MATTRESS Posted March 4, 2021 Share Posted March 4, 2021 No.. They wouldn't! They couldn't just kill us? They are our friends! Why is Gore back so soon? Where's Pool? He said he would protect her! No..nonono They wouldn't do that! Petal is with them! But I will never have a reason to not trust Gore... Is Pool.. really gone? -- WELL LOOK WHAT I DID I REMADE THE PLAYTHROUGH i hope this is gonna be better that frost lands- 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiyanna Posted March 4, 2021 Share Posted March 4, 2021 Yay! For this one, try and give updates often. Like for each day or every 5 days. Or at least whenever there's a mating pair or children. If you pretty much record all or most things that happen we won't be so confused and you'll find a story strings itself together too. You don't have to have a whole paragraph from one nichelings point of view to have a good story. So if you have writing block that's OK! Just write down and take screenshots of what happens and add some story in here and there as it develops. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Applesauce Posted March 4, 2021 Share Posted March 4, 2021 Yes! I was actually hoping you'd do another one 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 4, 2021 Author Share Posted March 4, 2021 5 hours ago, Applesauce said: Yes! I was actually hoping you'd do another one 14 hours ago, Chiyanna said: Yay! For this one, try and give updates often. Like for each day or every 5 days. Or at least whenever there's a mating pair or children. If you pretty much record all or most things that happen we won't be so confused and you'll find a story strings itself together too. You don't have to have a whole paragraph from one nichelings point of view to have a good story. So if you have writing block that's OK! Just write down and take screenshots of what happens and add some story in here and there as it develops. I'm happy you guys are excited for this! there is going to be a lot untalked about births for nichelings because there's a war, and i need background characters. This also takes place about 100 years after frost lands and on another island 1 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 4, 2021 Author Share Posted March 4, 2021 Prologue The cub opened his eyes. Next to him was a smaller cub, another nicheling curled around them protectively "What is that thing?" The nicheling said in a hiss, "It will only bring blood and death." "Opal, calm down it's only a cub-" Another said "I'm not raising a monster. " Opal said, "Leave it for the birds." 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 4, 2021 Author Share Posted March 4, 2021 The red nicheling grabbed the cub and roughly threw in the snow. The nicheling disappeared. "Mama?" The cub said. It was the only word he knew, but it was no use. He was alone. 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiyanna Posted March 4, 2021 Share Posted March 4, 2021 oooo, interesting...I wonder why he's considered no good 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 4, 2021 Author Share Posted March 4, 2021 NO NO NO CURSED NO MOVE OCCUPANT IS CURSED AAAAA 3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiyanna Posted March 5, 2021 Share Posted March 5, 2021 1 hour ago, Polly but cursed said: NO NO NO CURSED NO MOVE OCCUPANT IS CURSED AAAAA OOF can you get the child out of there somehow or are you not able to move them manually either? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 5, 2021 Author Share Posted March 5, 2021 7 minutes ago, Chiyanna said: OOF can you get the child out of there somehow or are you not able to move them manually either? i got them out it's okay 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 5, 2021 Author Share Posted March 5, 2021 The young nicheling ran through the snow from her sleeping family She wanted to know what was at the mountain, and why the tribe was banned from going there.. 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 5, 2021 Author Share Posted March 5, 2021 The cream nicheling looked up, coming face to face to.. another nicheling? She had never seen this nicheling in her tribe. "Hello..?" 1 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 5, 2021 Author Share Posted March 5, 2021 The pink nicheling froze, then ran, not looking back. "Wait!" The cream nicheling yelled, "Don't go! The Monster will kill you!" The pink nicheling didn't look back at her, but spoke. "Monster..?" 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 5, 2021 Author Share Posted March 5, 2021 "What do you mean by.. monster?" The pink nicheling asked. "It wanders in the mountains, killing anything it sees, it doesn't even eat the things it's killed. It just leaves it there to rot." "We shouldn't be here." The cream nicheling countined, "I'm Pool, You?" "Gore." 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 5, 2021 Author Share Posted March 5, 2021 NOT AGAIN 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 5, 2021 Author Share Posted March 5, 2021 "They should be here.." Pool said, Searching around a tree. Pool looked up and froze. She saw them, but why were they over there? By the nichelings they never wanted to see again Then she saw it. The black and white nicheling threw one of the nichelings into the water. No.. no please 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiyanna Posted March 5, 2021 Share Posted March 5, 2021 Where did that come from? Who's dead? Hmmm. Is that her mother? Her parents? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 5, 2021 Author Share Posted March 5, 2021 1 minute ago, Chiyanna said: Where did that come from? Who's dead? Hmmm. Is that her mother? Her parents? her mom the tribe kills people for a reason (which i will not say because plot-) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted March 5, 2021 Author Share Posted March 5, 2021 Pool turned and ran She didn't care if she died out there. She needed to get out. The tribe had gone on for too long -End of prologue- -- the chapter one part didn't really make sense so it's all part of the prologue 3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Impy10 Posted March 15, 2021 Share Posted March 15, 2021 When are you continuing this? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted June 6, 2021 Author Share Posted June 6, 2021 I still have the save file so I'll probably continue it! 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted June 6, 2021 Author Share Posted June 6, 2021 Clementine had lived in the mountains for as long as she could remember She had listened to the stories of the ones at the base of the mountain Their lies about her tribe "Clementime, come see this." A cream colored nicheling beckoned for her What does my mother want with me? Clementine though annoyed Clementine looked at what her mother was looking at It was just a cub.. A strange one in fact.. "The reincarnation of Ellael?" Clementine asked, That color of fur was rare, so rare that only one other nicheling had be birthed with it, Ellael. The same color of the small black birds that flew and nested in the pine trees Raven? 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted June 6, 2021 Author Share Posted June 6, 2021 bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted October 17, 2022 Author Share Posted October 17, 2022 i found the save file!! so i can continue this 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MATTRESS Posted October 17, 2022 Author Share Posted October 17, 2022 clementine was quickly pushed into the 'den' that the mountain tribe used to keep kits safe & warm in. "of course, i HAVE to baby sit." clementine looked at the sleeping kit, and begrudgingly curled up around the kit to keep them warm. they glanced back up out of the den "we cant just sit here while seaside kills their own tribe!!" "and what are we supposed to do daisy? either they'll kill us or the monster will get us before we can even step foot off the mountain." ".....we have do something..." clementine closed their eyes, she really hoped her tribe wasn't stupid enough to fight those nichelings or maybe they were. whatever. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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