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Pancake

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  1. “Huh?” She looked up from her mirror. ”oh.”
  2. “Heh, Yeah.” He said, smiling.
  3. She was. she was looking at herself in a mirror.
  4. “Yeah..” he said. ”But.. What if I’m a Flamesilk? Or you’re a Flamesilk?”
  5. “Like Ba Ba Ba!” “Boo Boo! ”Calling all beautiful creatures!”
  6. He nodded and let you stand up. You stood up.
  7. “Same.” He laughed nervously.
  8. “Let’s celebrate! For we are Beautiful creatures! come spread your wings, dance and sing songs about freedom, like La la la!” “Hoo hoo!” They sang with you.
  9. Atlas crouched down next to you and Hugged you. ”What a jerk.” He mumbled.
  10. “So, you excited to finally have wings? Or nervous, I’m nervous.” Atlas said, turning to you.
  11. “Mhm, they will be around here in a Small while.” Said the waiter, walking away.
  12. “Then stop joking about mother dying, Brother.” She said, turning to walk away.
  13. The waiter came around a few minutes later. ”What would you like to order?” She asked. ”Well, it’s his Metamorphosis today so I’m getting him whatever, I will be having a Cherry smoothie.” He said. ”Mhm, what about sir?” The Waiter asked you.
  14. Thanks for the Criticism- I’ll try not to make these mistakes when I finish Chapter two- this is why I need an editor.
  15. Dear Sweet pea By Julie Murphy
  16. AAAAA I JUST LOST ALL MY PROGRESS ON CHAPTER 1 *SCREAMS*
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