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the title basically

I just want to see how i can improve :)

(also some of these drawings aren't the most recent, but since i'm going through a major art block right now i haven't drawn much so these are the only things i can find)

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It's hard to give you critisism, since you're one of the best artists on here. The best I can tell you, is that your creatures seem too "straight." What I mean by that is they don't have enough curves, and the legs are either too pointy, or aren't pointy enough.

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4 hours ago, IlluminatiMoose said:

is that your creatures seem too "straight."

I try to make my creatures not too straight and it helps

and by straight I mean

not gay

(basically all my nichelings are some kind of lgbt+ lol)

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The designs and patterns you give your nichelings are incredible! Wow! 

I think my main point for improvement would be to round out the chest of your nichelings. As they currently are, it looks like they don't have much in the way of rib cages, which always makes me feel a little breathless (darn asthma).

Other than that, I feel like the best way to improve would just be to challenge yourself to draw different poses and different genetics. 

(especially when I'm having an art block, I feel like it can be helpful to just try something entirely different, whether it's poses, genes or even mediums)

I hope that helps!

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