im making a book with a friend of mine

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help me think of characters and creatures, you can also make items like weapons and potions.

 

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[Zixvir]

46 minutes ago, NotEpicEeveeGaming said:

help me think of characters and creatures, you can also make items like weapons and potions.

 

LOOK AT IMAGES

 

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what did you use to draw this?

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14 minutes ago, Zixvir said:

what did you use to draw this?

ms paint

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[Zixvir]

1 hour ago, NotEpicEeveeGaming said:

help me think of characters and creatures, you can also make items like weapons and potions.

 

LOOK AT IMAGES

 

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made something using ms paint. Ask as many questions as you can think of. I want to get it developed, and questions will help.

 

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2 minutes ago, Zixvir said:

made something using ms paint. Ask as many questions as you can think of. I want to get it developed, and questions will help.

 

does it shoot the projectiles out of its mouth? and whats that crown thing

[Zixvir]

5 minutes ago, NotEpicEeveeGaming said:

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does it shoot the projectiles out of its mouth? and whats that crown thing

1. why isn't the link working?

2. the mouth isn't actually a mouth, but a badge, I made an updated design.

3. the crown thing is a star cannon that it wears, it shoots the projectiles out of it. The pentagon is the barrel, and  the red is just the powered down state of the inside. Its more of a light cannon, or a laser shooter, but I went with star cannon since the projectiles are essentially just plasma.

yeah, it's a plasma gun. I just decided that now. I originally thought of it as a photon cannon though.

I'm creating another art. 1.2

I'm changing how the projectile looks.

[Zixvir]

8 minutes ago, Zixvir said:

1. why isn't the link working?

2. the mouth isn't actually a mouth, but a badge, I made an updated design.

3. the crown thing is a star cannon that it wears, it shoots the projectiles out of it. The pentagon is the barrel, and  the red is just the powered down state of the inside. Its more of a light cannon, or a laser shooter, but I went with star cannon since the projectiles are essentially just plasma.

yeah, it's a plasma gun. I just decided that now. I originally thought of it as a photon cannon though.

I'm creating another art. 1.2

I'm changing how the projectile looks.

it would look more like this.

[eebee]

i will redesign this, i'll draw it, this book has pictures without color.

ok heres the picture, also 

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[Zixvir]

Just now, Zixvir said:

it would look more like this.

I changed it to 1.1.1 right after posting.

[Zixvir]

Just now, NotEpicEeveeGaming said:

i will redesign this, i'll draw it, this book has pictures without color.

ok heres the picture, also 

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wait, this looks cooler.

I don't really know how the projectile would look from the side, but them having the badge as a mask looks awesome.

[eebee]

Here's the organization it works for

[Zixvir]

4 minutes ago, NotEpicEeveeGaming said:

Here's the organization it works for

that just, we are thinking on a very simaler wavelength.

I made it into a plasma shooter. It's probably a guard for the organization.

The only things that I have to say are:

1. maybe it wouldn't be called the plasma organization.

2. It definitly won't have the same icon.

It looks even more like national geographic now that you simplified it.

(I am laughing way to hard at this)

THE BAD GUYS ARE NATIONAL GEOGRAPHIC/J

(I was laughing for a solid 2 minutes.)

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1 minute ago, Zixvir said:

that just, we are thinking on a very simaler wavelength.

I made it into a plasma shooter. It's probably a guard for the organization.

The only things that I have to say are:

1. maybe it wouldn't be called the plasma organization.

2. It definitly won't have the same icon.

It looks even more like national geographic now that you simplified it.

(I am laughing way to hard at this)

THE BAD GUYS ARE NATIONAL GEOGRAPHIC/J

(I was laughing for a solid 2 minutes.)

it is a guard, its just called a henchman, its also an assault person, it will have the same icon, because i like it. since you're great at making stuff, i have a challenge: make me an item that is used in potions, while also making a potion stand

[Zixvir]

1 minute ago, NotEpicEeveeGaming said:

it will have the same icon, because i like it. since you're great at making stuff, i have a challenge: make me an item that is used in potions, while also making a potion stand

1. I won't be able to create a potion stand

2. I was thinking that the icon would be for a branch of enemies(henchmen/goons) that the evil organization leads.

It would be a big organization, with multiple icons

3. you couldn't have it be too big of a thing because since it looks like the national geographic it might be trademarked if used a symbol for the game.

4. this feels like it's gonna result in a game that has flash game vibes, and I want that to happen.

5. to create an item used in potions, I'll have to create an enemy for inspiration

6. I don't know how this game's crafting system would work, but I think you should have a home base where you craft, and have the casual cauldron to make potions, with shelves of bottles in the same room

7. the lines are straight because I use the line tool, and I manipulate everything to get shapes I want, but it's not as good as hand drawing.

8. here's the new version I made! I'll call it a plasma shooter, but you can call it whatever. It only needs a name to be reffered to, most people will give it a nickname. Anyways here it is:

[eebee]

2 minutes ago, Zixvir said:

1. I won't be able to create a potion stand

2. I was thinking that the icon would be for a branch of enemies(henchmen/goons) that the evil organization leads.

It would be a big organization, with multiple icons

3. you couldn't have it be too big of a thing because since it looks like the national geographic it might be trademarked if used a symbol for the game.

4. this feels like it's gonna result in a game that has flash game vibes, and I want that to happen.

5. to create an item used in potions, I'll have to create an enemy for inspiration

6. I don't know how this game's crafting system would work, but I think you should have a home base where you craft, and have the casual cauldron to make potions, with shelves of bottles in the same room

7. the lines are straight because I use the line tool, and I manipulate everything to get shapes I want, but it's not as good as hand drawing.

8. here's the new version I made! I'll call it a plasma shooter, but you can call it whatever. It only needs a name to be reffered to, most people will give it a nickname. Anyways here it is:

its a book

[Zixvir]

for the new enemy I'm creating I'm using Krita, so it'll be higher quality.

It's gonna be a pixel art. In 32 bit. 

[Zixvir]

1 minute ago, NotEpicEeveeGaming said:

its a book

what is?

[eebee]

Just now, Zixvir said:

what is?

the thing were making characters for

[Zixvir]

13 minutes ago, NotEpicEeveeGaming said:

the thing were making characters for

ahhhhh...

You'd want way higher quality art then.

also just, I don't think you really need art.

You need plot.

Though maybe I could create a game that intertwines with the book.

wait, I just realized.

This is gonna be a comic book.

you need WAY better art.

It needs to be hand drawn.

At least this is a base.

hmmmm...

I'll create a game Idea, and we can have them intertwine.

You've given me a train of thought, as I've done to you.

You need to write a plot.

I need to plan a game.

 

[Zixvir]

I've created a sentient matierial.

This is just the creature but given sedatives.

It is a sentient ball of plasma.

I was too lazy to make a bigger version so you'll just have to zoom in.

also just know that I made this with my mouse, which is why it took a long time.

[eebee]

ill be on tomottow to give my opinion

[Zixvir]

Just now, Zixvir said:

I've created a sentient matierial.

This is just the creature but given sedatives.

It is a sentient ball of plasma.

I was too lazy to make a bigger version so you'll just have to zoom in.

also just know that I made this with my mouse, which is why it took a long time.

[Zixvir]

So I guess this is gonna be a comic book.