Just now, something about space♡ said: A well-known author in my country for the same themes this story mentions. He wrote a lot of short stories, symbolic and dark okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SilverTheNicheling Posted June 3, 2019 Share Posted June 3, 2019 Very well written! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted June 6, 2019 Author Share Posted June 6, 2019 Shaggy fur, dusty. Dust, blowing far down a cliff, for I move from my spot. The one spot I've stayed, stayed for a while, y'know? It wasn't lonely, it was quiet, you could the faintest things. Leaves, blossoms, all this time I was staring at the sky. The bright blue sky, the one I could not leave. Someone would come someday, some week, some month, some year. That is if someone really wanted to talk. Because talking was a time waster, for the life could be used admiring the world around you. It takes so much time to enjoy one part, that it would be impossible to really love every part of the world. But you love where you live, because you live there. That's where you go. Sometimes it doesn't feel like home. It feels like a hell you want to escape from. But your just trapped. The cliff shows no interest of trapping me. The ugly guy. The cliff doesn't want to trap who it dearly loves, so it won't. But some don't understand that. You don't trap who you love, set them free, if that's what they wish. To go free, free for the day it feels like hell. They'll come back home. Birds, they are free. But they come back to one certain spot, home. You hate some, you love some, that's it. Nobody can change your mind. Sometimes, I feel like I could smash someone. Throw everything off a cliff. Watch it go. Watch it leave. I don't need these things, they should die. You regret these actions, but there's no going back. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted June 6, 2019 Author Share Posted June 6, 2019 Loneliness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted June 6, 2019 Author Share Posted June 6, 2019 You tell me the right thing~ oooohoh~ (I needed to get this out Incredibox is taking me over) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted June 6, 2019 Author Share Posted June 6, 2019 I am free, you are not. Tell me something you have that I do not. (I kinda like this) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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