georgie Posted August 12, 2019 Share Posted August 12, 2019 gimme criticism pls heres my two most recent arts I already know that the claw on the second ones really bad, and the head on the second one doesn't look right in that position.. I kinda like mekoko with her head bent like that though? shes supposed to look really weird and unnatural and creepy. but maybe criticize me on the execution of it? idk I really need to start drawing other backgrounds than just patterns.. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
georgie Posted August 12, 2019 Author Share Posted August 12, 2019 (somehow one of my really ugly and cursed ms paint pictures got put in >:O) (but I deleted it :D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NichelingPotato Posted August 12, 2019 Share Posted August 12, 2019 If had to say something… that would be the fact that the first one looks like it has beak with teeth... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magicmoonss Posted August 12, 2019 Share Posted August 12, 2019 It's kind of hard to tell what you need to change, since your art is so stylistic. Here's some things I noticed with the two pieces: 1: the body is too tall, the teeth look really weird since they have a beak, medium tail shouldn't be longer than the body, the hind legs are too tall, the elbows are too low 2: the paws and the claw all look really weird. the paws are too long, and the claw's "thumb" is too big. I have no clue what's up with his neck. The elbow on his claw is in a weird place. The hind legs are too tall, and the bottom part of the hind legs are positioned in a really strange way. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
georgie Posted August 12, 2019 Author Share Posted August 12, 2019 k I get the anatomys bad what else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted August 12, 2019 Share Posted August 12, 2019 2 minutes ago, heyitsgeorgie said: k I get the anatomys bad what else what is the second picture's nose 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
georgie Posted August 12, 2019 Author Share Posted August 12, 2019 Just now, Shad said: what is the second picture's nose idk I just got bored and was like "you know what? no. you get a triangle haphazardly thrown on your head" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted August 12, 2019 Share Posted August 12, 2019 4 minutes ago, heyitsgeorgie said: idk I just got bored and was like "you know what? no. you get a triangle haphazardly thrown on your head" wow what a nose 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ValkyrieWolff Posted August 13, 2019 Share Posted August 13, 2019 I love your angular style! I think for you I'd like to challenge you a little bit. I think it would be really interesting if you broke down the pieces even further in that angular style. So for example, rather than having the paw be a full shape in itself, break down the paw into its component shapes, which might help with some of your anatomy concerns as well. The same thing for the head, break it down to the skull, the ears, the muzzle. I also love your shading in the first drawing and think it would really help take your art to the next level if you leaned into that shading (keeping in mind the whole where is the light source thing, which it looks like you've already got a good hold on) I hope that helps! 3 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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