Arcsoft Posted February 3, 2019 Share Posted February 3, 2019 A little while ago I made this post (which you can still submit to if you wish). After realizing my Group Challenge was turning into what I had planned to do for this, I decided to just start this. So, here we go! We will be trying to create @Renio2490's Raja first. I will be naming Nichelings like humans as well. We begin with Suzan Vinzenz Huber, a sarcastic young Nicheling that escaped from a brutal dictatorship with her best friend and future mate Kobe Paulinus Vukovic, who was once a manipulative high-ranking official of the dictatorship until he realized the wrong in it and resigned before escaping. "So, can we start a family right here? Or at least ASAP?" Kobe asked eagerly. "No, of course not. We need a lasting food source first," Suzan sighed. "Fine," Kobe agreed with a low growl, looking out into the unexplored grasses. He set out, quickly finding a berry bush. "Alright, we can have one now," Suzan agreed, though she was still confused why Kobe was so intent on having one already. The next day, Suzan woke up to a weeping Kobe. "What's wrong? Where is our child?" Suzan asked, tilting her head. "There - there was a storm, and I couldn't see much...our child was swept away...." Kobe stammered in-between cries. Suzan joined him. At the end of the day, Kobe told Suzan he would keep watch and make sure nothing else bad happened. Suzan nodded weakly, and curled up. After around 10 minutes of Suzan being asleep, Kobe quietly slithered away to a shaded tree area, where a wriggling red baby Nicheling began squealing. A rough paw was placed over her mouth. "Shh my Nima, shh," He barked, though the young Nicheling continued squirming. Kobe sighed. The next day Kobe had returned to their nest. "Everything was alright last night so..." "You want to try and have another?" Suzan questioned. This time, she wanted to as well. Kobe nodded, and Suzan was soon back on the nest. Kobe returned to a small Nima, whose eyes were now open and mouth babbling. "Shut up," Kobe snapped, making Nima even louder. "Fine. You'll do this the hard way," The next morning, Kobe was crying again. "Don't tell me..." Suzan trailed off as Kobe nodded slightly and pointed to the blood below her. "The child had claws... and accidentally killed himself... I buried him because it was too much to look at," Kobe explained. Suzan cried, but she was now suspicious. How could they be this unlucky without her even knowing? That night, Suzan pretended to sleep but watched as Kobe disappeared into the grass. "Collect food," Kobe ordered. "Why?" Nima questioned. "Do it." "Nope - AAH okay fine," Nima scrambled off after Kobe clawed her cheek. He turned to check on August, who was crawling away almost into the grass. "Bad," Kobe snapped, also clawing his cheek. When Kobe returned, Suzan was wide awake with many questions. Before she could say anything, Kobe had tackled Suzan with a claw to her throat. "Follow my orders and you will survive," Kobe said. Suzan slowly nodded with wide eyes. Now that Kobe's secret is out, will any of his "slaves" rebel against him, or will they simply comply? Find out in the next edition of this! 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goggles-kun Posted February 3, 2019 Share Posted February 3, 2019 Why do I honestly feel sorry for Suzan? Why does Kobe passive-aggressively remind me of an official from the novel 1984? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcsoft Posted February 3, 2019 Author Share Posted February 3, 2019 3 hours ago, Goggles-kun said: Why do I honestly feel sorry for Suzan? Why does Kobe passive-aggressively remind me of an official from the novel 1984? because Suzan is a human name probably, if she was named Anias or a default name it wouldn't be too bad maybe Also I have never read 1984 so...idk 😂 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted February 4, 2019 Share Posted February 4, 2019 Noooooooooooooo. I hate Kobe. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacestar TheThundersuncat Posted February 4, 2019 Share Posted February 4, 2019 On 2/3/2019 at 7:26 PM, Goggles-kun said: Why do I honestly feel sorry for Suzan? Why does Kobe passive-aggressively remind me of an official from the novel 1984? Because she kind of fits Julia and he is as two-faced as O' Brian? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcsoft Posted February 4, 2019 Author Share Posted February 4, 2019 10 hours ago, Renio2490 said: Noooooooooooooo. I hate Kobe. same 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basil Posted February 4, 2019 Share Posted February 4, 2019 dude this went from 1-100 real quick I LOVE IT 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcsoft Posted February 4, 2019 Author Share Posted February 4, 2019 2 minutes ago, Basil said: dude this went from 1-100 real quick I LOVE IT good to know 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcsoft Posted February 9, 2019 Author Share Posted February 9, 2019 We will be trying to create @Renio2490's Raja first. I will be naming Nichelings like humans as well. "You will have children until the day you die," Kobe said, laying out the rules. Suzan nodded reluctantly. So, she got back on the nest and collected some berries, as ordered. Kobe smirked, happy that his plan was working out in his favor. That night, he returned to his two children, where Nima attempted to run away. Kobe ran after her, and broke her legs with ease. I didn't know this was going to be this hard... Kobe groaned internally. Nima then crawled back to the shade of the tree to rest and collect food. August clawed away at the dirt, frightened and a bit confused. The next day, Alissa was born, and soon taken away by Kobe, although Kobe forgot to have another child with Suzan. Kobe saw that his two children already there were collecting nuts, and praised them. "Good job you two! Now, Nima, since you're an adult now, you'll be having children when resources are available." Kobe smiled. "What?" Before Nima could do much, she was about to have her father's child. But, since there was no other nests available, she was sent on grass collecting, while August continued cracking nuts. Suzan heard rustling in the bushes. Abandoning her nest, she saw her chance to escape and chased after the Nicheling. She spotted the Nicheling, but soon tired and had to crouch behind a rock to hide. The next day, she leapt into the water and landed next to him. "Woah, you ok?" Boris Elise Filipovic asked. I know it's short, but it's a great cliffhanger! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goggles-kun Posted February 9, 2019 Share Posted February 9, 2019 I love where this story is going! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted February 9, 2019 Share Posted February 9, 2019 Nope. Leave me alone. WHY KOBE????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcsoft Posted February 10, 2019 Author Share Posted February 10, 2019 Thank y'all! 💗 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted February 10, 2019 Share Posted February 10, 2019 MAKE KOBE DIE. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goggles-kun Posted February 10, 2019 Share Posted February 10, 2019 1 hour ago, Renio2490 said: MAKE KOBE DIE. What if Arcsoft trolls us all and makes Kobe immortal 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renio2490 Posted February 10, 2019 Share Posted February 10, 2019 Kobe is making me hate Raja, and I don't even have her save anymore. I hate this playthrough. I really do. That's what Kobe has made me think about this playthrough. I HATE IT. No offense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacestar TheThundersuncat Posted February 10, 2019 Share Posted February 10, 2019 32 minutes ago, Goggles-kun said: What if Arcsoft trolls us all and makes Kobe immortal Kobe being on his own for all eternity, doing manual labour and having no comforts, would propably be the harshest punishment. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcsoft Posted February 10, 2019 Author Share Posted February 10, 2019 9 hours ago, RandomWanderer said: Kobe being on his own for all eternity, doing manual labour and having no comforts, would propably be the harshest punishment. brilliant idea 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcsoft Posted February 10, 2019 Author Share Posted February 10, 2019 9 hours ago, Renio2490 said: Kobe is making me hate Raja, and I don't even have her save anymore. I hate this playthrough. I really do. That's what Kobe has made me think about this playthrough. I HATE IT. No offense. sorry??? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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