Katumai Posted April 11, 2019 Share Posted April 11, 2019 Yes, I'm aware I have two other playthrough's I need to update. I just really wanted to do this. So, here are the cats: One of our two leaders, RainStar. She never really fit in very much with her old clan, and was always in the shadow of her brother and her parents. Everyone expected to much of her, and were constantly disappointed when she wasn't perfect. She finally had enough, and left MarshClan. Our other leader, HawkStar. He's RainStar's brother, and didn't pay much attention to her when they became apprentices, basking in the praise he got. He loved his sister though, and was shocked when she wanted to leave. He decided to give up all he had in MarshClan to leave with her. Rosethorn, a warrior who belongs to Snowpeltz ShyFox, a warrior who also belongs to Snowpeltz BrightWhisker, who belongs to Randomwanderer (For love of god I couldn't get her pattern exact) ShrewTail, who belongs to Randomwanderer (again) LightWing, who again, belongs to Randomwanderer And finally, StingStrike. He came from a very brutal clan, who didn't believe medicine cats were needed. He was very shy and unsocial as a kit, which annoyed his mother because the clan expected her to raise him to be ruthless and unforgiving. She named him StingKit because she wanted him to grow up strong, but ultimately disappointed. He got his warrior name early because they thought it would toughen him up. But when he had to fight the leader as his final assessment, he almost died, and was exiled from his clan. (that was way to long sorry) SO, keep in mind none of these people really gave me the cat's personalities. So I'll kinda just do what I want I guess...if any of the owners could give me their personalities it would be appreciated. I'll start playing in the next post. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 11, 2019 Author Share Posted April 11, 2019 Wait I forgot VioletPelt hold on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 11, 2019 Author Share Posted April 11, 2019 AND. VioletPelt, who belongs to randomwanderer 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sky Posted April 11, 2019 Share Posted April 11, 2019 Two quick things: 1. Shrewtail is a female, right? and 2. The suffix of warrior cat names aren't capitalized Hope everything goes well! Don't kill anything or we, the Niche Police, will be after you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowpeltz Posted April 11, 2019 Share Posted April 11, 2019 31 minutes ago, Katumai said: Yes, I'm aware I have two other playthrough's I need to update. I just really wanted to do this. So, here are the cats: One of our two leaders, RainStar. She never really fit in very much with her old clan, and was always in the shadow of her brother and her parents. Everyone expected to much of her, and were constantly disappointed when she wasn't perfect. She finally had enough, and left MarshClan. Our other leader, HawkStar. He's RainStar's brother, and didn't pay much attention to her when they became apprentices, basking in the praise he got. He loved his sister though, and was shocked when she wanted to leave. He decided to give up all he had in MarshClan to leave with her. Rosethorn, a warrior who belongs to Snowpeltz ShyFox, a warrior who also belongs to Snowpeltz BrightWhisker, who belongs to Randomwanderer (For love of god I couldn't get her pattern exact) ShrewTail, who belongs to Randomwanderer (again) LightWing, who again, belongs to Randomwanderer And finally, StingStrike. He came from a very brutal clan, who didn't believe medicine cats were needed. He was very shy and unsocial as a kit, which annoyed his mother because the clan expected her to raise him to be ruthless and unforgiving. She named him StingKit because she wanted him to grow up strong, but ultimately disappointed. He got his warrior name early because they thought it would toughen him up. But when he had to fight the leader as his final assessment, he almost died, and was exiled from his clan. (that was way to long sorry) SO, keep in mind none of these people really gave me the cat's personalities. So I'll kinda just do what I want I guess...if any of the owners could give me their personalities it would be appreciated. I'll start playing in the next post. Oh! apologies, forgot to much their personalities. Rosethorn takes after her father, he was a strong warrior (with double claws). She's a good fighter and brave. She might seem serious and a bit cold, but she cares deeply about her kits and clanmates (also 1+ for giving her the fishing tail, her father helped out apprentices on training how to fish so she might of inherited his skils). She looks very similar to her father and wants to live up to him. Next up Shyfox. Like his name states he WAS shy as a kit. Mostly a hunter, when he became an apprentice and got taken to see the territories and was fascinated by all the nature and things he saw (i can tots see him wanting to run away to explore further). He became a curious kitty, yet bits of his kithood reminded in him (aka might need time to be comfortable around newer ppl he meets). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 11, 2019 Author Share Posted April 11, 2019 Alright, let's get started The nine cats finally arrived at the new island, looking out at the open water. They were all still young, and had a lot ahead of them. RainPaw and HawkPaw were former MarshClan cats, but decided to leave due to how RainPaw was treated. On their way, they found seven young cats to accompany them. RosePaw, who had jumped out at them and attacked HawkPaw from nowhere. ShrewPaw and LightPaw, who they had found together. VioletPaw, who was washed up on the shore, unconscious. BrightPaw, who was watching them from the grass. And finally, StingStrike, a cat the same as all of them despite having a warrior name. Once they arrive at the island, HawkPaw asks RainPaw who should be leader. This sets her off. She starts yelling at him about how she would rather die than live in a clan with him again, because he never once cared about her when she needed it, and he was always the perfect one. Everyone else looks their way, confused. Ultimately, they part ways, splitting into two clans. RainPaw and HawkPaw become RainStar and HawkStar. The others get to choose their own names. The cats must decide which clan to join, and it wasn't easy for most. VioletPelt, ShyFox, LightWing, and StingStrike join RainStar in RainClan, while ShrewTail, BrightWhisker and RoseThorn join HawkStar in HawkClan. With one last glance over his shoulder at his sister, HawkStar walks away, beginning his new life. While RainStar begins hers. There will probably be a lot of writing, oof 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 11, 2019 Author Share Posted April 11, 2019 14 minutes ago, Niche Police said: Two quick things: 1. Shrewtail is a female, right? and 2. The suffix of warrior cat names aren't capitalized Hope everything goes well! Don't kill anything or we, the Niche Police, will be after you. It's pretty hard to tell, but I think ShrewTail is male (hopefully) And it makes me more comfortable writing names that way, it just looks nicer to me I guess I hope you enjoy this (I'll get the other one with your characters soon) 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sky Posted April 11, 2019 Share Posted April 11, 2019 oops sorry i realized my mistake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 11, 2019 Author Share Posted April 11, 2019 Who thought THAT was a good idea? Luckily the tree HawkClan is aiming for isn't very far. On the RainClan side, it's definetly a little further. Oh this is perfect BrightWhisker jumps up onto the tree stump, feeling a rush of wind. She looks over the tall grass, checking if maybe she can see the others from up there. She spots something before being interrupted by HawkStar. StingStrike pushes through the grass, finding a permanent nest. He looks up, realizing they're finally at their new home. RainClan starts settling down in their new camp. Everyone is all grown up, and the leaders realize they need deputies. RainStar makes LightWing her deputy while BrightWhisker is HawkStars, which irritates ShrewTail and RoseThorn a little. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 11, 2019 Author Share Posted April 11, 2019 1 minute ago, Niche Police said: oops sorry i realized my mistake It's fine, I was really confused when you showed BrightWhisker oof 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacestar TheThundersuncat Posted April 11, 2019 Share Posted April 11, 2019 Sorry, I just came home from school. The descriptions: Violetpelt. Calm and a great negotiator, forming relationships comes naturally. However, she has horrible taste in males. Aside from that, she's as reliable as can be and a great mentor, though not fond of the limelight. Shrewtail was not a great hunter, an inspiring leader or even reasonable fighter. He didn't play a large role in the clan, but nevertheless did his best to provide. He's a "default" background character. Lightwing suffers from main character syndrome. She became a medicine cat, as the clan required water body on them to collect supplies. That wasn't an accident, but rather a very planned child. Who then had an accident involving a crippled paw. Expect the worst possible combination from crossing Jayfeather's personality with Cinderheart's. Someone really did not like that fate. She would be a lot less bitter as a warrior, though. Brightwhisker is quite overbearing with a "push or be pushed over" policy. She was the deputy of a young Clan and died in war she had started. She does care about others, a lot, but it's either too much or not enough, swinging from overprotectiveness to stone hearted coldness. Brightwhisker is about the most likely to resolve issues by fast action (and to have caused them in the first place...). Useful in a war, but not the most even tempered cat. Violetpelt and Lightwing do not know each other or the other cats. Brightwhisker and Shrewtail come from the same save with opposing clans. He's about one generation older and died in an ambush. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 11, 2019 Author Share Posted April 11, 2019 At least the bushes and cactuses can keep them safe, you know, like a wall kinda While expanding the camp, BrightWhisker and ShrewTail find a nest. They realize that this spot could make a good nursery. RoseThorn and HawkStar become mates (Hope you don't mind Snowpeltz) ShyFox hears a sneeze, he looks behind him, jumping back as another cat faces him. The poor guy had two crippled paws, and ShyFox asks him to join out of pity. StingStrike points out that he can't really do anything, but RainStar jumps in to defend the tom. Wonder why... GREAT, MISSCLICKS. At least they don't share immunity. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 11, 2019 Author Share Posted April 11, 2019 19 minutes ago, RandinWabderer said: Sorry, I just came home from school. The descriptions: Violetpelt. Calm and a great negotiator, forming relationships comes naturally. However, she has horrible taste in males. Aside from that, she's as reliable as can be and a great mentor, though not fond of the limelight. Shrewtail was not a great hunter, an inspiring leader or even reasonable fighter. He didn't play a large role in the clan, but nevertheless did his best to provide. He's a "default" background character. Lightwing suffers from main character syndrome. She became a medicine cat, as the clan required water body on them to collect supplies. That wasn't an accident, but rather a very planned child. Who then had an accident involving a crippled paw. Expect the worst possible combination from crossing Jayfeather's personality with Cinderheart's. Someone really did not like that fate. She would be a lot less bitter as a warrior, though. Brightwhisker is quite overbearing with a "push or be pushed over" policy. She was the deputy of a young Clan and died in war she had started. She does care about others, a lot, but it's either too much or not enough, swinging from overprotectiveness to stone hearted coldness. Brightwhisker is about the most likely to resolve issues by fast action (and to have caused them in the first place...). Useful in a war, but not the most even tempered cat. Violetpelt and Lightwing do not know each other or the other cats. Brightwhisker and Shrewtail come from the same save with opposing clans. He's about one generation older and died in an ambush. Thanks, this really helps! I'll try to follow their personalities as best I can 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spacestar TheThundersuncat Posted April 11, 2019 Share Posted April 11, 2019 1 minute ago, Katumai said: GREAT, MISSCLICKS. At least they don't share immunity. Oh, no. That's an 11/10 Violetpelt thing to do... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 11, 2019 Author Share Posted April 11, 2019 Just now, RandinWabderer said: Oh, no. That's an 11/10 Violetpelt thing to do... Then I guess I'm doing a good job :') 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowpeltz Posted April 11, 2019 Share Posted April 11, 2019 Quote GREAT, MISSCLICKS. At least they don't share immunity. Let's just pretend that it was a one night stand ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 11, 2019 Author Share Posted April 11, 2019 I swear to god I'm obsessed with updating this RoseThorn gives birth to her son, who she names EagleKit. She's confident he'll become a great warrior, and the first warrior born into HawkClan. BrightWhisker tells ShrewTail to guard the nursery, which just annoys RoseThorn. oh no Meanwhile in RainClan, VioletPelt has her (accidental) kit. She names her beautiful daughter Berrykit. She curls around her, trying to shield her from the rain while ShyFox just kinda nervously watches. (Sorry this was short) 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katumai Posted April 12, 2019 Author Share Posted April 12, 2019 TIME FOR MORE EagleKit has opened his eyes, and trips out of the nest. He faceplants right into the toxic berry bush, and RoseThorn hurries over to see if her son is okay. She purrs when he starts swatting at the branches, but quickly stops and pulls him away when he tries to grab a berry with his teeth. While patrolling, LightWing and ShyFox find a place for RainStar to make announcements. These were the last two screenshots so I need to take more. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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