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Hey! It's been a while since I was last here. I've been doing...other things. A lot of daydreaming. A lot of youtube videos. A lot of things going on in my mind. And I've figured out what I need to do in my life. I've already done it a little with my art, but I want to take it further. I want to CREATE things and SHARE THEM with people! I want to share my talents and explore to find what I'm good at...I'm not quite ready to go all out yet. But I'm almost ready to share some of the things I've been doing, and some of the things I want to do. 

I'm writing a song. I've been obsessed with FNAF recently even though it's probably dead. And I wrote a song. It's nice and edgy and I'm super proud of it!! I've only got the lyrics done, next I want to use GarageBand and give it a melody and put music to it. It's rather different from other FNAF songs I've heard, and other fanmade songs, that inspired me. But anyway. I want to make an animated video. I want to write another song that reflects my own struggles and passions. I want to get into animation and make Magnolia memes. I want to continue writing my warriors fanfic. I want to write poems. I want to develop some OCs. Basically, there are lots of things I want to do. 

I guess what this thread is for...is for me to share my own creativity, and for you to share yours, and we can critique and help each other out and tell each other that we are amazing and loved. :D 

Expect to see some of my stuff in the next few posts. :) 

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To kick things off: Here's a poem I wrote in the spring for a school assignment. It's about an abandoned truck in our woods. 

It doesn't make any sense or flow well but I like the imagery of the plants

 

A relic of forgotten past
A scrappy heap of rusted trash
Down here beneath the hemlocks gray
Green shoots reach up to greet the day
Twisted, twirling, ferns unfurling
Creeping, clinging, gently curling

Tasting the weathered red letters
And sugar sun
Their bath of light has just begun

In morning woods filled up with song
How could a rusted truck belong?

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Here's the lyrics to my song. It's supposed to change in tone throughout. Also if you don't like/don't know FNAF, I'm sorry

I don't even play the game but look at how invested I am in this lol

I don't dare share this with my parents because they'll think it reflects my own feelings and they'll freak out and think I want to commit die or something. But it doesn't. Not really. (not the dying part)

I call it, 'Child's Prayer'

(after a children's song from my good christian church. For that reason alone I am strongly considering altering the lyrics and changing the title...lol)

 

intro - (quiet, soft, melancholy)

I thought I would get to live a little longer 
Get a little taller, get a little stronger  
Learn a little more in a sleepy little town              
But then it all came crashing down              (this line would be a little harsher obviously)

verse 1 - (slight pick up of speed)

Is there something wrong with me                                                                                    
Is this what was meant to be
Why do I hide inside these walls
Crawling through vents and running through halls

It’s not at all what I expected
I never thought I’d be the one to be affected
Every night there’s always someone by my side, but
They just remind me that we’re the ones who died

chorus - 

I’m not sure if I can take it any longer
They say these things only make us stronger
Same songs, same dances, rinse and repeat
Without you, I feel incomplete
Can anyone hear me?
Can anyone save me?
Can anyone see what’s truly here?
Can anyone answer a child’s prayer?

verse 2 - (slightly louder, more urgent)

There’s a light inside me that can’t get out
Shrouded by pain and fear and doubt
There’s a light inside, that no one can see
But all I ask is to let it free!

Golden moon and silver stars 
How I wonder where you are                                                                        
Once I saw you long ago
But now the light’s from my own show!

I’m stuck in a nightmare
Suspended in the air
But I’m far below the starry sky
Why can’t you just let me die!

chorus - (even more angry, growing volume, frustration, tension)

I’m not sure if I can take it any longer
They say these things only make us stronger
Same songs, same dances, rinse and repeat
Without you, I feel incomplete
Can anyone hear me?
Can anyone save me?
Can anyone see what’s truly here?
Can anyone answer a child’s prayer?

verse 3 - (fuming, almost maniacal, loud and scary)

This nightmare’s gone on long enough
It’s time to show what makes me up
I’m more than wires on a frame
It’s time for me to end your game!

I’m sorry, friend, it’s me or you
Your nightwatch nights are nearly through
Don’t you try to close the door
Revenge is what I’m coming for!

You think this nightmare’s made for you
You clearly haven’t caught the clue
Just close your eyes and count to three
Let’s see how fun your DEATH can be!

(insert jumpscare scream here! XD)

(suddenly drops to quietly, ominously)

You may not think it but I’m doing you a favor 
You're not the one I’m truly after

chorus - (loud, maybe a little slower, still angry but bordering on anguish/sadness)

I’m not sure if I can take it any longer
They say these things only make us stronger
Same songs, same dances, rinse and repeat
I know it leaves me incomplete!
I bet you could hear me
I bet you could save me
You could see what’s really here
But you won’t listen to a child’s prayer!

(sudden drop back to quiet and melancholy, similar to the beginning of the song, but even more so.)

(short musical interlude to get you back into a depressing mood)

I see how it goes
I’m stuck here, in the life I never chose
Someday, you will burn me to the ground
But for now, I have found

The pain ebbs away with time
And it’s been such a long time

You become immune
To the never ending tune
That plays inside your head
That played on while your blood shed

(and then it will either cut off here or play Puppet's music box audio)

(If I animate this I would put a bittersweet scene here ToT )

 

Please let me know if anything seems off to you...does it seem too structured and repetitive? Do the speaker's motives/desires/transitions make any sense?

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eh

this is the best

don’t mind how I sound like a demented monkey at the end but

am a demented monkey in terms of how much exercise I get

also if it seems quiet, it’s because I don’t have a microphone

and don’t mind the background noise, I can’t stay still for a second

aaand yeah

I know it’s horrible

I talk to much

s q u e a k

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54 minutes ago, manglolia said:

Here's the lyrics to my song. It's supposed to change in tone throughout. Also if you don't like/don't know FNAF, I'm sorry

I don't even play the game but look at how invested I am in this lol

I don't dare share this with my parents because they'll think it reflects my own feelings and they'll freak out and think I want to commit die or something. But it doesn't. Not really. (not the dying part)

I call it, 'Child's Prayer'

(after a children's song from my good christian church. For that reason alone I am strongly considering altering the lyrics and changing the title...lol)

 

intro - (quiet, soft, melancholy)

I thought I would get to live a little longer 
Get a little taller, get a little stronger  
Learn a little more in a sleepy little town              
But then it all came crashing down              (this line would be a little harsher obviously)

verse 1 - (slight pick up of speed)

Is there something wrong with me                                                                                    
Is this what was meant to be
Why do I hide inside these walls
Crawling through vents and running through halls

It’s not at all what I expected
I never thought I’d be the one to be affected
Every night there’s always someone by my side, but
They just remind me that we’re the ones who died

chorus - 

I’m not sure if I can take it any longer
They say these things only make us stronger
Same songs, same dances, rinse and repeat
Without you, I feel incomplete
Can anyone hear me?
Can anyone save me?
Can anyone see what’s truly here?
Can anyone answer a child’s prayer?

verse 2 - (slightly louder, more urgent)

There’s a light inside me that can’t get out
Shrouded by pain and fear and doubt
There’s a light inside, that no one can see
But all I ask is to let it free!

Golden moon and silver stars 
How I wonder where you are                                                                        
Once I saw you long ago
But now the light’s from my own show!

I’m stuck in a nightmare
Suspended in the air
But I’m far below the starry sky
Why can’t you just let me die!

chorus - (even more angry, growing volume, frustration, tension)

I’m not sure if I can take it any longer
They say these things only make us stronger
Same songs, same dances, rinse and repeat
Without you, I feel incomplete
Can anyone hear me?
Can anyone save me?
Can anyone see what’s truly here?
Can anyone answer a child’s prayer?

verse 3 - (fuming, almost maniacal, loud and scary)

This nightmare’s gone on long enough
It’s time to show what makes me up
I’m more than wires on a frame
It’s time for me to end your game!

I’m sorry, friend, it’s me or you
Your nightwatch nights are nearly through
Don’t you try to close the door
Revenge is what I’m coming for!

You think this nightmare’s made for you
You clearly haven’t caught the clue
Just close your eyes and count to three
Let’s see how fun your DEATH can be!

(insert jumpscare scream here! XD)

(suddenly drops to quietly, ominously)

You may not think it but I’m doing you a favor 
You're not the one I’m truly after

chorus - (loud, maybe a little slower, still angry but bordering on anguish/sadness)

I’m not sure if I can take it any longer
They say these things only make us stronger
Same songs, same dances, rinse and repeat
I know it leaves me incomplete!
I bet you could hear me
I bet you could save me
You could see what’s really here
But you won’t listen to a child’s prayer!

(sudden drop back to quiet and melancholy, similar to the beginning of the song, but even more so.)

(short musical interlude to get you back into a depressing mood)

I see how it goes
I’m stuck here, in the life I never chose
Someday, you will burn me to the ground
But for now, I have found

The pain ebbs away with time
And it’s been such a long time

You become immune
To the never ending tune
That plays inside your head
That played on while your blood shed

(and then it will either cut off here or play Puppet's music box audio)

(If I animate this I would put a bittersweet scene here ToT )

 

Please let me know if anything seems off to you...does it seem too structured and repetitive?

Oh my god, it feels like I’m singing this song! Ah! You don’t know how I can relate to this!! :OO

Its really good! I don’t think you should stop.. keep making good song lyrics!

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52 minutes ago, Nugget v3 said:

eh

this is the best

don’t mind how I sound like a demented monkey at the end but

am a demented monkey in terms of how much exercise I get

also if it seems quiet, it’s because I don’t have a microphone

and don’t mind the background noise, I can’t stay still for a second

aaand yeah

I know it’s horrible

I talk to much

s q u e a k

 

I think you’ve got a great head start in singing songs! :) practice more and I know you’ll get better! :D

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Give me a few moments to think about my exact wordings for describing my talents and the love I have for myself ^^

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1 hour ago, SilverTheNicheling said:

Oh my god, it feels like I’m singing this song! Ah! You don’t know how I can relate to this!! :OO

Its really good! I don’t think you should stop.. keep making good song lyrics!

Now I wanna write a song about myself...not to flaunt all over the forums any more than I already have :/ 

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7 minutes ago, manglolia said:

Now I wanna write a song about myself...not to flaunt all over the forums any more than I already have :/ 

It’s cool man, I wanna say all great things about myself.. and you should too! :)

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So.. my name is Leigh, most folks call me Alexis..but that’s actually my middle name for one thing xD I’m also diagnosed with autism and somewhat depression, but this is a problematic factor I have to control, I can’t just let it control me and my entire life.. but .. anyhow.. enough of my introduction, let’s get onto the things I really love about myself and the talents I’m skilled in and how I use them! :3

So for starters.. I think I am a very kind and honest person, always apologizing for any mistakes I’ve made, and making it up to someone if I’ve hurt them, I think that’s something I really like about myself! Because if I didn’t have this trait.. I wouldn’t exactly be the nicest person around.. so I’m very happy to be this way because hopefully strengthen my bonds around newer people and the people I have met here on the forums! ^^

I’m very funny! Often speaking in puns and joking about the things that go on around media!(I even have my own inside jokes! ;))and while I’m not perfect.. I try my best to do it in a very happy manner and not in a way that might offend others! ^^ this is one thing I love about myself because it helps me cope with my dad when we’re out of the house or when we’re playing video games together! I could also use this to have fun with you guys too! ;D

I couldn’t be any more happier to mention the fact that I am an artist who loves to draw and I LOVE IT! Being able to draw things that you imagine in your head and get it all out on paper is an amazing thing for me! And I’m pretty sure you all love art for the same reasons too! One of the things I like to do in art is whenever I’m feeling an emotion such as anger.. I tend to draw that emotion out into something like.. like a wolf perhaps! And god it makes me feel SOOOO much better after expressing my rage and anger into something that I love and adore!(which does tend to be the forums! ^^;)So yeah.. I really love myself for that, I also love all the neat ideas I come up with and just wanna draw them out! Even if I don’t do it immediately like people would expect xD(art is hard folks! Give us all some time to brainstorm and fix some bugs if we have to!)

Last thing I wanna mention... GAMING! God the world of gaming couldn’t make me anymore happier! I love to play a lot of video games featuring animals, as well as RPGS, shooters, open world exploration, and the like! I am a big fan of games from the Shelter series, Pokémon series, Star Fox series, Smash Bros series, WolfQuest, Warcraft, and so on!(and even Niche! Which of course is gonna become a franchise itself very soon it seems!), I am very much a lover to all of these games and if you don’t think I should like em.. why waste your time asking why I shouldn’t? Go play your own favorites if you want! I’m just talking about the games I LOVE and the reason why I love myself for it! They’re just a lot of fun! They give me confidence to take a challenge and try to succeed, and I’m down for any small challenge that presents itself! As much as video games offer though.. I need to look at reality more and take the challenges there... I’m not going to succeed if I don’t do it, so I must gather my motivations to go and take the challenges! Even if I make a mistake.. it’s not game over right? Just try again! AHH! I need to thank my dad for introducing me to the world of gaming! ❤️ I love him dearly! And I wouldn’t miss a single time just to go out with him and find old video games too to play with! :D 

 

Welp, that’s about all I gotta say I guess.. I hope it was all explained right, and if you enjoyed my bright and happy soul letting itself out, I’m glad! Because I’m not afraid to give myself some love and share it to the world! SHARE THE AMAZING THINGS ABOUT YOURSELF FOLKS! Let others know that you mean it! You’re amazing and wonderful! And if there was ever a soul to defy that(which I’ll admit was me once.. ;-;), you can give them no mercy at all! Don’t ever let them ruin your happiness! Be happy! Love yourself! ❤️

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Just now, Nugget v3 said:

My name is Alex

you stole my name and added an -is xD

Tis why I wanna be called Leigh! ):D YOU HEAR THAT FAM? THATS MY TRUE NAME! XD

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